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Reviews for His Mysterious Boss

By : bachiari
  • From ANON - Jen on January 06, 2011
    I'm...not really enjoying this story so far. The actual plot isn't really clear (after three chapters, I'd like a better idea of where things are supposed to be going), and the story and characters feel far too yaoi-typical. I don't want to sound harsh, but I feel like Naruto & Sasuke ought to be renamed "uke" and "seme" since their thoughts and actions don't resemble Naruto or Sasuke's so much as they do the absolute stereotype of how ukes and semes should behave. Where, apart from the logic of yaoi-land, would someone fly into a jealous rage over two people having lunch together? And where, apart from yaoi-land, would someone with such a possessive lover be in denial over the nature of their relationship? Stress release? Naruto can't possibly be that dumb. And from the author's notes, it seems like every character in the fic with a penis (except for the old or ugly ones) will end up becoming gay? Siiiigh. Normally I would click the back button and not bother saying anything at all, but your writing style is good. I feel like if you tried, you could do so much better than "yaoi 101" fic.
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  • From loveusender on January 03, 2011
    I do believe that Sasuke is overreacting heavily. Naruto didn't even sleep with anyone and he's just pretending! Sasuke needs to get his temper under control and really talk about his feelings.
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  • From AngelTalion on January 03, 2011
    I just LOVE posessive Sasuke... poor Gaara and Naruto. The whole world is about to blow up and I almost feel bad for Tenten. Neji seems a little posessive of Gaara.
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  • From ANON - Blur on January 03, 2011
    Lol... Poor naruto... What will sasuke do when he saw naruto??? Can't imagine. Lolz
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  • From zekesbabe on January 02, 2011
    As long as Haku gets a mention I'm as happy as a cat in cream lol!

    I have a pet peeve. And I picked it up in your fiction (as I do most peoples' fictions for that matter) Where you say "Shikarmaru could care less of..." he could care less? So he cares? If he doesn't care at all it should be "Shikamaru couldn't care less of..." that way he can't possibly care less because he doesn't care in the slightest... does that make sense? As I say, it's not just you...nearly everyone who writes a story says that and it really does peeve me!

    Other than that, I absolutely love the idea behind the story and Naruto's thoughts of "I could be straight if not for Sasuke" is a concept that...though common, isn't thought of in this context...which makes it very original and very good!

    Hope you update soon!
    Zx
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  • From Dorkchic on January 02, 2011
    I am totally loving this story! Fun to be had for everyone and I cannot wait to see how Sasuke shows Naruto to whom he belongs. I wonder how he is going to manage that without giving Naruto a clue that he actually likes him?
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  • From loveusender on January 02, 2011
    I love how sweet and silky this is. Sasuke is very possessive, but I believe he has underlying feelings for Naruto. Hope he doesn't find out about Gaara!!
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  • From AvangalineHazel on January 02, 2011
    Im really enjoying this which is saying alot since i dont normally like AU stuff. Really like the way your showing the characters realtionships evolving its really evenly paced and there aren't any random jumps in feelings like with Sasuke kind of admitting that he wanted Maruto to add the chan suffix at the end of his name then covering it up with the kissing him, going back to the purly physical aspect that hes comfortable with when it comes to their relationship.
    Keep up the good work, can't wait to read the next chapter and not just because Gaara is my favorite character ever
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  • From ANON - Sandra on January 01, 2011
    I love Sasuke and Naruto's relationship, and now Gaara's plot twist. (Can't wait to read more)
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  • From maegerakawaii on January 01, 2011
    Gaara fidgeting is soooo CUTE!!!! I think it would be amusing if Gaara ends up doing something like kissing Naruto just to try and convince Neji that Naruto really is his boyfriend. Sasuke would go ballistic and "punish" Naruto for the transgression. But I think little would still probably be too oblivious to realize that maybe his boss might have fallen for him too. Anyways, can't wait for the next update!
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  • From ANON - Blur on January 01, 2011
    Cool story! But why would sasuke tell naruto not to fall in love with him? Haha... Can't wait for the next chpt.
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  • From tovah on December 31, 2010
    This story is fabulous keep up the great writing!!!
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  • From zekesbabe on December 31, 2010
    Interesting angle. A bit of switching between first and third but in a way it's not out of place.

    I'm heavily fond of Haku and there just aren't enough stories with him in. Can you try and slot him into the office drama? Besides, having a cross dresser in the office would really spice things up!

    Zx
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  • From nekluvshp on December 31, 2010
    Yes, very nice story. I particularly like the bits in parentheses. As for pairings...idk. You've practically named all the good ones. But I suppose it would be nice to see Sai with someone. He's my favorite little slut so I like him paired with just about anyone. Maybe Itachi? I think that's a pretty cool pairing.
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  • From JaydenNara on December 31, 2010
    interesting so far. im interested in seeing where this goes.

    since your asking about pairings, Kiba and Shikamaru are a great one! my personal favourite actually.
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