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Reviews for Broken Promises

By : AngelTalion

From roro237 on December 28, 2010
Let me quote Ino "Oh my God"! That was so good!! First off the way you described the Uchiha's house was wonderful I was there walking in with Sasuke. Okay I might be soften a little because Sasuke admitted to Neji which I believe was a very hard thing for little Uchiha to do, why he did Miss Pink. That scored so points with me:) I just hope Neji's plan works and not back fire on them?! Gaara checking out Kakashi ass had me cracking up! The mystery man revealed Shino cool! I have never read about the combo before. You came back for the holiday break with a big bang! I love it! You luck girl with all the great gifts ^_^
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From JtheChosen1 on December 28, 2010
This was a great one! Something tells me that Naruto and Shika won't be amused with Sasuke's and Neji's plan however lol
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From Vidori on December 28, 2010
Your cliffhangers are, in the words of Mermaidman: EEEEVIIIIL!

Awesome chappie. I'm on the edge of my seat for the next one.
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From ANON - Anon on December 28, 2010
OoooH I'm kind of excited about this. Sasu is getting cut and buff, and Neji will be getting a sample of that tight new body, that Naruto noticed??? HELL YEAH....if that happens it will definetly be intersting...Kissing can lead to so much more between those two...and the smex between them would be hot as hell.

I don't know what's going to happen between them, but I'm having fun reading.

Oh and just a small request, could you please get rid of all those little symbols? It makes it hard to read the story fluidly.

Thanks for another update.
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From ZeroZoey on December 21, 2010
Oh boy Sasuke has started his plan to get Naruto back. A much better plan than his first but still not a 100% sure,I guess we will see. Now I got to say love the Shino/Garra pairing, Shino always seems to get shafted glad that he is in your story. He is a cool character and glad to see him in a mainish role. So that means neji likes Shika and I love that pairing. Well update soon and since we will not hear anything from you until after Christmas than have a merry christmas
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From roro237 on December 21, 2010
That was wOw! Talk about surprises:) Gaara meeting a secret Leaf friend in the trees surprise! Sasukes first move surprise! Naruto reaction to Sasukes first move not a surprise:) I loved it!! You have a Very Merry Christmas ^_^
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From missbri88 on December 21, 2010
Well, this is my first time reviewing your story although I've been here since the beginning. I love the plotline and how Naruto is exploring, even if he only belongs with Sasu-chan. The smaller side pairings and mysteries are very intriguing too! I can't wait to see how Sasuke steps up his game next. Shino/Gaara? Wow. It fits and I never would'a thunk it. And when will Neji grow a set? Tsunade...? I can't wait for that. Lol. I hope to see you in the New Year!
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From ANON - Anon on December 21, 2010
OMG Shino? I would have never guessed, I'm not sure I've read a story with GaaraShino or ShinoGaara before...very interesting. Neji is an idiot. I hope he finds a friend in Sasuke, they could both use a good friend rightnow. Sasuke needs to see that Naruto is not the end all and be all in his life. He needs to become healthier, establish other healthy relationships for his own sake, even if he is going to end up with Naruto eventually.

I have to tell you the birthday note almost made me cry. It was so sad to hear Sasuke tell about one of their morning rituals as a couple. I could just imagen Sasuke making a strong cup of Joe for himself, and a cup of hot chocolate with a bit of coffee for Naruto, while Naru took a shower or was getting ready for the morning. It made me sad for what they have lost.

I'm also worried over the upcoming drama....*bites nails* Anyway thanks for the update, enjoy your family.
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From loveusender on December 21, 2010
Man, i could almost feel naruto's tears dripping unto my laptop keyboard..*sniff* I feel so much for him. Trying so hard to put up a wall but dont know if he can. Now gaara and shino? am I right? Never saw that one before...But that was such a sweet thing for sasuke to do.

