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Reviews for Babylon

By : AngelTalion
  • From ANON - Anon on April 20, 2011
    Don't worry about whether people like the path your characters have taken. There is one certain thing you have to remember when putting your work out there for others to review... you can't please everyone. Even though I myself am a straight arrow (no chemical dependence of any kind, ever), I can read, listen or watch stories where others are portrayed in the same light as your characters and can differentiate between my own ideals and the story I am taking in.

    As for how I feel about this story, I have to say that you've got me hooked. I can't wait for you next update.
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  • From Carousel on April 19, 2011
    Sexy story is sexy. I think I might die from how naughty and smutty it is.
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  • From satterb on April 19, 2011
    MMMMMM! I love it! I really appreciate how verbal your semes are. Please keep up the delicious work. I hope all goes well for you and your family. Take care!
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  • From ANON - Jen on April 19, 2011
    Seeing Gaara's condition in this chapter, Naruto gets a massive thumbs down from me. Wanting to comfort your friend is a good thing, but doing it in this way is a very, very bad thing. Not only did Naruto get Gaara completely wasted, but he wanted to give him even more drugs so he could sleep with even more guys. Just Kakashi hadn't been enough, apparently. It's a miracle something terrible hasn't happened to Naruto & Gaara as a result of getting that wasted. :P

    Hmmm... for once Sasuke seems like the relatively normal, sane character, while Naruto is the one with issues. Beyond looks and sexual satisfaction, what appeal will these two have for one another? I would imagine Naruto might find Sasuke a little boring since he seems somewhat sheltered and is a relatively serious person. Not to mention, Naruto doesn't like Neji's involvement with the yakuza, so he might not be that happy to find out about Sasuke's family. On the flip side, I doubt Sasuke will like Naruto's methods of having fun (definitely don't want to see Sasuke getting wasted on a regular basis just because that's how Naruto likes to do things), and then there's Naruto's commitment phobia, which will surely cause some difficulties between them. Looking forward to seeing how you resolve all this. :)
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  • From ANON - Althydia on April 09, 2011
    I like it. I don't know what you have in store for this story, but I want to find out.
    Neji and Gaara really make a nice couple, even though there are some insecurities. The yakuza aspect certainly complicates their relationship.
    I think the thing I'm most unfamiliar with is Naruto as a slut (and the drug thing). Is there a particular reason behind this behaviour? And will Sasuke try and make him change his mind about that, or are they both players?
    Also, will we see more of Itachi and Hinata, or were they mostly used to set the scene in the prologue?
    I look forward to more of this new story...
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  • From roro237 on April 09, 2011
    I'm blown away:) I would really like to know how Naruto and Sasuke will meet and or hook-up?:) I definitely liked how Neji and Sasuke became friends. Then that touch of Kakashi, yesss! This is very interesting. I also like the name of the club:)
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  • From ANON - darsha on April 09, 2011
    Love it love it ooooouhhhhhh sluty naru im excited please keep going please its only the second chapter and im allready hook
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  • From ANON - richon on April 08, 2011
    a very good start. i want more§§ want ot know how sasu and naru will met. see you soon
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  • From satterb on April 08, 2011
    Are you kidding me???? This is exactly the kind of story we all want to read! LOL Please keep up the good work. I love the dynamics between Neji and Gaara!
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  • From niceladysakura on April 08, 2011
    wow! this story is really interesting

    hmmm...a new story plot i wonder how will naruto and sasuke meet, what will be their first impression to each other..
    please update soon


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  • From Carousel on April 08, 2011
    I love this work of raging gay fiction. XD And I really love slutty!Naruto. This looks like it will be a sexy, awesome story.
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  • From ANON - v on April 08, 2011
    Like it! waiting for more :)
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  • From tawanawelch on March 13, 2011
    I read ur profile again and didn't see u talking about this story. I hope u can get back to it as well. When uve finished ur other stories. :)
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  • From Danyealle on December 30, 2010
    Your story has been hidden. Please check the email box associated with your AFF account for more information. If you no longer have access to this account, please contact tos_team@adultfanfiction.net for more information
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  • From satterb on December 10, 2010
    This looks really good so far. It was funny to have them smoking a joint. LOL I look forward to more. Thanks for sharing with us.
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