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Reviews for This is Not a Game [Complete]

By : JaydenNara
  • From LadySesshoumaru on April 04, 2011
    AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH....Why why why why....no more please the cliffy are killing me....i can't get enough of this story thou....i love you writing....please update soon...please and thanx you....great job
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  • From ANON - silverfox on March 23, 2011
    ACK!! Poor Mikoto and Fugaku! I hope he just dumps them at the manor, but still alive, that way, Kyuu or Tsunade can heal them. And, no, I don't think Naruto and Sasuke are moving too fast. I think Naruto should struggle a bit more with his emotions, but we all know that when Sasuke wants something, he'll get it. ;-) I can't wait for your next update, I'm waiting for a lot of stories to update right now, and you're the only person who updates frequently. You have my thanks. ^_^ Update soon!
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  • From Carousel on March 23, 2011
    This is such an amzing, epic story. I need moreeeeeee! I love all the pairings and just everything. I especially loved what Sasuke said this last chapter: "I am only a pale reflection of your light, and I cannot exist without you Naruto."

    More please.
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  • From tawanawelch on March 22, 2011
    OMG!!! Why did they have to get shot?!!T.T Now I guess the beans will be spilled on the bros. Is this quickly leading to what we read in the prologue? I'm getting scared now but excited at the same time. I know Kakashi is going to be angry that he wasn't there. Fugaku should be angry with himself for leaving so fast, what was the hurry?? lol.
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  • From tawanawelch on March 22, 2011
    Aww, I'm so happy Sasuke knows about Naruto. Now he won't be so afraid he's lost him. I don't want Sasuke to feel that way. Hopefully Sasuke can find a way to talk to him and clear the air about their feelings, but I guess all in good time. Is Kisame going to try something again with Sasuke? I kinda like that tension but I guess again one thing at a time,lol.XD
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  • From ANON - qwerty on March 22, 2011
    AHHHH! Not okay! Not okay to end it there! **pouts** Such a good chapter though, so intense!!
    Keep going!!
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  • From ANON - moodysavage on March 21, 2011
    arrgggg!!!!!!!!!!!!!! very happy for naruto and Sasuke...but...arrrrggggggggg!!!!!!!!!!!!!! they are gasping for breath... not dead yet. and I can't picture Kakashi being slow to get after them or taking it well that they were murdered on his watch. miraculous save? yes? yes?
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  • From ANON - Jen on March 21, 2011
    As characters, I don't think Naruto & Sasuke are moving too fast since they're teenagers and everything is "epic, dramatic, and the end of the world when you're that age," as you said. But to be honest with you, the writing itself is what's gotten too melodramatic for my tastes. I'm referring to stuff like this: "'You are my sun, and I am your moon,' Sasuke said confidently, his burning onyx eyes meeting the cerulean stare again. 'I am only a pale reflection of your light, and I cannot exist without you Naruto.'" No one would *ever* say something like that, least of all a teenager. Honestly, with dialogue like that I almost couldn't finish the chapter. Try and avoid purple prose as much as possible. Instead of setting the mood/tone of a scene, by going overboard, it kills it.
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  • From arianauchiha23451 on March 21, 2011
    OMG... i was wondering when you were going to bring Orochimaru into the story... and to have him pose as the Uchiha driver that is awesome..... you totally have me hooked now.... please hurry and update as soon as you can
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  • From smint45 on March 21, 2011
    Jay finnally we get to the action!!!! But sadly for that to happen Mikoto and Fukaku had to die :( But still!!!! I so can't wait for Sasuke and Itachi to find out about Kyuubi and Naruto!!! And that will probably happen in the near future with both their parents dead!!! So please hurry and update soon!!!! I want more!!!!
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  • From AngelTalion on March 21, 2011
    SERIOUSLY!!! OMG. I just... SERIOSULY???? You had SO better have the next bit written already!!! GAHHHHHHHHHHHH
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  • From arianauchiha23451 on March 20, 2011
    awesome chapter just like the rest of them.... i am so glad that kyuubi was able to tell some of the backstory to naruto.... now i just need to know what happens next... please hurry and update as soon as you can
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  • From moodysavage on March 14, 2011
    you know that movie where that boy can suddenly understand what the animals are saying... and the dog asks "can I have a cookie? can I have 2 cookies? no wait...can I have 10 cookies?!"

    that's what I feel like. can I have one chapter? can I have 2 chapters? no wait...can I have 10 chapters?!

    *sigh* I've been reduced to begging like a dog.

    I really love every word of this story.
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  • From bloodshound on March 14, 2011
    considering the prolog....i'm not entirely sure i want to keep reading to find out how they came to that point... not unless they get rescued or something at the end. The story itself is interesting, i'm jsut not much into torture. :P
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 14, 2011
    So now we know some of the history for the Uzumaki boys. It's seems pretty harsh for Naruto, but I was beginning to wonder if it was worse... maybe some form of kidnapping and molestation that caused him to be so distant. My mind was putting poor Naruto through some kind of ringer.

    Can't wait to see Sasu break down some walls.
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