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Reviews for Broken Promises

By : AngelTalion
  • From kayci147 on April 06, 2015
    Love this story! Plz do a back together lemon with sasunaru PLZZZZ
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  • From ANON - anon on June 12, 2012
    I would have enjoyed this, because frankly you're a good writer. But I'm never been a fan of multiple pairing. Especially in Naruto's case. He was so mad with Sasuke, without understanding what happened and yet he started sleeping with every person he found, isn't he a hypocrite? If you're hurt because of what you thought as betrayal, are you really going to start fucking everyone? Does that make him much better compared to Sasuke? I think he's worst, because logically he knows what he was doing, whilst what happened to sasuke and sakura is obviously out of tiredness due to mission.

    you should have thought of better reason as to why Naruto could hate Sasuke. It should have not been an accident, instead, behind his back, Sasuke and Sakura really had a relationship. It's just that Sasuke can't give up Naruto because he loves him, and that Sasuke doesn't want to loose Sakura either because due to having Sakura he has this psychotic belief that he really needs to continue his clan. That reason might be more acceptable as to why Naruto would be furious and hate Sasuke. But for an accidental 'fuck' that happened turning someone into a town slut made Naruto more stupid than he really is.
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  • From ANON - FlameofLove89 on September 08, 2011
    This is a bull shit story with a crappy lets be happy after the most fucked up shit storm ever. Are you insane, dose revenge misguided love sex get you off or something, sex isn't the answer to every problem in the universe! Also what the fuck your Sasuke kissed more ass then a professional ass kisser! You didn't resolve any of the problem you just hid them with sex (sex is awesome but not that fucking awesome). I cant believe this bull, no relationship could withstand this enormous amount of misbehavior on all parties involved! They way this story began in chapter one I expected more, like a believable fucking story even if it did end with them back together!

    P.S. NEXT PUT A FUCKING OUT OF CHARACTER AND REALITY WARNING IN THE GOD DAMN SUMMERY SO I CAN AVOID CRAP LIKE THIS!
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  • From AFAwesome on July 28, 2011
    OOh um gosh that was so amazing!
    I totally loved it! It's about time someone
    Did the break make up well! :)
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  • From ANON - kura on February 24, 2011
    Meh not bad. Not great. It is decent. You need a beta though. DESPERATELY. There are typos, errors and plain old things in your story that just don't make sense or are worded terribly. This story could have been great if you had a beta, and a good one at that. This story needs a lot of work and revision. A meticulous Beta could have caught all of your spelling errors, told you to write more, phrase things differently.

    All in all, was the plot good? Yes. Was the writing style good? No not really. Would I read it again? If your spelling, grammar and writing improved and you fixed the story a lot.
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  • From smint45 on January 21, 2011
    That was really a great ending!!!! And I totally liked the steamy make out session with shika nd Naru!!!! Than you a lot for posting this story!!! I really enjoyed it!!!!
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  • From missbri88 on January 21, 2011
    Cries... Its over... But the stories that write their own ending unexpectedly are some of the best ones out there. It ended wonderfully. And I like how things aren't perfect; they're still working on it. I'll love to see ficlets from time to time. But Thank you for sharing.
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  • From randrinawilson on January 19, 2011
    Wonderful!!!!!! Epilouge please!!!!!!!
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  • From roro237 on January 19, 2011
    I really loved it! I agree it feel right:) I was digging Neji in this chapter:) He was so cool and layed back! He knows whats, what in his relationship with Shika. I loved that Lee has a nice girl and was on a date:) But you know my favorite part:) The Boys! I think that was so Naruto crying sad tears then happy ones. Plus the three strokes and then five minutes was hot:) I'm ~Bowing~ to you! This is a wonderful story!! Thank you for sharing and all your hard work. ^_^
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  • From ZeroZoey on January 19, 2011
    This has been one of my favorite stories. Thank you soooo much for it. Normally I cannot read cheating stories, however I am glad I gave it a chance. I think it was the warning, I was expecting it and well it was not really Sasuke always going behind Narutos back. Do not get me wrong I wanted to beat Sasuke with a shovel but it could have been worse and I am gald it was not. I do hope you so small one shot after this chapter to show us how everyone is doing. Maybe even down the road Sasuke and Naruto could get some one to carry there a child for each of them. That way Sasuke and Naruto could expand there family with 2 kids. But even the rest of the teams, I do hope you will cont with it even if it is oneshots. Will love to see how everything will turn out. thanks for the story and the chapter. I believe you ended it perfect, they still have there problems but will work threw it for a better future togehter. thanks again
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 19, 2011
    At one point I had really high hopes for the ending of this fiction, but I was dissapointed by the way you ended it.

    It's funny but today in class, I was talking to one of my friends, and she told me that her girlfriends are always feeling her boyfriend up because he is a body builder and it pissess her the hell off...So I'm sorry but I know for a fact that no one who is in a good relationship or in love with someone likes to see other people making out and or messing around with what belongs to them. Yes Naruto and Sasuke are back together, but I find it stupid that you still make it okay for Shika and him to dry hump, kiss, make out and essentially do everything but fuck. It's just not believable and it makes a good story not so good.

    Sorry that is just my opinion, Glad you worked to finish this though even if I didn't like the ending.
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  • From kinai26 on January 17, 2011
    Super cute chappie, very sweet and romantic in its own way. Go Sasuke, go, you can do it!
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  • From missbri88 on January 16, 2011
    Awww! I teared up, its just so cute! Kakashi's lecture was totally unexpected. I was wowed. And I think I forgot to ask last chapter... Did I sense Kaka/Saku...? Not that it bothers me.
    The chapter moved us in the right direction, and I'm ecstatic. Lol. And now you are making me wanna go coffee maker shopping! (Shakes head)
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  • From slayr03 on January 15, 2011
    no no no! not rubbish at all!! That was thee perfect way to ease them into this phase. Not too rash, but doesnt ignore the fact that there is no denying that the love is still there and of course that there is obvious sexual tension I love that Naruto remains a bit conflicted and how sasuke's heart races at the little things that Naruto doesn't even realize he is doing. This certainly has the right flow to it, keep it up! I hope it never ends! Thank you for the update and as always I look forward to the next!
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  • From randrinawilson on January 14, 2011
    OOOOOh thank goodness!!! I was really getting to the point where I felt like sasuke should actually just move on because naruto was never going to forgive him and give hima nother chance. Yeah we all go and do crazy things sometimes when we have a situation like that but you have to come to a point where you let it go one way or another. Naruto tells anyone that will listen, including the people that he happens to be sleeping with that Sasuke was it for him. That he knew it. It had really gotten to the point where he either started giving sasuke a chance or tells him that he has no chance period. Now that being said....this story freakin rocks!!! the sex scenes are hot and the dynamic is hot tooo. I look forward to the updates every week!!!!
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