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Reviews for Make It or Break It

By : Ljiljana
  • From Silvryfang on September 11, 2011
    Very interesting. Please write more it would be a pitty for this to not come to fruition. :3 I am eager to read more
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  • From ANON - Brittany on August 31, 2011
    ah, man I really like this story plzzz plzzz plzzz finish it :)
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  • From TheMadKatter13 on June 24, 2011
    It is very cute and so far quite interesting. I am looking forward to seeing what's next.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 25, 2011
    I'm really enjoying this so far. It cute and simple to read. I don't think think I've never read any fanfic where Sasuke and Naruto are mangakas, but this is really cool.
    Hope to see more!
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  • From Vex on May 18, 2011
    Woow, chapter 5 is amazing. I love the character depth that is developing!
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  • From ANON - richon on May 18, 2011
    what happen between sasu and his brother, why sasu is so upset?? love this story so far, see you soon
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  • From loveusender on May 18, 2011
    Man, geez. I really wanted to burst that tension. It was SO thick, I started to freak out. What is going on with Sasuke though? All his brother had was concern for him.
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  • From ANON - Althydia on May 17, 2011
    Great chapter - with more Sai weirdness, kind of Sasuke and Naruto bonding (over the painting), and Naruto being his usual cheerful self. I really liked Itachi's appearance and his conversation with Naruto. Will it happen again or will Nauto try and make Sasuke answer the phone next time? Also, is it why Sasuke was fine working at Naruto's flat: to avoid the phone calls? I can't remember if you mentioned why Sasuke doesn't talk to is brother before. I guess it will be explained later? Nice and original story anyway. I look forward to the next chapter!
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  • From AngelTalion on May 17, 2011
    AWWWWWWW... boys are SO dumb. I swear boys are just so dumb.

    More soon please I love this one.
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  • From on March 19, 2011
    oh my goodness, i'm so happy you updated!
    this sounds so awesome, i love the dialogue between the two
    please update soon!
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  • From satterb on March 15, 2011
    You updating this story always reminds me of how good it is, and how much I enjoy it! Not too angsty, I like the dynamic between Sas and Naruto! Even though Naruto is sensitive, he can deal well with it. You also make Sasuke weaker than he would like to be, which makes him more likeable. Thanks for all your hard work!
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  • From SoSickOfNyQuil on March 15, 2011
    I couldn't help but think at the end 'Sasuke is so bossy...' Naruto should tell him what to do about something. The guy is in his home, he's got his own 'place' on the couch, he's telling his guests they're welcome to stay (not that Naruto didn't want her to stay of course, so he didn't mind), and he's telling him what to do, taking on the bulk of the work and leaving Naruto with the scraps he's not the best at (artwork). I think Naruto can contribute more than art and Sasuke should give credit that it was Narto's basis for the idea even if he added onto it to make it a bit more in depth. I also think Naruto should bring it to Sasuke's attention that he shouldn't constantly insult his intelligence otherwise they'd still be going in a fruitless circle over the plot....Just syaing, that's my opinion. Lol at the moment as you can tell, I don't like Sasuke very much. Naruto I see putting in more of an effort to truly collaborate. Sasuke seems to be remaining rather fixed in his own ideas until others relent to his wants. And also he should take into account that maybe while what he said to Naruto at the party might have been something to motivate Naruto into competing with him, he should know that words are just as powerful as actions even if they do have good intentions....
    I am truly interested to see how their manga plays out. It's an interesting concept that relates to Alice in Wonderland although I didn't think of that until you had Sasuke mention the relation =)
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  • From ANON - richon on March 14, 2011
    god plot naru, sasu agree it will be a wonderful story. sasu is not made of ice finaly, he has got a heart. love this story!! Please update soon
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  • From AngelTalion on March 14, 2011
    I like it!! A little sad its not a yali manga but that was probably too much to hope for :)awaiting the next chapter!
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  • From nekochannya on January 30, 2011
    Ohhh, dont worry about lenght. It feels reads like a manga... Im so loving it! Please continue! I want to read the whole series!
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