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Reviews for This is Not a Game [Complete]

By : JaydenNara
  • From ANON - Jen on January 10, 2011
    Woah. Naruto's got it bad. About your question... there aren't necessarily any characters I really want to see in the fic, so just do what makes most sense for the story. (That's universally good advice, I think.)

    As for the pairings... the obvious ones are Naruto/Sasuke (of course), Neji/Gaara, and Kyuubi/Itachi, but I think it would be too much if everyone fell in love with the people they are protecting/the people protecting them. Since Naruto/Sasuke is already a given, if you want to do one of the other bodyguard pairings, do either Neji/Gaara or Kyuubi/Itachi, but NOT both. Personally, I'm a fan of unexpected things, so if for example, Neji were to fall for Kyuubi (instead of the expected Gaara), that'd be kinda awesome (and would make for some interesting complications), but that's just me. (Heh. Kakashi x Kyuubi is red-hot argumentative love?)
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  • From smint45 on January 10, 2011
    That was so great!!!! I really like this story!!!! I'd love to see some Gaara Neji!!! And for charas Jiraya and Juugo would be great!!! I really love those two!!! See you again soon!!!!
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  • From AngelTalion on January 10, 2011
    um you've lined up all my favorites! LOL Sasu/Naru; Neji/Gaara ; Shika/Kiba sounds LOADS of fun... and your Kyuubi could be super hot with Itachi... Can't wait for the next chapter and more interaction! :)
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  • From nekluvshp on January 10, 2011
    Awesome story!!! I hope you update soon and often!!! As for pairings, I hope to see Itachi and Kyuubi together obviously!!! I just love stories where Kyuubi is Naruto big brother!!!! Especially when they each get their very own Uchiha!!!
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  • From ANON - Jen on January 06, 2011
    I see what you did there. :) I kept wondering just HOW bad Sasuke's fangirls could really be if he has to have constant protection like that (isn't it a bit over the top? they're just teenage girls with crushes!), but I let it go since the fangirls are a common joke in Naruto fics, but then with Sasuke's reaction at the end of the chapter and the supposed kidnapping attempts, I'm guessing that he has mistakenly assumed real kidnapping attempts by bad people were the work of his fangirls. If so, that's a really clever way to use the fangirls. Given the way they normally treat him, it makes sense they would be the automatic suspects when something strange (like a kidnapping attempt) occurs. (Who'd believe that some random person was trying to kidnap you?) Sasuke has no clue what kind of danger he's actually in, but his intuition is good enough to know that he should be nervous about something. Let's see how Naruto manages to calm him down (and regain his trust) now! :D
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  • From loveusender on January 03, 2011
    This is turning out so funny and interesting at the same time, It's my favorite story currently..I know things are gonig to get pretty serious soon and I just want Naruto and sasuke to enjoy each other a little more.
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  • From meowkuu2 on January 03, 2011
    on one hand I'm laughing me head off on the other hand "poor sasuke!".. its gonna be hard to calm him down now isn't it?
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  • From smint45 on January 03, 2011
    That was so great!!! I TOTALLY LOVED IT!!! I hope you update soon!!!
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  • From tawanawelch on January 03, 2011
    Oh yeah, code names. Scarecrow, fox and kitsune or maybe churiki?lol.
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  • From tawanawelch on January 03, 2011
    I really love how you incorporated Sasuke's protection with Naruto. It just seemed to flow so right. Kyuubi was right on time with that ride, but I was so excited to see how you would have Naruto handle a group of fangirls on the walk home,lol. Oh well, perhaps next time. You also mentioned Sound. Will they play individual parts in this? I really love Kimimaro, Kidomaro and the twins. Tayuya's cool too.:) Can't wait for the next chapter.X3
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  • From tawanawelch on January 03, 2011
    Whoa!! I thought Naruto jeopardized the mission being so friendly with Gaara. I was relieved to see that it hadn't and that they fell into synche with their own convo. It was so funny when the two reminisced and Naruto got caught up and was about to reveal some humiliating details on Gaara's actions at the party. Then Naruto licking his hand, lol. HILARIOUS!!! I loved that Neji and Sasuke were gaping at the two old friends. Now maybe they'll let Naruto in the clique as it were.


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  • From AngelTalion on January 03, 2011
    I love this fic! I'm always so happy to see an update on it! :) Kyuubi needs to HURRY and explain he met Itachi before Sasuke pukes in his car!

    Now, Kakashi, Kyuubi and Naruto have code names, can anyone guess what they are?

    Kakashi - perv

    Kyuubi - fox

    Naruto - kit
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  • From tawanawelch on January 03, 2011
    I love when Itachi and Sasuke are loving to eachother in a story. The prank was hilarious, I hope there's more to come. I'm so glad to see Neji, Gaara, Shika and Kiba in this as well.
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  • From tawanawelch on January 03, 2011
    Yeah, I definitely like this story. I hope there's lots of action. I wonder who the other agent is.
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  • From tawanawelch on January 03, 2011
    OMG! Those last words were a bit chiiling when all else was described to what they were experiencing. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
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