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Reviews for The Submissive Dominant

By : Daydreamer79

From ANON - felishaww on January 08, 2016
I read this years ago, I never knew the story finished! Awesome! Very hot, and very good understanding! 50 Shades of Grey has nothing on you!!!!
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From Kays3r on October 19, 2015
Omg. This needs to be updated ASAP! I'm dying over here!!
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From lara5170 on October 03, 2015
This was very different but I enjoyed it very much
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From ANON - tbluitt2326 on July 28, 2014
Personally, I think I would like the idea more if their was more of a mental and physical struggle on Sasuke's part. For one, Dominating has likely become a habit to him, and habits are rather hard to break clean from.

For instance, maybe Naruto needs to coax/convince him more to the idea of becoming a submissive (While it was all nice and good that Naruto comes off at this intense Dom, I think Sasuke would be more stubborn when giving in. In a way, this is testing his pride, and we ALL know he can be a unmovable as a mountain when it comes to his pride). Especially if he is used to being the one who is pleased during sex and not the one doing pleasing.

To get to the point: The struggling of going form Dominate to Submissive, and all the conflict that would bring, would have been more interesting to read then Sasuke giving in easily, kinky BDSM sex and then The End. Sometimes the journey to a goal is more interesting then actually reaching it.
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From ANON - Chiaki93 on September 08, 2012
I love all the narusasu fics you make, they are amazing, please keep writing more, this one is my favorite i wish that it never ends (sorry for my bad english, im not good writing it)
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From ANON - Clarelisa on May 21, 2012
oh gosh! This fic is awesome! I wonder if you let me translate. I really love Narusasu and with BDSM! That moment when Sasuke admit that he wanted to be filled by Naruto. I could die! I really love everything. The inner fight of Sasuke, and when he talked with Hinata and she said that she is the Dom in their relationship. Ufffff well I really love it, and I would like to share this awesome fic in Spanish's fandom. If you authorize me you could let me know by twitter. My account is @ClarautopiaWFF anyway I'm following you
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From kirara32693 on July 26, 2011
Gogdangit its not effing fair!!! >:( Those skanks who hate on the story should go read something else!! And racist?! WTFFF!!! Where?! WOW people need to stop drinking the hatorade!

Anyway...I'm really glad you updated this story, I had this on my bookmarks hoping for an update because honestly this is in my top 2 favorite stories I ever found on AFF. Seriously, no joke! I'm so sad you're leaving because AFF is (despite normal FF) the only other place I get to read really good rated M stories. You're one more awesome author that's leaving... seems like we're losing a lot every day :( Y-gal is so complicated and hard to navigate but I'll dust off my old profile and try! You're just that awesome!

Well before I press submit jsut wanted you to know jsut how much I loved the plot and especially the conflict Sasuke was experiencing over his dominant and now submissive side. It made this story really interesting to follow and I just really loved it rofl >-> So I guess this is seeyalater D:

*several minutes after finding you on y-gal* Oooooookay I am completely lost. So many buttons and boxes Id where anything is lawlz! Ksrslybai
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From ANON - Mizuki Koshiro on July 24, 2011
This was freaking hot! Totally loved it! Wow...
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From missbri88 on July 17, 2011
I'm so sad to see you go, and wish tht, tht horrible person has many bad things happen to them. I guess I'll be following you to wherever you decide to take your fictions.
Loved the story as well.
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From moodysavage on July 13, 2011
Huh... I just went back and read a few pages of the reviews to see what the whole hubbub was about anyways... and can we say 'PC much'? Reminds me of the news station that banned their reporters from using the word 'black' and required them to use 'African American' which may have been fine except for the poor stuttering reporter who tried to tell about the 'African American' athelete from EUROPE! Or when a student complained that another kid had called him a 'white boy' and I just had to say... 'but you are a white boy.'
(yeah I know... they were trying to bug each other... but this just made everyone laugh and it was all good- humor is the best way to relieve tension... seriously)And what about the dumb dumb schools who are going to present a washed down version of Huckleberry Finn? Yeah it'll take out the offensive word... but it won't accurately show what the time period was like and how it was accepted usage compared to what's accepted today.

So readers (and authors lol) who get offended... look at the INTENT. Were they trying to be offensive? If so... then they were offensive... if not...let it go. It's not worth the hurt feelings. The description was not racist... it was INTENDED to be descriptive. Ok... that's my 2 cents.
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From moodysavage on July 13, 2011
hey! Sorry I was behind in my reading and just now finished this. I really liked this story and I liked the way Naruto broke Sasuke down and took care of him. I especially liked how this was told so well with Sasuke's thoughts and state of mind. The whole process was beautifully done. I'd be really interested to see how they handle switching places which would of course be a reward for Sasuke.

Sorry to read about the negative comments that were made. This story is so totally NOT racist or stereotypical and the person who made those comments does not know what they are talking about. But it's also true that there may be many great comments but the ones that often stick out are the negative ones and they can sour the whole experience. Letting go of that anger can be really hard... but it's better when you do because then that takes away their power to ruin something you enjoy (or even just ruin your day). They don't deserve to have that power.

And I'm glad you haven't taken your works down. It's all I can do to keep up with the new stories updated... I haven't gotten around to reading all the other stories yet from the authors I like!
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From ANON - Nivell on July 09, 2011
Great read and I will be following your stories off-site. Just sad how some touchy idiots had to ruin it for the rest of us Naruto readers. I've read your previous stories before and I hardly think you come off as racist or stereotypical. See you on the other site!
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From ANON - SilentShadow on July 08, 2011
I just wanted to say how much I've loved this story and how very sorry I am that it will be your last. Thank you so much for deciding to post it in the end, I've been checking this story regularly for updates. I sorry to hear you've been having problems with some readers it's such a shame. But it doesn't change how great this story is, so thank you for writing it.
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From ANON - Anon on July 08, 2011
I normally don't leave a review of this nature, unless the situation calls for it. As you'll no doubt see, you'll see a couple for instances of *comment removed by admin*.

As the comments removed were name calling, which is FLAMING the other users, or a specific user, that's a ToS violation which is WHY the removal.

As to the reviews about the line within the story which sparked the responses all around, all but one were left alone. The reason for that is that when one publishes to an archive of this nature, or ANY archive, and one wants reviews, one will get them. One asks for concrit, one gets it. Whether or not the author AGREES with the concrit is not the point. The point is, the author (this is for any story) puts his or her work "out there" and if there are parts which the readers think should be phrased differently, they'll say so. Looking at all the reviews referencing the line in the story and pointing out the stereotype, I saw no name calling, nor rudeness. Certainly no call for the author to get offended enough to call those reviewers names, collectively, in an author note.

Any further instances of this will be deleted immediately from this board.
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From ANON - Akira on July 08, 2011
It is really sad that this will be your last story in here, I trully enjoy the full story. thanks for not delet it.
Sadly i cant follow you at your new place, i really dont like the way it works i already had an acocunt there but lef it because the funcions for me are to complicated, i am used to the way ff.net works but i know you cant post this there. I do have a lifejournal account and is more cool than were you go xD, i least i think so heheeh so if you ever post there let me know.
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