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Reviews for A Slice of Life

By : bellabambina24
  • From moodysavage on January 27, 2011
    Actually, to the person who commented about falling out of bed... it really is possible to injure yourself. When my daughter was about 3 or 4 she fell out of my bed onto a hardwood floor. It was an antique bed and kinda high and with the way she landed she broke her collar bone. I felt soooo quilty! So yeah it's possible to break something with just falling out of bed.
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  • From moodysavage on January 27, 2011
    I feel really bad for Neji but I still want Sasuke with Naruto. How can Naruto feel his legs but not be able to walk? Is it psychological maybe? Please write more!
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  • From ANON - Stacy on January 25, 2011
    Poor neji :( Sasuke is digging deeper and deeper and pretty soon he won't be able to get out. I like your old wives tale!
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  • From ANON - Jen on November 29, 2010
    Damn. I felt bad for Neji at the end; he really, really didn't deserve that. Can you make it better by letting him fall in love with Hanabi? She seems to care about him, and it would serve her father right if the two of them ended up together. (If Neji can be the same age as Sasuke, then Hanabi can be just a little younger than him.) Well, that was my 2 cents. The Gaara/Lee/Shikamaru love triangle was interesting. I'd like to see how you resolve it since it would be nice if all three guys could end up happy. Other than that, I like how you've portrayed Naruto's disability, though to be honest, Naruto shouldn't have had such great injuries from just falling out of bed. I know he stupidly went head-first, but still, it's not that far, and he landed on his shoulder, nowhere near his ribs. Plenty of us have taken similar spills out of bed and been no worse for the wear. If he'd fallen out of bed and then accidentally caused his nightstand to fall on top of him in the process, then I could see how broken ribs might be possible.
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  • From KiraIsJudgement on November 28, 2010
    Sasuke is such an ass. I hope Neji and Naruto hook up and leave Sasuke. Porbably won't happen. Yeah, Sasuke just sounds like any other guy that has decided to cheat on their wife. Not sure exactly why he is so infatuated with Naruto, that's kinda left vague. The interactions between the characters is done really well. I like this story will read more. Can't wait to see where you go with this. Not sure is Naruto even swings that way or how he would feel to be 'the other guy' Keep writing.
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