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Reviews for Elemental Attraction

By : AvangalineHazel
  • From ANON - Mariah on April 10, 2011
    x33 i love it!!

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  • From ANON - Dyn on March 09, 2011
    Hi there, I've just finished the first two chapters of your fanfiction 'Elemental Attraction'. First off I'd like to say I like it. Secondly, I hope you update soon, though I understand it is not at the forefront of your creative focus. Thirdly, I will certainly read your other fiction as I enjoy your style. It carries with it the gravity of what I know of Naruto (I've only watched the show, never read any manga). That is the light-heartedness and the underlying darker elements. I enjoy how closely it keeps with the original universe and the character's personalities. I've only recently started looking at Naruto fanfiction and was disappointed to see much of it set in AU or "high-school" fics. While I'm sure they have their place, and are probably a popular trend considering how long Naruto fanfiction has been written for, it was not what I was personally looking for in a fic. I also liked that it was very up-to-date with what is currently happening in the show and yet deviates just enough from the cannon plot for it to seem plausible yet still intriguing. A few points of recommendation however, I suggest you do a little proof reading before posting as there were a number of grammatical and spelling errors but that's nothing to be overly concerned about. In conclusion I'm really looking forward to the rest of this fic and how Naruto takes Sasuke's return!

    Cheers,

    Dyn
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  • From ANON - Venus on February 22, 2011
    OMG finish this it has the makings of a GREAT story just the type that I like and the tail and ears tooooo cute me likes very mucho!!!!!!!
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  • From missbri88 on February 16, 2011
    Wow. Your review response cracked me up. Just had to say that.
    Even without fully knowing the outcome of the series, I love when authors ad lib and write something a little new for us. I'm looking forward to more and Sasuke's plans with his return.
    And this fic would be called EA.
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  • From AngelTalion on February 15, 2011
    I think it ended too quickly. But I am loving it. I love kitsune naruto! Heehee As for musey stuff you're welcome to email me any time. angeltalion at hotmail dot com
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  • From randrinawilson on February 15, 2011
    wow! I am actually very excited about where this is going to go. I like the "elemental attraction" part of it. air and fire. they both need each other to exist. now, is it the same for sasuke and naruto?
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  • From ANON - Althydia on February 15, 2011
    Interesting story, and Naruto with fox ears and tail must be pretty cute!
    I hope Sasuke gets rid of Danzo - he's just too creepy and unreliable.
    Also, with all the references to parenting for Sasuke, is this going to be mpreg? I wouldn't mind at all, but you might want to clarify that in the warnings if it is, because it's not to everybody's tastes... And if it is not, will Sasuke be with Naruto but still marry a woman?

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  • From ANON - MyFrandioseEgo on February 15, 2011
    You started well. The first chapter is a bit "ruffled" with some errors and some repetitions "Frustrated with his annoying teammate ...", "Frustrated the Uchiha threw himself..." and spelling errors as "eyes that where to extremely blue, to impossibly beautiful to be.." I started with some critiques (it's something at first glance and I'm not an English speaker), because I want to continue and finish this review with praises. The second chapter is really really good, and the story became more defined, the plot is tangible, and you described your characters so well. From my point of view,it isn't necessary to see more shippuuden, because you choose an AU anyhow. And you choose well. It is so entertaining and refreshing to read a bit angst and a bit of cuteness and humor... So, keep it going, and if some time you need help with an idea or you are stuck and your head is buzzing, well, ask and some of us, your readers will help.
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  • From ANON - moodysavage on February 15, 2011
    This chapter was really funny. I was laughing outright through a lot of this chapter. Naruto in the dressing room scene was just hilarious. And Kakashi being so deadpan serious as he blamed Iruka for Sasuke being all paternal is a riot. I love this kind of humor!

    I've begun reading Admitting the Truth too tho' I've only read chapter 1 so far. I like it too :)
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  • From ANON - Shadowdog85 on February 15, 2011
    My God, but I love this story, please update soon! I've always been a fan of foxy Naruto.
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  • From JaydenNara on February 15, 2011
    interesting so far... i'm curious about where you're going to take this
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  • From NiftyPhoenixChild on February 13, 2011
    This story is great. Think that it will he great once Admitting The Truth is finished! Maybe, just maybe-- you could add a bit of Mpreg? It would still be great once it really kicks off!
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  • From ANON - Gothic Lust on February 03, 2011
    Nice. I like it a lot. Please update soon.

    If Sasuke sees that, he's not going to get any sleep for months, years even... lolz.

    Could you do me a favor, and email me when you update this story again! I'd like to be able to continue reading it. :D Thanks.

    my email: demonchild352 @ yahoo .com
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  • From missbri88 on February 03, 2011
    I'm excited and can't wait to see where you take this while I'm waiting for AtT
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  • From ANON - moodysavage on February 02, 2011
    I haven't read your other stuff (yet) but this is just adorable! I love cranky obsessive Sasuke-in-denial and cute freaking out Naruto. Hope you write lots more!

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