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Reviews for Bittersweet

By : Lisea18
  • From ANON - kit on October 24, 2013
    This was a very sweet story! Hinata and Sasuke are not a common pairing, nor was it something I could picture before, but you wrote their characters perfectly and they are a cute couple. You left me wanting more!!
    Fantastic job! only wish there were more stories like yours on this site.
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  • From ANON - Jordan on December 11, 2011
    Wow, this was excellent! I loved how you described the complexity of the relationships and how everything built up in an even pace. You really captured Hinata and Sasukes characters well. I hope you write more stories like this. Or maybe even decide to continue this one? I know it's a one shot, but you can easily work this into a great multi-chapter story.
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  • From ANON - infiniteternity on April 14, 2011
    Although NaruHina happens to be my OTP, I see the futility in hoping for something to come out of that relationship. That given, it's fun to see a character like Hinata paired up with different people (especially in fandom) and you do an amazing job of making it make sense. I love the way you wrote this. I usually see Sasuke as a unredeemable character but you added a certain softness to him that makes it worthwhile and oddly realistic to read.
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  • From ANON - sleepytimegun on January 22, 2011
    I rather adore this little couple, so I was very excited to find such a wonderful little jem of a story. I love how soft the romance was in this piece. It is a side to Sasuke that is often over looked, and I was glad to see it emerge here. After all, he had a very sweet disposition as a child, and I would like to think that it has not completely died out.

    On another note, you had some very interesting perspectives on the Naruto/Sakura/Sasuke team relationship. For a one-shot, you sure got a great deal of depth.

    This was a lovely piece of writing. Thank you for sharing. :)
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  • From tjrender on December 27, 2010
    I rarely see Hinata-Sasuke stories, and now I wonder, why not ? This was a very plausible way that such a pairing could happen, and I enjoyed reading it very much.
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  • From Ajablue on December 17, 2010
    I found this story just beautiful. I've encountered a few Sasuke/Hinata pairings before, but they have mostly been background to other pairings. It was nice to see them front and center so to speak. Also Sasuke is not one of my favorite characters, but your interpretation of him made me care. I love Hinata and I love stories where she is given a chance to come into her own. I too wish this was more than a one shot. It was just so very well done.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 01, 2010
    I wish this wasn't a one-shot.
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  • From ANON - osculate_me on November 28, 2010
    It has been so long since I've read a serious SasuHina romance and it's made me realize how much I miss it and also how much I want to write one too! Despite you saying English is your second language, you do marvelously well and there weren't any moments where I didn't understand what you were writing. Please, write more SasuHina because there simply isn't enough and I'm no good at it. I love the steady build up of their relationship, and all the dynamics between Team 7 especially Naruto and Sasuke. This was awesome. I loved it. And the sex scene had me shivering. Though the ending I felt could have been better, because it was such a steady build up, and obviously the coming together of Sasuke and Hinata would have been the climax, but I felt the ending was a little abrupt and maybe an 'aftermath' would have rounded the story up. Anywya, all in all, it was perfect. I loved it. And I really hope you do more.
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  • From ANON - Anise on November 28, 2010
    I thought you did amazingly well in getting the character of Sasuke and Hinata believable to what we've seen of them :) How their relationship and feelings went through a gradual change to come to the realization that they both cared for each other as more than just comrades or even friends. And the end when they finally came together was of course very hot but also sweet and caring, plus the way that it was written was done extremely well.^^ I loved the little details even something as small as hearing the buckle of Sasuke's belt, I don't think I see that much thought put into that sort of thing in most stories and it added a lot to this one. Also Naruto was adorably oblivious as usual, you almost think that he's just pretending not to notice but of course he does tend to miss the things that are right in front of him, despite that you could see just how much he does care :)

    Absolutely wonderful story, I loved reading it and the pairing, it's not that common but I like the quiet but strong feelings between the two. It was a great read and hopefully I'll see more of your stuff in the future ^_^
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  • From KiraIsJudgement on November 28, 2010
    That was really sweet. Not a pairing I had thought about before, but it works! I loved it. Very in character for everyone.
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