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Reviews for Broken Promises

By : AngelTalion
  • From tjrender on January 14, 2011
    The latest chapter was absolutely lovely. I've been enjoying this story from the beginning, and can hardly wait to see what comes next !
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  • From roro237 on January 14, 2011
    I loved it! It was so romantic:) Kakashi having a min attack was good. That made them all know how serious he was and me to:) The date was simply wonderful! Coffee maker shopping yea that would be our boys first date. Dinner was the food of the gods I'm sure Naruto thought. The sweet good night kiss 'priceless':) I think this chapter was all that and more. I haven't stop smiling yet ^_^
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  • From ZeroZoey on January 14, 2011
    This was a very sweet chapter, glad to see things moving in the right direction.
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  • From AvangalineHazel on January 14, 2011
    its not rubbish at all. I liked seeing naruto and sasuke doing domestic stuff together like shopping, it was so cute. Also kakashi getting angry made me laugh. Getting murderous, sure I can imagine that but imagining him getting angry or annoyed just makes me giggle. It was a really good light hearted chapter even though u addressed some serious issues like sakura finally apologizing.
    Can't wait for the next chapter
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  • From JtheChosen1 on January 14, 2011
    Wasn't rubbish! You did a great job with Naruto slowly easing the tension between the 3 of them, I loved how you had Kakashi chastising them all! Priceless! Also, you made this chapter drawn out, with Naruto not immediately forgiving them, because he shouldn't - the healing process will take time. Great work on this chapter, and keep up the nice work!


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  • From roro237 on January 11, 2011
    I was missing you so I came to reread:) You know it's true in life when you think like Sasuke was thinking. How Naruto said maybe. I loved that being part and the ending with him thinking about it. I also thought that it was nice of Kakashi to set with Miss Pink. In away I can't blame her as much as I do Sasuke because we all know how long she has been in love with him. So when she got her chance to get-it-on with him of course she couldn't help herself. That was nice of Kakashi to be there for his student. Now how will she treat Naruto? How will the team work together after this betrayal of the two S's? But I know you have to put the pass behind you and move on. Naruto loves pale and beautiful so he has to start to learn to trust again. 'Maybe' in small amounts:) Your story just speaks to me! I really enjoy reading it and thinking about it:) Read you soon ^_^
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  • From missbri88 on January 08, 2011
    Is this McDonald's, cuz I'm loving it? Lol. Sorry for the lame joke, but the truth is the truth. I understand the coffee machine woes. I just got married and I'll be leaving my mother's home soon and my brother and I are fighting over the coffee machine and which one I get to take with me.
    Can't wait 'til next chapter! It feels like we're starting a new level or something. Yay! XD
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  • From Vidori on January 07, 2011
    I feel like Naruto's just slowly going crazy. It's still going to be a blow-up scene with them, though, right? I can't wait for that part. XD
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  • From JtheChosen1 on January 06, 2011
    Very nice work here!
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  • From loveusender on January 06, 2011
    Babe, I feel like I'm walking on broken glass. Everything right now is so tentative with them. That scares me. I wouldn't hate you for that but how long can Sasuke hold on to that 'maybe' ? It breaks my heart. I know Naruto loves him but her has to MAKE UP HIS MIND !!
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  • From roro237 on January 05, 2011
    OMG! I loved it! You covered a lot:) So Miss Pink is back?! I loved the hold thing with Shika's dad. I could picture that. Him leaning on the door talking stuff:) You had me laughing at the pot being heard:) I so love the idea of Naruto getting his own place and maybe somewhere down the road dating Sasuke. That's a maybe:) I had to giggle at the super slut to:) I so enjoyed this chapter. I did LOL at the story you're sticking to:) But hey thanks for the 'tell' scents I couldn't get the show:) I'm so happy I founded this before bed! ^_^
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  • From slayr03 on January 05, 2011
    Still here, anxiously awaiting each update, checking every night atleast 3 times to see if there was any movement and you have yet to let me down! I am thoroughly enjoying the pace at which you update, gives me a little time to digest and sit on the edge of my seat but you dont leave me hanging once my curiousty becomes too much to bear! I am not crazy about Neji/Shika, not enough there in the canon to get me going - I need that drama! Which I must say you created nicely (I loved that you had them think Sasuneji was happening! I got excited that maybe it would turn into something but then no I needed to see sasunaru..so conflicted you had me)and I can never say no to a good lemon so bravo and keep em coming! I am highly anticipating the next chapter where I suspect there may be some serious sasunaru..yes?..yes?! You rock, Jaa na!
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  • From LadyWolf on January 04, 2011
    I've always been a fan of Neji/Shika/Neji...I think they are the hottest pairing next to Sasuke/Naruto...

    Please post soon!
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  • From roro237 on January 04, 2011
    Girlfriend I just don't believe Neji is that much bigger than Naruto! I need to see it for myself:) That was some sexy stuff there! WoW! Neji's been waiting for some Shika and it showed. Shika will be one satisfied ninja. ^_^
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  • From AidaLily on January 04, 2011
    I told myself I wasn't going to review until I had finished reading all the chapters that are up, but I couldn't hold to that as I end up choking on the hot chocolate I was drinking when I got towards the end of chapter 13 I believe.

    Shino and Gaara?????? I'm not saying its a bad pairing as both Shino and Gaara are rather smexy, but wow...I just really wasn't expecting that. It was like standing in the middle of a beautiful green field that is located in the middle of no where with no sign of civilization for over 500 miles in any direction and then suddenly getting hit by a bus. *bows and gives applause* you are officially one of the first people to ever throw out a crack pairing that makes me go 'wtf? really?'. Ok now that I am calmer. I am going back to read the story. :)
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