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Reviews for Dial Tone

By : antilogicgirl
  • From AngelTalion on February 07, 2011
    Ok I'm confused was the whole thing with Kakashi just a dream? Part of his fantasy? Or did that really happen?

    Either way I'm loving this story!
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  • From Prism0467 on February 07, 2011
    Damn, that was some fantasy Iruka had! How I wish for an illustration of Kakashi in that getup tied to the headboard and Iruka riding him for all he's worth!
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  • From nekluvshp on February 07, 2011
    You know what would just be awesome, if Kakashi were to show up at Iruka's house wearing exactly what he'd pictured Kakashi in!! I wonder how long it would take Iruka to realize it was literally a fantasy come true?!
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  • From ANON - Just_me on February 05, 2011
    LMAO! Seriously, Iruka, you idiot! Don't start talking dumb. XDDD
    I'm soo curious what's going to happen next. Poor Iruka in a slump for not getting his nightly phonecall.
    In general, moaners are horrible. Especially in the middle of the night. But it's a great subject to write about.
    Great job. Can't wait to read more.
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  • From moodysavage on February 03, 2011
    oh wow I liked that. Definitely want to read more. Usually Iruka and Kakashi are an already established side couple so this is nice seeing their flirting. Wonder what will give Kakashi away?
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  • From nekochannya on February 03, 2011
    Lively and intriguing... Yeah im looking forward for more!!! Round characters and smooth narratives... Wonder how will he know who has been calling... Love Coleridge btw. Update soon.
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  • From AngelTalion on February 03, 2011
    awwww... lol Poor Iruka. I think he scared off his stalker. :(
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  • From tawanawelch on February 03, 2011
    Lol!! Iruka bored the man to death.XD I was thinking a couple of things. First, Kakashi is a great actor in t
    making a few suggestions for Iruka to follow on his little stalker problem. Second, I was thinking maybe Genma is the stalker/pervert since they've been frinds for a while. Last, I thought that maybe if that is the case then Kakashi would turn into the knight in shining armor and save him somehow. Whatever the possibility of outcome, I can't wait to see how it unfolds. I wonder why the caller hung up. Was it overwhelming to hear Iruka talk so much he came too quickly? LOL!!
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  • From RyuEarth on February 03, 2011
    Oh my! *blushes*

    I rather liked Iruka at the end of this (chapter, I hope!). He was so funny lol. And Kakashi's To Do list was priceless.

    I hope that there is more to this! =)
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