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Reviews for This is Not a Game [Complete]

By : JaydenNara
  • From Prism0467 on February 21, 2011
    Ha ha, Shikamaru and Kiba making out and setting off the heart monitor WINS!
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  • From ANON - alex on February 18, 2011
    touche. u make a good point. i thought u were just being a dick lol my apologies
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  • From ANON - alex on February 15, 2011
    oh and ONE more thing
    alienx... WTF r u talking about? geez harsh much. its a story AND a darn good one. good authors r so friggin hard to find. ur thinkin too much, expectin hardcore realism. its a story not a biography
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  • From ANON - alex on February 15, 2011
    ZOMG!! ok FIRST of all... HOW THE HEC DOES SASUKE NOT WAKE UP?! lmao secondly... ZOMG SHIKA NOOOOOOOOOO!!!! thirdly... oh man poor naruto. things r startin to get real serious... im so excited keep'm comin!!! more chappies plz
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  • From ANON - Jen on February 15, 2011
    Ohhh... looks like things are getting serious now. I can't wait to see what Orochimaru has planned. It's good that Sasuke is becoming more confident now; it wounds like he'll need it...

    Hmmm... while I do really enjoy this story, I think AlienX has a point about how compromised Kyuubi and Naruto have made themselves (and their organization), thanks to the latest chapters. Undercover cops, for instance, would never introduce their marks to other undercover cops, let alone a giant party full of them. It's also problematic, from the perspective of an undercover agent, that Kyuubi has quickly gotten himself into a real relationship with Itachi. I expect Kyuubi and Naruto's behavior to end up biting them in the asses big time.
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  • From ANON - moodysavage on February 15, 2011
    I was soooo cheering for Sasuke when he threw that stupid Karin out. GOOD for him standing up for himself. It's about time those girls get intimidated by an angry Uchiha lol. But Shika!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm glad to see Kiba admitting his feelings at least to himself & others but does this mean Naruto is personally in danger or Sasuke who he's watching? Argggg...I want more!!!

    This is so good. I love love love this story!
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  • From AngelTalion on February 14, 2011
    Uh... this fic is like wonderful but slow torture. I love every chapter and I am always left wanting more... like an addiction I just want more as soon as it wears off. LOL
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  • From meowkuu2 on February 14, 2011
    wooo!!!!!!!! that was awesome!! I was scared that Shika wouldn't make it and wow go sasuke!!!!

    I patiently..ish.. wait for ur update!!! ^_^
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  • From tawanawelch on February 14, 2011
    Yeess!!! The action is here!!! This was an exciting, scary chapter. I'm glad for Sasuke's improvement and Shika's recovery. I can't wait to see more Kiba and Shika.^^
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  • From smint45 on February 14, 2011
    That was fantastic!!! Poor Shika has to be shot in narus case!!! But I really love this story and I can't wait to see where this will go and what happens next!!!! See you again soon!!!
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  • From smint45 on February 08, 2011
    That was great!!!! I'm so happy Naruto starts to feel again!!!! I really hope that the scene fom the first chappy will end well!!!1 I want them to have a happy end!!!! And I want the Uchias to finally find out what the usumakis are so that this secret is out of the way!!!! Please update soon!!!! See you!!!
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  • From ANON - moodysavage on February 08, 2011
    I love these characters. We have gotten to know all of them and it's so fun to read about them. I wonder if Gaara with remain alone? Offhand I can't think of anyone to pair him with.
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  • From AngelTalion on February 07, 2011
    LOLOLOL THATS gonna go over great. Protective parents LOVE when you don't come home, don't call, and have a hang over. LOVED this chapter. Shika & Kiba need to get with the program!
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  • From ANON - moodysavage on February 01, 2011
    gosh this story rocks... I'm always so excited when a new chapter goes up. Drunk Naruto & Sasuke were just so cute and hilarious. I like everything about this story and the pacing of the story is just perfect.

    I haven't tried to guess where the story is going because I like to be surprised. lol however sometimes I do laugh at myself and say that this story has it all... all that stuff that teachers try to teach kids to do for a good story you just do naturally. The characters and their personalities are introduced really well with the story and plot interwoven in. And the plot progression is fantastic. I can plot the rising action points and see how they are building the story lol.

    You really do have a gift for story telling.

    Once in awhile there will be a subject/verb agreement thing but those really don't matter much at all to the flow of the story and only once in a blue moon is there a wrong word choice (those stupid homonymns of course.)You had one of those right before everyone yelled SURPRISE as they waited with "baited breath." Should be "bated."

    Course who am I to talk... I spelled "a lot" as "alot" till my professors pointed it out and I still have the worst grammar when I talk.

    If you ever write a book someday...I want to read it!
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  • From AngelTalion on January 31, 2011
    There are so many endless posobilities! Honestly your's is one of the few I am NOT speculating on... mostly because I just enjoy the suprise of what a new chapter holds. For a second there I really thought the boys had started the party early and were getting snuggly. LOL my heart breaks for Naruto... its not that he doesn't WANT Sasuke its that he won't let himself have the boy because of his goal to destroy Orrochimaru. I really worry that whatever develops between them will get destroyed. I don't want Sasuke to believe that Naruto wanted him to get to Orochimaru... not for Sasuke. *sighs* SEE now you made me speculate and I'm sad... so more party please its hilarious!!
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