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Reviews for This is Not a Game [Complete]

By : JaydenNara
  • From ANON - silverfox on May 11, 2011
    LOVED IT!! Like always. :) They're going on a date?! Does that mean we'll get to see more SasuNaru dancing action?! I dearly hope so. XD I think you portray Sasuke well, taking into account that this is right after his parents have died. The only thing I saw that was a little out of character for him was near the end when you said he looked at Naruto with 'expressive' eyes. Now, Sasuke's eyes are a lot of things (sexy, endless, dark pools of obsidian), but 'expressive' is not one of them. In my opinion anyway. In this one occasion, with him being insecure and whatnot, I understand, but under normal circumstances, no. :) Hope you update soon.
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  • From ANON - coco on May 10, 2011
    Oh my gosh! They're going on a date! (fangirl scream) That is so cute, but not as cute as them making out right in front of Iruka. I'm still laughing about that^-^
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  • From moodysavage on May 10, 2011
    aw I like this chapter and I'm glad Sasuke isn't being all cold to Naruto anymore...he can be cold to other people lol. And I just love it when someone who knows Naruto gets surprised by his real smile again like Iruka was. I'd forgotten about the trackers. Does that mean Kyuubi gave his to Itachi?
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  • From Carousel on May 03, 2011
    I loved the last chapter and I really loved their first kiss. In regard to Naru's past, I think you did really well. However, I think we need a story behind the scars. Like maybe each of the captors gave him one, or how they got captured in the first place.
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  • From AngelTalion on May 02, 2011
    UGH!!! I love it... poor Naruto! Its heart breaking... he watched it. No not ok at all. Just UGH... no wonder he was like he was. I love the first kiss it was sweet... innocent. Well done! :)
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  • From ANON - silverfox on May 01, 2011
    Yay updates!!! Adding Naruto's father into the mix surprised me, but I like what it did for character development. I'm glad to know what happened to Naruto in at least some detail. And of course, YAY to Naruto and Sasuke's first real kiss! (jumps up and down, clapping hands) It made me wonder, however, who's gonna be the more dominant in the relationship? I'm more partial to SasuNaru, but I think it'll work either way in this story. Hope you update soon!
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  • From moodysavage on May 01, 2011
    I feel bad for Naruto...but also a little stressed. It feels like it's getting close to the prologue events because Sasuke isn't really able to listen to Naruto.*biting nails*
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  • From smint45 on May 01, 2011
    Awe that was so great!!!! Finally Suke broke down that was really necessary!!! And we know now a bit of Narutos past!!!!! Am I right to asume that it was Orochimaru kidnapping him and his father? Why oh pray tell was he after Naruto?? Oh I so can't wait for the whole story and the reason for the tatoo!!! Is it a tatoo?? Please give us more of this sweet kissing and cuddling!!!! That was so adorable!!!! I want more!!!!! Hope to see you soon!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Coco on April 30, 2011
    This is so awesome! I can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From ANON - Carousel on April 27, 2011
    The last chapter is so sad. D: Poor Sasu-chan....
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  • From tawanawelch on April 26, 2011
    Oh yeaaaah! They haven't kissed yet! That will be one He'll of a kiss. OMG!! I bet that will be how Sasuke lightens up!! O.O ^^
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  • From tawanawelch on April 26, 2011
    That was a very tense chapter. I feel so bad for Sasuke, he's so angry. Will he tell Naruto why at some point and talk everything out? I hope Naruto's able to get something from him when they get home. I'm glad Naruto can see how Kyuu felt with him a long time ago, maybe Naruto can make a breakthrough with his therapy sessions soon. Will Kakashi be coming back soon? I wish Naruto could just give Sasuke a hug and make everything better.
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  • From smint45 on April 26, 2011
    Awe that was so sad!!! I really hope Sasuke will come around!!! I can't stand to see Naru hurting like that!!!! Please let them get over this crisis!!! I can't wait for more!!!! See you again next week!!!
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  • From ANON - silverfox on April 25, 2011
    They haven't kissed yet? *goes back to check...* Holy cow, you're right, they haven't. o.O Well, okay, apparently you've got a plan. I bet its gonna be awesome! Hope you update soon!
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  • From moodysavage on April 25, 2011
    *want more want more want more* oh wait... was I thinking out loud? sorry. I like how Sasuke's behavior now is a parallel for how Naruto was in the past when he shut everyone out. He can understand what is happening but knows that he may not be able to do anything about it. The one difference though is that they love each other not as family but as a couple. That seems like such an inadequate description... a couple... but you know what I mean lol. Awesome as always :)
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