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Reviews for The Lucky and The Strong

By : AdrianneLea
  • From ANON - Jewel on June 27, 2014
    Where's the rest of the story? I was really enjoying it. :(
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  • From MisatosPenPen on July 10, 2012
    Okay, I do love this story and especially Kakashi in this one. But let me offer some constructive criticism. (btw, I didn't read the pervious reviews, so forgive me if I restate something someone else said) I was more confused than Sakura in Chapter 2 about what happened. When it was mentioned that they brought back Sasuke's blood and I realized he wasn't at the party, I believed they had killed Sasuke and that's how they got his blood. Then when it was mentioned that Sakura was on a mission against the Lightening and Sasuke was involved, I thought somehow Sasuke had defected to them. Even at this point, I'm not entirely sure how Sakura got from Lightening to Taka. And who gave her the poison? Lightening or Karen? I'm guessing it was the Lightening who raped her, not Suigetsu. And did Sasuke kill Suigetsu? I do know that Juugo was the one who caused the miscarriage.
    It's all well-written, but just lacked a bit of clarity.
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  • From mmeferraro on May 10, 2011
    wow, great plot, awesome skills, cant wait to see how everything plays out
    && i agree, there should be more REVIEWS
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  • From SSShitstorm on March 31, 2011
    Why does this not have more views?


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  • From perihawk on December 22, 2010
    Oh yes. I am QUITE snagged and want MORE.

    Thank you!
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