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Reviews for Salvation

By : Darkprism
  • From ANON - nightwhispers (on y!gal) on March 20, 2013
    Dear god, this story had be sobbing the first time I read it and nearly did again this time. It's so...I don't even have words for it. It hurts so much but at the same time feels so right. (And then I just laughed out loud because I didn't mean to be referencing the D/s nature of your works.) Ugg, I love your writing so much. I often have to take breaks because it can tug at my heart so much. I don't even know what does it. Maybe it's the subtlety of your writing that makes the emotions that much more powerful. They creep up in intensity without you noticing and then suddenly you're just like, oh shit, I'm feeling way too much about fictional characters right now. Hahah, but it's soooo good. I love it, thank you. And this piece just makes me wish you had given them a full story. God, I know you wrote a lot for them, with the three Breaking pieces, but I just want to know everything. I want to know Sasuke's past and what is it, exactly, that has him so fucked up. And then I love love love how he is with everyone else, Shika in particular. I also read Undercurrents on here, and, really, I should have reviewed that, because oh my god, soooo much love. And yes, I think I will go write a review for it. Ugg, I really cannot say enough. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. :)
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  • From ANON - Tarn Vedra 5 on February 24, 2011
    Awww... so cute... They so adore each other... Hm... I always think how would others react to see this side of Sasuke...
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  • From Ajablue on February 12, 2011
    Simply beautiful.
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  • From ANON - lo on January 17, 2011
    That was very sweet. I love what you have done with the Naruto characters, the personalities you have created are staggering. I really love reading about these relationships. Great work.
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  • From ANON - Curry on January 17, 2011
    I really appreciated this piece from you, thank you! It was a good read. It portrayed aspects of the relationship that few authors notice.
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  • From ANON - Jezabel-Swan on January 17, 2011
    Really needed to read something like this, puts you in a good space...makes you feel all warm and fuzzy.
    Beautifully written, it produced lovely emotions and suspense I found...maybe it was just me. I really got the image of Naruto dancing (because that guy doesn't just WALK) on egg shells around Sasuke, and it was a brilliant contrast to the stoic anger Sasuke emitted earlier in the piece! I really appreciated this lovely piece of writing, made my day actually!
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  • From tawanawelch on January 16, 2011
    That was beautifully written. I felt every emotion u you put forth of Naruto's and Sasuke's. You made feel just as at home as they felt. I loved the way u described everything. I seriously need to read ur other stories. I've also seen ur other fandoms and will check them out as well.^^
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  • From foreploy on January 16, 2011
    I woke up, made blueberry muffins, logged into aff, figured what the hell, and looked to see if anything new was up. I'm so glad I looked. I love this new side of Naruto and Sasuke. I love the way you write angst and romance and make it so real and true and honest. I love that Naruto wasn't by any means and expert or always right in how to care for Sasuke, but he keeps trying. I even love how by the end of this fic I was teary, and desperate for more of your work.

    Never stop writing and I'm sorry my reviews are always such drivel.
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  • From ANON - Akira on January 16, 2011
    Nice story, totaly love it.
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  • From ANON - dasher on January 16, 2011
    Beautiful
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 15, 2011
    Simply one word, amazing, the relationship between Naruto and Sasuke was so emotionally touching. I loved it!
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  • From nivell on January 15, 2011
    Very, very lovely. I'm glad we got a little insight into Naruto and Sasuke's past. Sasuke may strike some people as being a snotty, selfish character in your universe but he had to go through a lot of pain from his past and it's lovely to see these two so in love with each other. They're like my favorites in your universe...poor Jiraiya though. It's sad that he died. Hope to see more of this couple later on.=)
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  • From LadyLaran on January 15, 2011
    Very beautiful and emotionally charged. I loved this very much.
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