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By : JaydenNara
  • From ANON - Alex on May 24, 2011
    Just finished chapter 24, as always it was great work on your part! I can not wait to see what Saskue & Neji come up with I'll be waiting in desperation for the next chapter.

    Your Faithful Fan,
    Alex
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  • From ANON - Greyspell on May 23, 2011
    A Snuggly Saturday and a Manic Monday...yeah...I'm not that great with titles so instead I'll just say how much I am loving this story and the play on characters...I'm not usually a ItaKyuu/KyuuIta fan but you make it work well. I am confused about one thing though...does Sasuke know that Naruto's a secret agent and actually 19 yet? I haven't picked up that he does know but...everything that happened with his parents would have made it pretty hard to conceal...anyways, loving the story, keep writing and I honestly can NOT wait for the next chapter. xoxo Greyspell
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  • From ANON - alex on May 23, 2011
    I lied. I would go with either Frustration or Desperate times call for desperate measures :)
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  • From ANON - Alex on May 23, 2011
    And the plotting begins
    hows that for a title? lol maybe the next one should be how to seduce a spy, like your previous one.
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  • From LadySesshoumaru on May 23, 2011
    still lovin the story....and i think as far as a title for the chapter could be is "desperate times call for desperate measures" only beacuse for sasuke to open up to neji he'd have to be at the end of his rope.....great chapter and i can't wait until the next.
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  • From Hotanimeguysfan on May 23, 2011
    chap. 24 Temptation!

    I just LOVED this chapter!! I enjoyed the dojo fighting and would love to see more of it....maybe a steamy session with Naruto teaching Sasuke some defensive moves to help him fend off his never ending line of crazy fan girls!! Lol Poor Sasuke had to go through a lot this chapter....first the temptation Naruto put before him only do find himself denied then to face the trauma of hearing too much information for his virgin mind to process. Then finally to streatch beyond his usual self and reveal his innermost thoughts to a close friend. Sasuke had a very busy and rollercoaster ride this chapter and I totally enjoyed each and every minute of it!! =) The smut was very STEAMY!!! SWEET!!
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  • From AngelTalion on May 23, 2011
    I don't know about a title... Frustration comes to mine... LOLPoor Sasuke all that hot tan flesh and he's not aloud to play with it. *sighs* I don't blame him and Itachi should completely punish Kyuu for his misbehavior! THen I think both Uchiha deerve to get to watch the Uzumaki brother's sparring... purely for the raven's amausement. BWAHAHAHAHA "Dance Monkey's DANCE!!!"
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  • From smint45 on May 23, 2011
    That was so great!!!! As for a name what do you think of 'heating up' or something along the line? Well it is just an idea, i'm not good at naming chappies^^ Anyway that was wonderfull and I really loved the fight of naru and Kyuu it was great!!!! And I really can't wait for the next chappie!!! See you next week!!!!
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  • From missbri88 on May 23, 2011
    I'm a die hard fan and this chapter was just so fluffy and cute. I just wanted to hug it and squeeze it and love it. Lol.
    'Plan of Action' is the only idea for a chapter name I have, but I can't wait to see more! :) *holds up bowl for more*
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  • From moodysavage on May 23, 2011
    Cute!!! That was so cute!!! Loved this chapter! That scene where they were taking pictures of the brothers was just adorable and even though it made me nervous when Sasuke ditched Naruto... it's funny to picture him and Neji plotting how to seduce Naruto. How long till Sasuke is 18? And I so wish I could have seen the shirtless spar between Naruto and Kyuubi...*sigh*

    Anyway, about ways to improve...what specifically? This story is awesome! I think you do a great job of interweaving the serious with the fun and sexy. Each chapter you write progresses the plot and shows more of the character developement. I do like when they interact with other characters outside of the main four two so I wouldn't mind seeing more of that... but seriously... it's awesome :)
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on May 23, 2011
    Naruto is one hell of a bodyguard I see...
    You can beat him with 3 bowls of ramen! ^_^

    Good chapter. It was very needed and relaxing after all the sad parts.
    Now I hope that Naruto will finally tell Sasuke about their age difference.
    And now about the title, I think that 'the fluffy part' or whatever you called it is good enough. After all, who cares about the chapter titles...
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  • From Hotanimeguysfan on May 18, 2011
    chap. 23
    I really liked this chapter and I think you did an amazing job for Kuu's and Itachi's first time together......wicked grin.....just loved how Itachi took matters into his own hands!! =)
    Think Naruto is going to have a tough time keeping Sasuke pure till his birthday though!!lol
    Ya know he could always gift Sasuke with himself for a birthday present!!! hehehe and it would totally serve him right for making Sasuke wait so long!! Lol =) ^-^ hehe
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  • From Hotanimeguysfan on May 18, 2011
    Naruto's past trauma....these are a list of the songs that come to mind.
    What kids go through-
    Hell if for children by Pat Benatar
    We Are By Ana Johnsson
    Concrete Angel By Martina McBride

    The pain they feel-
    I can't do this by Plumb
    I'm Not Alright by Sanctus Real
    I Stand Alone- (sorry I have no idea who sings this)
    Stand In The Rain by Superchick
    Beauty From Pain by Superchick

    Strength to go on-
    Courage by Superchick
    Last Night You'll Spend Alone by Skillet
    Never Alone by BarlowGirl

    Looking forward to-
    There Will Be A Day by Jeremy Camp
    What Faith Can Do by Kutless

    Days you feel strong and can take on the world-
    Outcast by Kerrie Roberts
    Avalanche by Manafest

    When you want to sing cause your happy your alive-
    Manifesto by The City Harmonic

    Maybe its just me...but I have many songs that go through my head when I read very intense stories that just pulls at my heart and makes me cry with it.
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  • From Hotanimeguysfan on May 18, 2011
    Chap 21 Guilt

    I liked how the chapter developed and could see how difficult it all was for Naruto to talk about and even more so for Sasuke to hear. Its like a double edge sword....you want to know the truth...but when you hear it you wish you didn't know and could go back to living in the dark about it. I think the biggest thing Naruto is keeping from Sasuke is just how he was tortured....I get the impression...his first time.....was at the hands of the snake freak and that as such a young boy the trauma would leave lasting scars that would never heal. Some scars don't ever heal and can never be repaired no matter how much time passes. He can sometimes ignore the pain or distract himself from it with keeping himself busy and focused in life...but he will always run into triggers that call the memory to mind and then the battle will start all over again for him to try and forget and to suppress it. Its a fight he never completely get away from.
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  • From Hotanimeguysfan on May 18, 2011
    Chap 20
    This chapter was so full of sadness and grief....you could feel how empty Sasuke is feeling and dead to the world inside....as well as how worried Naruto is and his feeling of helplessness. I think you did an amazing job turning Sasuke into the bastard we all know and love.
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