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Reviews for Make It or Break It

By : Ljiljana
  • From ANON - Macy on January 28, 2011
    Sasuke and naruto are so cute and Sai is great! He's too funny...unconsciously so.
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  • From on January 26, 2011
    i'm loving this so much
    sai is so hilarious
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  • From ANON - naru on January 25, 2011
    think think of something naru and you will impress sasu. love this story,Please update soon
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  • From AngelTalion on January 25, 2011
    I love the story and think it is developing quite nicely. I hope to see another chapter soon! :)
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  • From satterb on January 25, 2011
    I guess I'm fortunate to think this story is moving along nicely. I understand the characters emotions, and can feel the sexual tension. I'm relieved that no one is over analyzing every little emotion that runs through their heads. Stories written like that are tedious. I enjoy the dialog, it doesn't feel forced. Sai is really entertaining, and plays a perfect "devil's advocate". Just keep up the great work. Thanks for sharing with all of us.
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  • From tawanawelch on January 25, 2011
    Ok, I like Bakuman so I get how it inspires this. I can't wait for their collaboration and I like Danzou in this story. Will there be others in this story?
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  • From Prism0467 on January 24, 2011
    Go for it, C. Your story flows.
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  • From ANON - Jen on January 24, 2011
    Sai is the best thing about this story. I love the fact that you're using him both as comic relief and to help point out things that the supposedly more socially-aware Naruto and Sasuke aren't getting. One minute he's doing something idiotic like kissing Naruto inappropriately, and the next, he's hit the nail on the head about Naruto and Sasuke's body language. I like the other characters in the story very much as well, but it's Sai I like best because of all the great narrative functions he performs. :)
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  • From ANON - Client91802 on January 21, 2011
    Awesome story! Please don't ditch it, too many good authors do! If you have a mailing list, put me smack on the top of the list. I can't wait to read more. :D
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  • From AngelTalion on December 29, 2010
    BWAHAHAHAHA... this is gonna be SO fun. I'm loving it. More soon please.
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  • From satterb on December 27, 2010
    Love it! Thank you for keeping the characters in character, but also keeping them real, and not over-the-top. Now once did you have Naruto mention ramen, or have Sasuke call Naruto a dobe! Those things are too played out, but the characters mannerisms are easy to picture in the minds eye. I can see Naruto trying his best to be humble, and Sasuke being a little worried about what people think of him, and Sai is just acerbic enough to buffer the two. LOL I really enjoyed reading this chapter and I look forward to many more updates. Thanks for all your hard work!
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  • From on December 27, 2010
    WAH! so excited when i saw you updated, i've been checking back every day :3

    this story is so original and awesome, please keep up the good work

    more naruto and sasuke in the next chapter please?

    loved this chapter~
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  • From GudenMulle on December 27, 2010
    This story is pretty good, I really like the concept. Naruto and Sasuke are always interesting but I have to admit that the person who really got me hooked was Sai, you wrote him fantastically well. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter, it will be REALLY interesting to see them try to work together, and what they come up with!
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  • From ANON - richon on December 27, 2010
    they took the idear of working together well, it will not be long they start again. love your story, see you soon
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  • From ANON - Macy on December 27, 2010
    Sai stole the show in this chapter. He is so funny! This fic is going great so far. I can't wait to read more chapters!
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