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Reviews for Rip My Heart Out

By : lovel3ssangel
  • From ANON - Kristin on December 22, 2011
    Wow so hot. Greatsex scene. I love the story it is coming along so well. I agree Sasuke needs to come to Naruto's rescue and the village needs to know what the Council did, then the village can either accept them or they can run away together. Whatever you do, do it soon cause I love your writing and this story!
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  • From ANON - blisblop on December 15, 2011
    Wow.Sharp, really togerther hot as hades fic.Tight writing.Good stuff.
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  • From moodysavage on November 27, 2011
    I don't really see either of them staying in the village. Naruto is totally isolated and has no goals left related to the village and Sasuke hasn't been around for years and it was Naruto he was coming home to and not the village. I think Sasuke should bust Naruto out and force the village to admit that they were liars themselves and that the council was corrupt in how they dealt with both Naruto and Sasuke. Then they should both LEAVE the stupid town and live happily ever after somewhere else. Or just leave... they still don't know Sasuke is back... no that won't work... then they would both be missing nins. Arrggg... ok here's the plan... something happens... Naruto saved... something happens... payback... leave village... happily ever after. Yeah.
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  • From moodysavage on November 19, 2011
    ok... this is me giving you the silent treatment *arms crossed and turning my back to you*

    meanie! *great... now the inner toddler is coming out*

    see what happens when you don't leave a happy ending? all my maturity disappears!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 18, 2011
    I loved it, but now you left me wanting more. Please continue adding more.
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  • From moodysavage on January 16, 2011
    arrgggg...(clutching chest)...not Naruto!! Oh my gosh I was VERY glad that Sasuke killed the council members and that he did it for Naruto. And I was all set for the happy ending and Naruto's life improving with those people gone. But now...now Sasuke has to protect Naruto from those ANBU that are coming after Naruto! This CAN'T be a 2 shot...now it has to be a 3 shot! You surprised me again and now...arrgggg Sasuke needs to kick some azz!!!!!!!!!
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  • From tawanawelch on January 16, 2011
    I really like how your title kind of has two meanings, in my opinion.^^ First, the true monsters could be the council for how they've treated Naruto. It can also be Sasuke for doing such a monstrous thing for his one and only love Naruto, and Sasuke not wanting to share his dark side with his love. I like your ending cuz it kind of resolves the devestation a little bit in the right direction, but it still goes back to Naruto being the problem. This is eerie in a way but I reslly enjoyed reading this, thank you. Hope to read more of your work.X3
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  • From lovel3ssangel on January 16, 2011
    Soooo. I'm not sure how to continue... But you liked it? I'm so glad! I havent written a sex scene before, so i was a little anxious... i have a few ideas, and am hoping to have some more review/ideas from you guys :)
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  • From nekluvshp on January 15, 2011
    So, I hope it goes without saying that you will die a very slow and painful death if you do not write more of this!!! Obviously Sasuke's gunna have something to say to the ANBU when they arrive and he's gunna kick their asses!!! Then he can take Naruto and they can run away together and be happy!!!
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  • From ChiyokoChan on January 15, 2011
    HOLYFRICKINGGODOFTHESUPERDELICIOUSDORRITOSANDCURLYFRIES!

    -collapses from major nosebleed and is poked by Naru-

    But argh!! Stupid ANBU being jackasses going after Naru now!!
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  • From ObscurexShadow on January 13, 2011
    Good! Definately kept me on my toes! I kept reading til I was able to find out what happened next.
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  • From moodysavage on January 13, 2011
    I LIKED this : )
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  • From AngelTalion on January 08, 2011
    good? bad?

    ...

    HOT!!! Loved it and I agree Naruto should write porn. Compete with pervy sage! Bwahahaha...
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  • From tawanawelch on January 07, 2011
    That was a really cool twist to the story about what happened with everything Sasuke had done. Damn! Was it HOT at the end, nice.X3
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  • From nekluvshp on January 06, 2011
    K, now that the story was actually there... that was great!!! The sex was soooo hot!! I was a little sad that it didn't continue on after the BJ though. I hope you think adding more to this!! I'd like to see the counsil get what's coming to them!!! And more sasunaru sex of course!! ^_^

    ~nekluvshp
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