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Reviews for Yellow

By : KitsuneArasi
  • From hellangelhellina on June 09, 2011
    i like it. it' cute so far.
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  • From moodysavage on January 22, 2011
    This was so cute!
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  • From veryloudanimal on January 18, 2011
    Aww, this is looking cute already :3
    I love GarraxNaruto, keep it up!
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  • From nekluvshp on January 16, 2011
    So, I have to agree with Prism0467 that the story is a little confusing. Gaara never introduced himself to Naruto and yet the blonde knows his first and last name. Althought, based off the end of chapter 2, I'm guessing that someone had already told Naruto who Gaara was and what he looked like. But other than that, I like it. The summary is more than enough to draw anyone in so they can see what the hell you're talking about. And I love that song!!!
    Rubber ducky you're the one, you make bathtime lots of fun! Rubber ducky you're my very best friend its true!!
    My sister and I used to listen to a tape of that song at my grandma's house all the time!!!
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  • From AngelTalion on January 16, 2011
    awww that was sweet!! I liked it a lot!
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  • From Prism0467 on January 16, 2011
    Your first chapter is confusing. Naruto introduced himself as if he and Gaara had not been previously acquainted. I know that Gaara did not reciprocate, and yet, Naruto referred to him as 'Sabakuno' afterward. How did Naruto know his name if they didn't know each other?
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