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Reviews for This is Not a Game [Complete]

By : JaydenNara
  • From AngelTalion on April 25, 2011
    GAHHHH!! Poor Naru.. Poor Sasuke! I love your Itachi in this story. I love seeing him as the protective loving big brother. *sighs* well done!!
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on April 25, 2011
    Poor Naruto. He had his happiness for what? Five minutes? Fifteen? And then once again he is alone. He should give Sasuke some space, leave him to sleep alone in his bed and move to the couch or to the floor or something, just to see if Sasuke would even notice... Naruto doesn't deserve such a treatment. He killed the guy who had killed their parents and saved them. Sasuke could think about it.... but he always was a bastard after all.

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  • From ANON - Anon on April 25, 2011
    As sad as this chapter was, I enjoyed it as always. Looking forward to the next one! :)
    And yeah, I'd noticed the lack of kissing... But can you really blame them? Makes it more realistic at any rate :P
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  • From AngelTalion on April 21, 2011
    I'm SO behind on my reading but OMG I just want to cuddle Sasuke up tight and really do the same for Itachi... they're so lost and broken and in shock and I worry about what sort os strain this is going to put on Naruto and Sasuke...
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  • From tawanawelch on April 20, 2011
    I loved the vulnerability of the bros. Uchiha. I find it so adorable even under the sad circumstances. Poor Kakashi got ripped a new one. He's grieving as well and hopefully Iruka can comfort him soon. Will there be a bit of a lull between now and the next I incident? Will they be able to grieve before Orochimaru strikes again?
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  • From moodysavage on April 18, 2011
    Poor Sasuke. And I felt so bad for Kakashi.It seems like he's had a sad time of it all the way around.
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  • From Carousel on April 18, 2011
    This last chapter is so sad. D: Poor Sasu-chan is so depressed and Itachi-kun is helpless. I hope that things get a bit better for the Uchiha brothers.
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  • From smint45 on April 18, 2011
    Yay new chappie!!! That was great although really sad!!!! I really hope S'uke will be ok!!! Hope that Naruto can help him!!!! Please give us more soon!!! See you!!!
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  • From AngelTalion on April 13, 2011
    As long as Kakashi was with them, I din't see Mama & Papa Uchiha going any where... as soon as they ditched him I went. "Nooo stupid stupid stupid!" I just hope witht he loss of their parents finding out their boyfriends were sent inas their body gaurds isn't going to screw things up too badly.
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  • From ANON - silverfox on April 12, 2011
    I'm not going to throw anything at you, although I am slightly put out at such a short chapter, but I'd rather have a wonderfully written (cuz it was) short chapter than no chapter at all. :) I really like the interactions between Kyuu and Itachi and Naruto and Sasuke. I feel like a kid in a candy store, all wide-eyed and slack jawed, watching them being SO CUTE towards each other. This story is so cute, with just the right amount of angst to make things interesting. I love protective!Naruto. It's amazing. I was surprised (angry) at first when Mikoto died, but by the time Fugaku died, with his last words, I was accepting it. I think the way Fugaku died with Kyuu there was perfect. And Naruto's reaction to it was brilliant. You're the only one of my favorites that's updating right now, so I'm pleased as punch for your fast updates. Keep 'em up! ^_^
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  • From Carousel on April 12, 2011
    Noooooo! Itachi and Sasuke's parents are dead. D: You're too cruel.

    At least the lovers are all right. If any of the lovers die, I'll die too. Be kind...and tell us where Naru got his scars.
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  • From ANON - moodysavage on April 11, 2011
    I love this story but I have to ask...where's Kakashi?!? And what the heck was Fugagu thinking leaving Kakashi behind when he was aware that his family was being watched?! Arggggg!!!!!!!
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  • From tawanawelch on April 11, 2011
    I was very surprised to hear the 2nd gunshot. I thought this would be where Naruto was to be tortured and he'd tell Sasuke 'this is not a game.' Well I'm definitely relieved that the assasin is dead. I can't wait to see how they live together. That will be fun!
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  • From smint45 on April 11, 2011
    Oh god I'm so glad you didn't kill Naruto off!!! But still the Uchia brothers can't know? You are killing me with suspension!!!! I want more!!!! Please update soon!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 11, 2011
    I'm curious... If the father knew just who the Uzumaki's were and suspected their reason for being there, would he not guess that he and his wife were also under protection since Kakashi showed up the same time that the Uzumaki's did? And if he did realize this, why not wait for Kakashi to accompany them when they left?

    Speaking of Kakashi, where the heck is he now? Did someone else manage to incapacitate him? I don't think that would be the case because it sounded like Kimimaro had been waiting for an opening where Kakashi happened to have left the Uchiha's unattended, instead of having created the opening himself. Why hasn't Kakashi communicated with anyone or even shown up on the scene at the mansion?

    Why would Kyuubi feel the need to hide who he and Naru really are? The Uchiha boys are bound to find out sooner or later if they plan to build a life with them. Also, what exactly is there to hide about who the Uchiha boys are? Itachi has already figured out that he and his brother are not targets for some reason. Is there more to it than that? Keeping them in the dark does not seem right.

    As always, can't wait for the next update.
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