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  • From ANON - qwerty on January 17, 2011
    Great story so far! Love it! Keep going!
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on January 17, 2011
    It's very much like a 'Time to protect time to kill' Sasu x Naru.

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  • From ANON - akira on January 17, 2011
    sweet chappie update soon!!
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  • From AngelTalion on January 17, 2011
    I loved this chapter... I love that Kyuubi is bassicaly saying fuck the rules, Itachi is hot! HA! Seems like the sort of thing Kyuubi would do. Poor Naruto, he doesn't stand a chance against a hot innocent Sasuke. Suprised Sasuke didn't mind the panting, touchey feely girls on Naruto...

    man I have to catch up on my Naruto!!! They kissed again?! I'm excited just hearing it! LOL
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  • From smint45 on January 17, 2011
    That was absoloutly fantastic!!!! I totally love this story!!!! And Now Naruto knows Orochimaru is after Sasuke since a long time!!!! And they finally get a litle closer!!!! Please update soon!!!! See you again!!!
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  • From tawanawelch on January 17, 2011
    I really enjoyed this chapter. Naruto is a professional but he also likes Sasuke so his job is nice but of course dangerous. I like the playful way Kyuubi tried to get Itachi to makeout with him, hope to see more of that with them.^^ Where will Naruto suggest they go out to next time? Will there be a possible scare there as well? Sorry for jumping so far ahead but I'm excited about this story. I can't wait for the next chapter! X3
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  • From tawanawelch on January 17, 2011
    Oh yeah!! Great codename Kyu!!! It's perfect!!XD
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  • From tawanawelch on January 17, 2011
    I love reading vulnerable Sasuke and strong Naruto. Poor Sasuke being terrified about the ride. Thank goodness he rationalized to trust the brothers. I didn't miss his second guessing. Does Itachi have fears as well as Sasuke or is it just Sasuke? I like uke Itachi also to some degree.^^ Other pairings, Kimimaro and Sai or Shino and Haku or kidomaru, maybe?
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  • From nekluvshp on January 17, 2011
    Great chapter, great story!!!
    I went and watched the new episode you talked about. Did you notice that when they fell back into the water, the splash was shaped like a heart?!?!

    ~nekluvshp
    nekluvshp@hotmail.com
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  • From ObscurexShadow on January 15, 2011
    The code names made me giggle.
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  • From meowkuu2 on January 13, 2011
    yosh! thank you for the update!

    hmmm couples..well, you've got strong hints of kiba and shika, gaara and neji, then kyubbi and itachi....umm i dunno. i guess I'd have to see more how the characters interact and who's an undercover agent versus a normal person
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  • From ANON - alex on January 11, 2011
    oh yeah and one more thing, whyd u put kyuubi as pheonix? idk it just seems random to me. i get naruto-kitusne (duh) and kakashi-scarecrow (duh) but pheonix was random. a kool name n im not complaining, i just wanna know where that one came from lol
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  • From ANON - alex on January 11, 2011
    i agree that kyuubi/itachi would be too obvious. i mean they could get close like best friends cuz they both understand each other (loving their younger brothers to death) but as a couple, meh. same for gaara/neji. heres an interesting idea. put iruka in the story and have a kakashi/iruka lol make iruka one of the people who work for the uchihas or something. a very intuitive servant or something that knows kakashi is up to something, but doesnt know what... hmmm... but that could get complicated lol hey w/e its ur story, write it how u want to... cuz so far its AWESOME!!! just be careful w/making everyone fall for their subjects. too cliche.
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  • From ANON - AJ on January 11, 2011
    Still loving the fic! I can imagine all sorts of awkward situations that could occur with Naruto having private access to cameras in Sasuke's bedroom...

    Um... for pairings I want Naruto/Sasuke, naturally, and whoever else you want! Though I already said I wasn't fond of the idea of Kyuubi/Itachi (it just feels TOO obvious), but that's the only one I'd be "meh" about.

    Sooo can't wait to see where you're going to take this fic!
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  • From ANON - moodysavage on January 11, 2011
    I love love love this!!! Everything about it!
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