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Reviews for The Mating Dance

By : AngelTalion
  • From AliceWinter09 on May 18, 2011
    Absolutely loved this fic! ^^
    Are you writing a sequel to this by any chance? If so id be honoured to read it. If you are still looking for a beta or need a beta anytime please contact me at alicewinter09@gmail.com . Sequel pleasepleaseplease
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  • From ifXY on April 11, 2011
    IIII freaking loved it! x]

    Woman, i love you for writing such inspiring fics. I should kidnap and u and have as my muse just for that. :P

    haha, just kidding xD i'm sure u'd do well just where u are, and u are!

    please keep on writing amazing bits like these in the future xD
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  • From sainmoth14 on February 14, 2011
    i was loving this until the inuyasha mix in but its still a good story
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  • From perfect_blue_rogue on January 24, 2011
    muhahahaha gotta love a S/I/N pairing. naruto in between two Uchihas is nothing short of pure hotness. an ukefied naruto just turns the heat up to major smexiness.
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  • From roro237 on January 23, 2011
    Oh! WoW! I didn't see that coming. I liked that Itachi didn't have to die.(1) Kakashi and Kiba you naughty girl:)(2) The Lord of the Dog Clan Sesshomaru loved it:) I love Inuyasha to.(3) Both Uchiha brother icing on the cake:) Those three things were great in this story! ^_^
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  • From roro237 on January 23, 2011
    All I can say is wOw! I can't stop reading!! I'll write you later:)
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 23, 2011
    Is there going to be more chapters or is this it.
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  • From moodysavage on January 23, 2011
    The end? The end? Wait... there's still Itachi's question left! Epilogue epilogue (singing & doing a little dance) I sense an epilogue. Besides, we HAVE to see how Kakashi passes the right to protect Naruto over to the Uchiha's AND how Sasuke & Itachi react to Kakashi & ESPECIALLY Kiba since they know Naruto has slept with them. And uh...mentioned Kiba while they were...ahem mating. I imagine it's a good thing Kiba is dating someone or they MIGHT have wanted to pound him a bit. lol This was just so awesome!!! Thanks!!!
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  • From tawanawelch on January 23, 2011
    Thank you so much for giving us both brothers. It was a really delectable treat. It was very hot and carnal, I enjoyed it.~melts~
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  • From nekluvshp on January 23, 2011
    As adamant as I was on Sasuke, I suppose I can live with the fact that you went with SIN. At least Sasuke got to go first!!!! That made me happy.
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  • From ShiroisoshiteKuroi on January 22, 2011
    I love Naruto and InuYasha!
    I would be pleased as punch to be your beta.
    I haven't posted any stories yet, but I plan on posting a ton as soon as I find my flash drive!
    T_T
    You can interview me if you'd like...
    :D
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  • From moodysavage on January 22, 2011
    wow...that's some debate going on. angeltalion you have a gift because your writing has gotten very strong opinions and feelings from your audience (yes all us slavering fangirls). My two cents (though it's really not worth that much...) I voted for SIN because I don't think it's that farfetched. Naruto is ALWAYS helping others and I think that dream of his was a mix of both Sasuke and Itachi. He's connected with both of them. And with Itachi being exonerated I totally think it works. And his instincts (smell) are telling him that BOTH of them are suitable for a mate. Huh, I'm starting to feel like cliff notes...I'll shut up now lol. Though I have LOTS of "facts" to back up my opinion lol.
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  • From moodysavage on January 22, 2011
    oh my gosh oh my gosh oh my gosh I LOVE this story! And I vote for both Sasuke & Itachi. (yes yes yes) Thanks sooo much for the quick update. And if you still need a beta I volunteer! Not that your story actually needs very much adjusted but I still humbly offer my services. : )
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 21, 2011
    I want to know whats going to happen.
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  • From shirokitsune25 on January 21, 2011
    ummm...i'm a bit confused....how did sesshomaru get there?? how did he take naru??...other than that its all GOOD! its ok as long as there's gonna be smut in the future chapters its ok with me.. >8D hope you will update soon! ja ne! ;}
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