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Reviews for The Mating Dance

By : AngelTalion
  • From LadyWolf on January 17, 2011
    AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    It was so good until you stopped writing!!!!!

    Of course I want Naru to be with ass Sasuke, but of course it can't be too easy.

    Please have kakashi kick Itachi's ass! Pleaseeeee!!!!!! Just this one time....!

    Post soon...! I'm dyin' over here!!! :op

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  • From nekluvshp on January 17, 2011
    What ever happens, it had better be Naruto and Sasuke are both alive, together, and HAPPY!!!!! Yes, that would make a very good ending!!!
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  • From tawanawelch on January 17, 2011
    Dang it!! I know this Sasu/Naru but damn it if I don't find myself wanting Itachi to win him over. I didn't know he'd be in it. This next chapter will be so exciting!! I can't wait to see what u choose for the ending.X3
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  • From tawanawelch on January 17, 2011
    OMG!! Is Itachi in this?! o.o Oh I'm so glad Sasuke will come for Naruto. I was wondering how it would happen. Will the rest of the team be going eith him? I'm so glad!
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  • From shirokitsune25 on January 17, 2011
    KYAA!!! that was HOT!! even though it was only a dream...hmm...i wonder what were the connection of demons and uchiha's?...hmmm looks like the brother's will be fighting over uke-naru!! XD kyaa!! i can't wait for the next one!! so please update soon! ja ne! ;}
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 17, 2011
    I wanna know what happens. please post again this is getting good
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  • From nekluvshp on January 17, 2011
    Ok, I love this story so much, I'm reviewing again already!!!! I love your kitsune Naruto!!! He's just so cute. I want to hug him and hide him away so he'll be safe from Itachi until Sasuke finds him!!! I noticed you didn't have any warnings so we don't really know what to expect but I really hope you might make this mpreg. I love mpreg stories. EEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!! I hope these reviews help you write faster!!!!

    ~nekluvshp
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  • From nekluvshp on January 17, 2011
    OH MY GOD!!!!! You have to write chapter 6 tonight!!! I need to know what happens next!!! Please, please, please, please, please, please!!!! PLEASE!!! I might just die if I don't know soon!!! That was just so... ah!!! I don't know!!!
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  • From randrinawilson on January 17, 2011
    please dont let Itachi get to naruto!!! He wont treat him right. He will jus kidnap him and abuse him. Not right at LL. Please make it so that sauke gets there first. although a little itachi/sauke showdown over naruto would be awesome to read!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 16, 2011
    Poor Naruto. I wanna see what happends next.
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  • From Dorkchic on January 16, 2011
    Awwwwww. I hope that Naruto can help Sai not be so sad. It is also curious that Naruto cannot remember where he was. He could remember that he was being followed by two ninja, but not that he went to the Uchiha district or that he had to leave the district before Neji found him. I could understand not knowing where he was in the district. Or maybe Naruto just didn't want to say where he had been. Pet peeve... the plural of ninja is ninja, no 's' on the end! I don't think you did it. I was just ranting.

    I think if just Sasuke's scent was enough to help Naruto endure his heat then when they actually run into each other it should be pretty halarious. Naruto drifting toward Sasuke in a daze sniffing the air like a perverse version of Toucan Sam and Sasuke giving the Uchiha version of standing there with his mouth hanging open with his eyes wide and staring. Also looking foward to everyone else's reaction to that scene since they usually just stand there being nervous while Naruto and Sasuke have their angst moment. Sakura is probably not going to deal well and Sai is probably going to have something inappropriate, confused, funny, and right to say about it.

    I think it is sweet how protective everyone is being and wonder how long it takes before Naruto cannot take it anymore and tries to sneak out. Anyway... loved the last chapter and am super looking foward to the next update. Keep up the fabulous job!!!
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  • From tawanawelch on January 16, 2011
    Awww, poor Naruto. Do u think he was instinctually dreaming of Sasuke as the mate with dark hair since he was at the Uchiha district? I'm so glad he's got all his friends and no one dislikes the way he is but still protects and loves him. Thank you so much for early smut, it's greatly appreciated. I really love the story as well. I am really interested in how Naruto and Sasuke will get together as well as how the 'Alphas' approve of letting Naruto go.
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  • From tawanawelch on January 16, 2011
    OMG!! You did it again.X3 I was incredibly turned on with how Kakashi scolded and punished his pet. I was so turned on and got rEAlly excited. You've made Kakashi do that for me. I love Kiba but he better watch out. He's the lesson of a lifetime.XD
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  • From shirokitsune25 on January 16, 2011
    woah! the edited chapter was HOT! thanks for doing it! XD and the fourth one kinda made me fell like it was a filler...btw what was shino's role there?? does he have an "interest" in naruto or just the brotherly kind? well over all it was great! i can't wait to read the next one so please update soon! ja ne! ;}
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  • From tawanawelch on January 16, 2011
    Damn Tali, that was such an erotic, smut-filled chapter. I loved it!!! I got all hot and bothered. Great fun with sexy, dominant Kakashi; he did Naruto just right. I can't wait to see how Shika handles the in heat kit.^^
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