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Reviews for Broken Promises

By : AngelTalion
  • From ANON - Anon on December 14, 2010
    I do agree that Sakura and Sasuke both needed a good dose of punishment. But to tell you the truth, I'm finding your Naruto to be a big hypocrite.....talking to Tsunade he says..."Even after all he has done I don't want to hurt him(Sasuke)"....please who is going to believe that pile? He's been hurting Sasuke ALOT..sleeping with Gaara multiple times, Flirting and flaunting his relationship with Shikamaru in his face??

    Really what Sasuke did seems small in comparison, to what Naruto is doing to him now. Yeah he cheated it was a heat of the moment thing he was drunk on adrenaline, hurting physically, and he felt immediate regret and remorse, he wanted to tell Naruto everything that had happened, but before he had a chance the blonde found out. At least Sasuke did not rub his mistake in Naruto's face the way Naruto is rubbing his relationships in Sasuke's face.

    What Naruto is doing is cruel, I don't find him sympathetic at all. I almost find myself hoping Sasuke moves on. I'm sorry but I think Naruto will need to make ammends to Sasuke too, because he is hurting him just as much if not more than Sasuke hurt him.
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  • From jazac670 on December 14, 2010
    Awesome chapters again! the story is coming along very nicely! i felt kinda bad for sasuke in ch.10. T.T i'm so weak to emotions!!LOL! that surprised me when naruto asked for sakura's help but i understand what you mean. she's got to work for forgiveness too. HAHA i can't wait to see what sasuke will do to win naruto back!! he better go all the way with it too!! lol! keep up the awesome job and see ya next time!
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  • From JtheChosen1 on December 14, 2010
    Excellent work! Love this story as usual!
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  • From roro237 on December 13, 2010
    Hey! This chapter was a wonderful surprise:) I was just checking here before I cut off the computer and BAMB! I'm to happy to see you:) I love that Ino went straight to Naruto when she was hurt. Then omg he forgave Sakura yea that's our boy:) But the talk he had with Baa-chan was a shock for me. First I have to tell you I cracked up when Baa-chan told Sasuke he's on her shit list:) I didn't know that deep down Naruto realized he'll never love another like Sasuke. Even with the lust thing with Gaara and now the jealous-ness with Shika. His hold heart is Sasuke's:) Oh I love your story! You have me thinking what's next and wOw! I'm wondering who has the hottest hots for Shika?! And what will be Sasukes next move to prove he's sorry and wants his blond back? I loved your review of my review:) Thank you! I just really love your story line and I'm enjoying every word ^_^
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  • From ZeroZoey on December 13, 2010
    Oh boy things are heating up. I really hope that Naruto has not forgiven Sakura already. In my opinion she was just as wrong since she had the clear head and not Sasuke. Of course Sasuke is just as wrong. I am glad Sasuke now understands that he has to work for Naruto and maybe even give up his pride to get him back. Now Shino and Neji, I wonder which one is the one that Shika likes and I wonder is Shino is the one that Garra likes and Shino likes him well update soon
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  • From smint45 on December 13, 2010
    Awe that was so sad!!!! But I really liked Narutos adoration of ramen ^^ That was funny as hell!!!! And poor Sasuke ^^ He is really suffering too!!! I would be a lot better for ervybody if they came back together!!! Well for everybody except Shika!!! Hope to see you soon!!!!
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  • From roro237 on December 11, 2010
    OMG! I loved it!! I wanted Sasuke to be hurt but I almost couldn't take. I felt sorry for him watching:) I know I'm a silly girl and you're a good writer:) It has to be this way Sasuke can't hurt Naruto and think I'm sorry so it's over. A promise is a promise and Sasuke broke his. I laughed thinking that Pink didn't lose a friend but her punching bag:) She is such a hitter! This was wonderful. I can't wait to read what's next ^_^
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  • From ZeroZoey on December 11, 2010
    I am very happy that Shikamaru helped Naruto, he did a really great job. And it was quite a sweet moment between the two. I wanted what Sasuke is going to do now. His first attempt was a complete failure plus a very very stupid idea for a genius he is very stupid. I cannot wait to read more. I think I like the idea of kak/sak. Even though Kakshi was a total perv to watch Sakura change and she is still not one of my fav people in this story I think she should get a little piece of happiness. Well update soon and thanks
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  • From JtheChosen1 on December 07, 2010
    Awesome work - love the drama!
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  • From roro237 on December 07, 2010
    I didn't know what would stop Naruto from taking Shika? Of course his cheating half would:) I do see why Shika was worried when Naruto was fighting Gaara it was deadly but they were joking around with each other but with Sasuke it didn't seen like he was joking. I'm glad there is still some unforgiven moments left for the two S's. I'm giggling at how you described Gaara as touch starved:) I definitely agree with that theory! I love your story see you next chapter ^_^
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  • From ZeroZoey on December 07, 2010
    I really liked the chapter. I hope Shika can get through to Naruto. Maybe see some Naruto/Shika, that would be nice. But, even though I would love to see some Naruto/Neji and Naruto/Kiba, Naruto is being kinda a hoe right now and it should be time for him to move onand heal. Maybe Shika can finally heal Naruto tell him what he needs to hear, just be there to get through to him. Shika can do it, lol, at least until Sasuke can get his crap together, that was soooooo not the right way to fix things with Naruto, so not the right, for being a genius he is pretty stupid, lol. Now I am kinda confuse the sentence "I will make you bleed if HE ever gets that close to you again." that Kyuubi said to Sasuke, I took it as HE meaning Naruto but it could also mean Sasuke was with someone else. I am hoping for he meaning Naruto cause Sasuke needs to prove that he loves Naruto, that he is truly in pain, Shaking up with someone else on top of the entire Sakura situation, is the best way to lose Naruto forever. Anyway, I love the story so far, and Love the fact you update quickly with good length chapters, so thanks. Update soon
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  • From smint45 on December 07, 2010
    THAT WAS SO GREAT!!!! I really loved the way you discribed the post fight lust of Naruto!!! Poor guy!!! I really pitty him!!!! And Shika doesn't know that he is making it worse!!!!I really hope everything is going to be fine seeing Naruto suffer when they both left was so hard!!!! Plese update soon!!!! I can't wait for more!!!!
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  • From smint45 on December 04, 2010
    Ah Things start to resolve themselves!!!! I hope they aregoing to be ok when the fight is over!!! I really want to see what Naruto goes through after a fight!!! Please update soon!!!
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  • From roro237 on December 04, 2010
    WoW! That was so intense!! I'm hooked:) You have an incredible story line going on here wOw:) I can't help saying that(wOw). I love the make outs with Shika. I always think of him as Naruto's dearest friend to. I was scare that Ms.Pink would let herself get pregnant. I don't know if I could forgive what Sasuke had done less long Sakura but to forgive is Naruto's way. I truly enjoyed and I look forward to what you have in store for us ^_^
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  • From loveusender on December 03, 2010
    Drama!!I love it!!! these lines really touched me.. “You fucked another person. You fucked Sakura. You don’t get to feel sorry for yourself. You did this to us, to yourself. You were used to getting off after a battle? You KNOW what is inside me, what I go through after battle… Kyuubi would fuck a wild dog if I’d let him. When you aren’t there, I WAIT. It hurts so bad I can hardly walk but I never considered ever once taking a replacement to my matt. I wait for you.”

    Naruto is really hurting just by saying that and I really think he's trying o wash all that away by being with all these different people. He can't deny how he feels about sasuke and as much as he wants he cant forgive him either. Not this easily. Sasuke has to hurt.
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