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Reviews for The Submissive Dominant

By : Daydreamer79
  • From meowkuu2 on December 22, 2010
    wow.. that was...HOTT!!!!!!!!!!! and yet at the same time i still feel sorry for Sauske.. but.. it feel kinda like Naruto's forcing him... he needs time and space I think still

    but wow.. I love seme Naru and uke Sasu fics and this one is fast going up the top of ma list mew!

    thank you and please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Wow on December 15, 2010
    Its really good and the flow of the story is great
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  • From Mishka on December 12, 2010
    I can't wait to read more! This defiantly hoping he's not submissive Sasuke seems to be so fun to play with! And I really hope Naruto gets into his head--this is going to be amazing!
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  • From ANON - crazyforkakashi on December 11, 2010
    Love it and cant wait for more.
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  • From ANON - grimy13 on December 08, 2010
    Thank you for the update! This is just shocking and I couldn't love it more!
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  • From ANON - Jen on December 07, 2010
    I do like this story so far, Sasuke is an interesting character: I think all the pressure he's feeling in his life right now makes for a logical reason as to why he'd be interested in switching roles. Regarding your author's note at the end of the 2nd chapter: I want to be honest here, like whoever left you that previous comment, I've also found this story fairly reminiscent of other BDSM stories in this fandom, not so much in the sex itself (I agree, there's only so many ways BDSM can be written), but in the scenario of the story. BDSM isn't my personal kink, so I don't read a lot of Naruto stories in the genre, just the better-known ones, but of those that I've read, nearly all had a high-class BDSM club that only elites could go to as the setting (as this one does), and featured characters that were well-connected to the club in some way--either as sex workers (as Naruto is), as senior members (as Sasuke is), or as owners (as Itachi is). And especially because it's this pairing, there's often an "I don't need him as much as he wants me to need him" scene somewhere in the story (as this one has). A couple simple tweaks to the scenario presented here would have helped make this story seem less reminiscent of others, especially if you'd changed the setting. If not that, then made someone Naruto & Sasuke didn't know be the owner of the club, or even made both of them average-Joe club members. This isn't a badly written story by any means--I don't even think it's necessarily a bad thing that this is similar to other BDSM stories written in this fandom (you're in good company, right?)--but yeah, there are definitely some similarities.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 07, 2010
    I like the different take on this story. Please update soon.
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  • From brook13baby13 on December 06, 2010
    A Dom coming onto a Dom...

    I think Naruto gets off on making Doms into Subs. Love the chapter, even through there was little Naruto and Sasuke interacted.
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  • From LividusNight on December 06, 2010
    Love it!!!!!! You never fail to hook me and leave me wanting the next chapter, lol! I really like how this is different from a lot of D/s stories, it's original, and I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - shinejshi on December 06, 2010
    I very much enjoyed the surprise of Haku being a highly desired Dom. The entire chapter had me worried for Sasuke's impending train-wreck. You did a lovely job creating/building the tension leading to Sasuke's crash at the end of the chapter. I'm enjoying your story-line. Looking forward to your next update and seeing how Sasuke will cope with what happened!
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  • From ANON - paintedshadows on December 05, 2010
    So happy there is yet another wonderful chapter up. Hope you're feeling better! Keep up the awesome work!
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  • From POHness1 on December 05, 2010
    very nicely done. i like this chapter. and we all knew that sasuke would resist, so the sasuke/izumo lemon was almost expected. it will take our poor dear sasuke to realize that he is a sub at heart. there will be more resistance, or at least i believe so. still, i cant wait until he gets broken again. naruto will reign supreme. and i see a punishment coming from this little exhibition. hehe ^_^ plz continue. i cant wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Dragon on December 04, 2010
    Great chapter!!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
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  • From ANON - toosweet on December 04, 2010
    This is one of the raer bdsm story's that I really like. Keep the momentum of this story going.
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  • From ANON - Ivy on December 04, 2010
    Loved the ending! Very intense... the dynamic Sasuke feels of trying to deny becoming submissive is wonderfully written. Glad you feel better ;-) This is a very interesting take and is not cliche at all.
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