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Reviews for Shadows

By : AngelTalion
  • From bloodshound on June 05, 2011
    typical, self centred Uchiah
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  • From LadyLaran on March 29, 2011
    I think Sai would be perfect for him. Sasuke is destroying Naruto with this, and I don't think Naruto would be able to put up with this for long.
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  • From ANON - Animelover on February 23, 2011
    Pls continue & make sasu suffer ... A lot!
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  • From ANON - dar on February 20, 2011
    Ahhh it's an evil fic!! I want sasuke with naruto but he's such an ass that I don't think he deserves him!!! Soo I would like to see sasuke sufffer!!! I can't wait to read the next chappie thanks!!!
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  • From tawanawelch on January 28, 2011
    I am loathed to say it but, i love a possossive Sasuke. Even though I feel bad for Naruto, Sasuke is a turn on for me when he's like that.^^
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  • From bridmatt on January 26, 2011
    This chapter reads like character bashing of Sasuke. He is excessively awful without a single redeeming positive quality, and without rhyme or reason for how he could have evolved into this sort of bastard. If you wanted to put Naruto into an abusive relationship, I would have rather that it had been with a minor character--someone we don't know as well as Sasuke--because in a canon setting, there needs to be a whole LOT of explanation for why canon Sasuke (whose normal character type is apathetic and asexual) has ended up this way.

    Sasuke's flaws reflect poorly on Naruto and make him look incredibly pathetic for putting up with this. The expected, cliche outcome of all of this, particularly since you have already indicated that Naruto is a bit of a slut and has slept his way through a good number of his friends, is for Naruto to sex his way into happiness, either by transforming Sasuke, or more likely, by embarking on an affair (or a series of affairs) until a more worthy seme arrives. At which point, as readers we will all be expected to point and laugh at mean old Sasuke when he gets what he deserves and is left behind. (More character bashing.)

    I honestly don't know if I will continue with this fic or not. Perhaps if Sasuke becomes a more rounded character, or if you avoid plot cliches. Otherwise, I was very disappointed with the characters in this.
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  • From moodysavage on January 25, 2011
    argggg... there is no way I want Naruto pining away for Sasuke in this. This sounds like a story where Sasuke learns to regret how he treated Naruto (as he should) and Naruto finds someone to truly love him in an open relationship. Can't wait to see it lol
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  • From JtheChosen1 on January 25, 2011
    Wow you made Sasuke a true bastard...I love you lol. Can't wait to see him get his due!
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  • From roro237 on January 25, 2011
    I hate Sasuke in this! Poor Naruto!! You're good you. You always bring out strong emotions in me with your stories:) I love that about you:) Thanks for sharing:) Now tomorrow at work I'll have this story suck in my head. I'll be wishing I could shake some sense into Naruto head ^_^
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  • From ChiyokoChan on January 25, 2011
    AAAHH Sasuke!! That bastard is hurting Naru-Chan again!! :'(

    I love the chapter and can't wait for the next one! :3
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  • From setoswifey on January 25, 2011
    Poor Naruto...he just cant win. I like it so far and Im interested to see where you are going with this.
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  • From MyGrandioseEgo on January 25, 2011
    It's interesting and I like it. Many stories that had covered Naruto/Sasuke relationship, with an extreme dominant and abusive Sasuke, showed a victimized Naruto. I like many of these stories, but I think that your story will be that and more. I like sunny Naruto I and truly believe that this kind of ever optimistic people really exists. But when they fall into despair, into darkness of depression, well, they fall hard. I'm very curious about the future. Of course, of this story.
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