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Reviews for The Submissive Dominant

By : Daydreamer79
  • From ANON - Raspberry Sakura on December 29, 2010
    wordless now, but I can review again later, can't I? *goes to check*
    Yes, of course I'm not being serious. I'm not a serious person!
    Okay, enough. Review: You're doing really well! I know I shouldn't, but I do have some expectations... I know it's your story, and though it may sound stupid, PLEASE DO WELL UNTIL THE END!
    Oh well, that was just my frustration speaking, heh.
    No, seriously, good job. I loved the instrument part. Hated Genma, but well, we all know him xDD
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  • From ANON - Mai Lan on December 28, 2010
    And again it took away my breath. Wow, shudders shot up and down my spine! Can't wait for the next chapter! This story is becoming my absolute favourite one!
    Thank you for written such an awesome piece of art!

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  • From ANON - Raspberry Sakura on December 28, 2010
    Such a great story! but I was like, 'you idiot, can't you see you NEED IT!!!' So I say it's so great because it made me think that. It's kind of hard to explain... *frowns*
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  • From ANON - richon on December 28, 2010
    ohoh sasu start submitting a little, I lov this sotry, please update soon
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  • From ANON - Jen on December 26, 2010
    Wow. The scene on the dance floor and later the scene in the bathroom were easily the hottest stuff in this fic yet. You've done a really, really good job of showing Sasuke's inner turmoil over his attraction to Naruto; I feel terrible for him. It also, conversely, makes me a bit annoyed with Naruto. What was great about this chapter was that it showed that becoming Naruto's sub isn't just a matter of completely changing how he views himself, but is ALSO a matter of getting used to other people viewing him differently as well. This is major, major stuff (and the reason a lot of people stay in bad relationships--they don't want to think of themselves, and have other people think of them, as someone different). So that's what I find to be somewhat unappealing about Naruto here: Sasuke is undergoing a major shift in identity in order to be with Naruto, but Naruto is...? Sure, Sasuke is giving him a hard time about them getting together, but that's a comparatively small thing. Once he has Sasuke trained, it'll be business as usual for Naruto: he'll be a dom with his sub. That doesn't strike me as very fair at all; if Sasuke has to give up so much, and change himself so much (even if he'll be happier in the end for it), Naruto should also be expected to give up something for Sasuke. I dunno, I feel like at the end of this fanfic, I'll be happy for Sasuke, but not so much for Naruto, if that makes sense. Anyway, I'm sort of curious as to Itachi's involvement in all of this. Did he hire Naruto on purpose for Sasuke's sake (going so far as instructing Naruto to pursue his brother), or did Naruto & Sasuke catch each other's attention without any direct interference from Itachi?
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 22, 2010
    Love the story. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - J on December 22, 2010
    Thank you.
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  • From ANON - Akira on December 22, 2010
    OMGS! whats gonna happen now?? tsk tsk poor Sasuke he did enjoy it but his mental state is going to break... hope he doesn't do something drastic xDD

    update soon
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  • From ANON - yourservant on December 22, 2010
    Totally wicked third chappie!!!!! love it! can't wait to see how Sasuke's wall keeps breaking down one stone at a time!!! Keep up the goood work!
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  • From ANON - J on December 22, 2010
    One word. AWESOME!!!
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  • From serina002000 on December 22, 2010
    OMG that was sooo fucking hot!!!! can't wait for the next chapter!!!!
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  • From cynaga on December 22, 2010
    perfect! I love this NaruxSasu. It's so them, as I see it.
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  • From ANON - Ivy on December 22, 2010
    Like the buildup as if the story will reach the crescendo soon ^_^ Also Itachi walking in on them was a nice touch.
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  • From ANON - admirer GB on December 22, 2010
    I love this story. I have been reading it since the first chapter and never reviewed, but here i am!!!!
    I love your style of writing and you get me everytime with these little cliff hangers. I am kinda obsessed w/
    this fic, soooo not sure what else you had to write that was more important, but please dont forget to update
    this story too!! Until next chapter :]
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  • From ANON - paintedshadows on December 22, 2010
    Yikes, Sasuke just keeps getting in deeper, I think Naruto already has him where he wants him though :P Looking forward to more of this amazing story.
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