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Reviews for Babylon

By : AngelTalion
  • From ANON - Yaoishlashergurl on July 23, 2012
    Nooooooooooooooooooo! Please don't ever stop! This story is so brilliantly fantastic. I read the summary and title and my first thought was: sweet balls! This is gonna be like Queer As Folk!! And THEN you make the comparison in your AN and I friggin sqwee out loud. :3 You've just gotta update!!!! I need me some diner-running supportivemomma!Tsunade so bad! (Kudos and the Internet for using a Brian line btw!! Loved it like the fangirl I am)
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  • From ANON - Randomyaoifan on February 18, 2012
    Love it, more please.
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  • From ANON - NiteNite on December 11, 2011
    I love it!!! I've always had a thing for yakuza sas/naru stories!!!
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  • From ANON - Zombie.dei on August 05, 2011
    I've enjoyed the story so far, I do have a small problem though. If you are going to use drugs in a story research them please. X is never given on blotter paper or sheets. Acid or PCP are though. If that's what you meant. Also if you're going to use sex on drugs as well do the research for how drugs affect the act of sex. 99% of people cannot get off on X, yes it heightens the experiences of touch, sounds, sights, but it tends to constrict blood flow.

    Like I said though it is well written and I am enjoying it.
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  • From missbri88 on August 02, 2011
    I'm still upset that other people are unhappy with this story. Its awesome to wake up to the reality that people live everyday. I love this honestly gritty fiction, and I can't wait to see more.
    This chapter felt more like a filler/advancement type chapter, so I'm hoping to see you and Babylon again soon.
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  • From ANON - Jen on August 01, 2011
    I was a little confused by the chronology of events in this chapter. By the end it eventually became clear that they were having sex in Naruto's office building at the beginning and ending of the chapter, and all the stuff in between was how Sasuke got Naruto to give him a second (and third, and fourth...) chance, but as I was reading it, I wasn't too sure what was going on. It wasn't that clear in the beginning where they were, and I wasn't sure if they'd finished or what had happened once the flashback started. That's NOT to say I wanted you to write "flashback" in the middle of the chapter (I hate that, it's so awkward to read), just a little more clarity on the time and place details would have helped. (It all made sense at the end once the narration actually told us they were in a bathroom, etc.)

    Other than that minor quibble, I really liked the chapter. I like the fact that Naruto is refusing to give in to Sasuke, and yet Sasuke seems to be getting little concessions from him. I don't want Naruto to give in too quickly, since his stunted emotions are his big character flaw and it's interesting watching Sasuke helping him overcome that. Or at least TRYING to. I felt really bad for Sasuke when Naruto shot him down in such a mean way--normally in fics like this, Naruto + Sasuke's roles would be reversed and it would be Sasuke as the emotionally stunted playboy, so it's really nice to see the role reversal here. I also liked the fact that Sasuke would have willingly slept with one of those men in the club because he couldn't have Naruto, and that it wasn't some cheap jealousy ploy. (That's a much more realistic way for him to behave than if he was trying to play jealousy games with Naruto, which doesn't strike me as very Sasuke-like behavior anyway.)

    BTW, when the fic said that Sasuke started hanging out with Naruto's friends Kiba and Iruka, I got all excited because I thought Kiba + Iruka were a couple. The possibility struck me as cute: older man Iruka x younger man Kiba. (Plus it's rare to see Iruka with anyone other than Kakashi.) LOL. I got all bummed when I realized they weren't together. :P
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  • From ANON - Carousel on July 31, 2011
    Yay! You updated this. :D I love this story so much. It's edgy and sexy and just plain awesome. Update again soon!~
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  • From ANON - mina on July 31, 2011
    yep yep i remember that line from the show well. ooh brian
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  • From ANON - reality_bites on July 01, 2011
    I am admittedly a bit of a lurker, but I've read all of your work and thus far - this is my absolute favorite! I can't wait to see where this goes.
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  • From ANON - Darsha on June 26, 2011
    love this very kinky scene to it sasuke i think u def got your hands full lol
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  • From missbri88 on May 20, 2011
    You are portraying the lifestyle very well. I lived that life myself at one time and made me flashback to those moments. I hope you keep things as real as possible and even show the really horrible things that can happen in this world such as rape, coming across bad drugs, the over doses, and possible STDs.
    But I love this fic so far and I really hope to see more soon.
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  • From satterb on April 20, 2011
    I feel it's unfair to rake you over the coals about the rampant drug use, when it's stated clearly in your summary..."sex, drugs and Him." Besides, that's part of the fun, these aren't real people, and you should be able to make them do anything you want, especially things that aren't feasible in real life. I love the story, and I love the background you've given on all the characters. Thanks for all your hard work.
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  • From Carousel on April 20, 2011
    Chapter 4 pretty much had me doing the Yes! dance. Please update soon, because I'm addicted to this story and I need to know what happens next.
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  • From randrinawilson on April 20, 2011
    Oh this is fantastic! I was wondering how Sasuke and Naruto were ever going to meet in the middle because naruto seemed to haver deep commitment issues. He didnt mind leeting anyone play with him but he didnt want anyone to have him. And Sasuke, besides being informed by neji, had this opinion that NAruto was this beautiful little sexy slutty doll he wanted to play with but not keep. Well not untill later that night anywat :0 great sex will and can blow our minds! but now I see that Neji has no idea what Gaara or Naruto does. He runs in the yakuza worls and even though he was "keeping" Gaara" gaara doeasnt have a financial need to be kept. and Naruto, boy oh boy, Sasuke is running legit businesses for his familly and he will be running into Naruto and what a surprise that will be for sasuke and a mystery to unravel for him. A mystery of why Naruto acts that way when he so obviously is starved for love and affection. Looks like Neji and Sasuke want to give and Naruto and Gaara need it. Neji is going to have to shape up or Gaara wont be tolerating that too much longer. Neji might like to blame Naruto for all of their problems but he isnt the one to blame, he is just the one that Gaara runs to because he is gaar'a rock.
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  • From ANON - Jen on April 20, 2011
    Oops... posted the same chapter twice.

    Drug abuse is just one of those things that's always tough to read about because a lot of us have seen it up close and personal. However, I don't think you need to sanitize your story in any way. The only way tackling these kinds of subjects would become offensive is if they get glamorized, like taking a bunch of X is the best and only way to party, all the cool, sexy people do it (while only jerks and losers refuse to do it), and there's no negative consequences whatsoever to getting high out of your mind, etc. I didn't get the impression the fic was doing that; Gaara got pretty messed up from all those drugs he took, after all. We can dislike the characters' actions without disliking the fic, right?
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