I also hope that you have a great christmas!!
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From loveusender on December 20, 2010
Sorry for not reviewing the last few chapters...anyways

YES SASUKE! get off your lazy ass and finally do something! As for naruto and nara's relationship, I don't really know how I feel about it yet. It's more bearable than thinking of him with neji. The thing with these pairings right, if it's naruto with sasuke/gaara I prefer to see him uke but any of these other guys, he just HAS to be seme because I just CANNOT see him bottoming for neji/kiba/nara/ shino or whatever else is out there.

Probably I missed something, but who is that person kissing Tsunade?
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From LividusNight on December 20, 2010
GAH. Love this story!! We need some more sasuke/naruto contact though, i he's being too mean to sasuke, lol. Can't wait until the next chapter!!
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From roro237 on December 19, 2010
Hahaha I'm cracking up at that bossy ass Uchiha:) Oh I love this chapter because of the feelings that Naruto was having. How Gaara had been the first and why it was good then what Sasuke had been to him and why Shika was special. You worte that beauitfully:) It touched my heart at Naruto feeling flawed because Sasuke cheated. I get that I really do. Hey I caught Shika thinking 'Dobe' I loved it:) Now for the two S's I'm looking forward to Naruto and Sakuras inter action. oH and good she's not off the hook yet:) Sasuke I'm still so pissed with him for his err. I tryed to understand! At least with her you knew she has loved Sasuke all along but for him?! I'm looking forward to his apologize. God I love your story ^_^
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From ANON - Anon on December 19, 2010
Thanks for another update....I just wanted to say that if I didn't care about your story I wouldn't have bothered with my review. I only do that for stories that actually get me feeling for the characters....in other words "good stories".....so please see my comments for what they are....silly opinions by an over enthusiastic reader.

I do understand your premise, I know they have been broken up for 3 months that does put things into perspective. However I still think that Naruto should have given Sasuke the oportunity to explain, to let him know that the sex with Sasukra was meaningless rutting, "feeling alive again sex" after almost dying....Sasuke could probably have fucked a log if Sakura was not there...(You know those logs can turn into so many things with the substitution jutsu..lol)

The sex Naru is having with Gaara and Shika is a little more than meaningless rutting, he actually puts a lot of caring and thought into what he does. I mean I guess that is very Naruto-like behavior,he's just that kind of nice guy. I know that Naru is not with Sasuke so he is technically not cheating, but he can't say he doesn't want to hurt Sasuke, and mean it. Not if he knows that Sasuke loves him, is remorseful beyond belief over what has happened, and is pining away for Naruto hoping for a second chance, all while Naruto is playing house with Shika, and fucking his frustrations out with Gaara.

That is why I called him a hypocrite.....Does he really not want to hurt him? Come on anyone who has been hurt this way, want's to hurt back. That was the only issue I had with the last chapter....It's obvious to the reader that Naruto is hurting back and knows it. So the whole "I love him Tsunade I don't want to hurt him" sounded a bit insencere to my ears.

I still do sympathize with Sasucakes on this one. The one I want to kill is Sakura, she acted like an opportunistic bitch and pretty much said, "OH fuck Naruto I'll never get this chance again"

I can't wait to see what is up with Neji....why is he so upset? Does he like the Nara genius?? I seriously thought Gaara and Nej were going to end up together, but now you have me thinking that Neji has a thing for Shika. I'm hoping Sasuke wises up, and starts making the Kyubi jelous....maybe a little bit of "I can move on too" behavior, would finally get his stupid Dobe to take notice....that he's not the only one who can move on.

I'm thoroughly enjoying your story and will continue to read it to the end.
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From ZeroZoey on December 19, 2010
Oh boy, I loved the chapter! Finally Naruto/Shika. AWESOME!!!!!! That was a very sweet chapter and it was very nice with how Naruto treated Shika's for the first time. And now Sasuke might have an ally with Neji. I really do like a Shika & Neji pairing so I am hoping for that. Well please update soon I cannot wait to find out what Sasuke will do to win back Natuto.
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From smint45 on December 15, 2010
Thanks a lot !!! I want more ^
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