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Reviews for The Submissive Dominant

By : Daydreamer79
  • From meowkuu2 on February 13, 2011
    horay!!! I was really getting worried for Sasuke there.. knew he needed to sort himself out..question is..will he be able to do that and will Naruto give him the space and time needed to?

    Looking forward to your next update mew!
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  • From tawanawelch on February 13, 2011
    I really love this and eagerly await your next update. I'm so glad Sasuke had someone to talk this over with. Who knew the simplest advice would be to actually talk everything out with Naruto.lol. For a nanosecond I was thinking to torment poor old Sasu that when he showed up at emergency room, Naruto would be his attending doctor,lol. But I see the point of this chapter was for him to come to terms with the direction he's heading. Awesome chapter!! I really love hinata's part in this. Who'dve thought.^^ No wonder Itachi knows what Sasuke needs.X3
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  • From DewiSri on February 13, 2011
    You... need to update asap.

    It's so damn rare to find a proper D/s story on this site. D=

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  • From tawanawelch on February 13, 2011
    Damn!! That was so amazingly awesome!!!! Naruto really is good with reading people. He knows Sasuke is a control freak but also needs to be as Sasuke put it 'gentled,' I love that term. I like how Sasuke thought about the question posed to him about what does Sasuke want and how no ones ever asked him before. I love Dom Naruto, I'd bend easiy for him too with his gentle way about commanding ur direction. I love how u make him that way and also how broken or rather how in need Sasuke is and how he's very much aware of how Naruto makes him feel. When Sasuke can get over his need to control, it will be an awesome and I can't wait to see that. Sasuke'll be skipping to work and his employees won't know what hit them.lol
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  • From mickey8701 on February 12, 2011
    I have been waiting forever for this story, lol. Nice chapter, but I'm really excited for the next chapter with the NaruSasu interaction.
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  • From tawanawelch on February 12, 2011
    Omg!! I thought this was gonna be humiliating for Sasuke, that he would mess up somehow and present himself as an amateur or something like that. I was so surprised to read of Naruto's approval and was floored when he told Sasuke to come and Sasuke did. The hardest he'd done in a while or ever. LOL! Naruto has Sasuke wrapped around his finger and I love it!!
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  • From tawanawelch on February 12, 2011
    I enjoyed everything about this first chapter. Its like everythings leading to Sasuke becoming what he always ultimately was...a submissive.lol I love how u described how Naruto grabbed his wrist with just enough pressure, no malice intended also how he felt when 'dismissed.' I can'twait to see how he will act with Naruto at the club.
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  • From Gingitsune32 on February 12, 2011
    Wow! Your writing is so believable & it has the spell to draw me in. I think this is a necessary chapter to show Sasuke's struggle. I like that it's not a "I am a Dom but I met Naruto so I am totally a sub now XD"

    Great writing & I can't wait to see what happens next.

    *snickers* Hinata being a Dom is awesome!
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  • From JaydenNara on February 11, 2011
    this story is great. i'm eagerly awaiting the next installment.
    i absolutely love seeing Sasuke out of his mind and comfort zone. most people stick with the norm of the uchiha always knowing what he wants, but it's nice to see him unsure,worried, and a little scared.
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  • From HinaKicksAss on February 11, 2011
    God I'm hoocked. You need to update asap. Pleas~se!!

    xoxo HinaKicksAss
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  • From ANON - Akira on February 11, 2011
    I think the chapter was perfect for the moment, hope you update soon.


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  • From LadySesshoumaru on February 01, 2011
    please update i love this story
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  • From ANON - sesshoumaru4me on January 31, 2011
    beautiful! Please keep writing.
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  • From ANON - ShawdowGirlferrel on January 26, 2011
    i ussually don't like leaving reviews i know it a bad kirk of mine im trying to fix but i just had to tell you that i adore your stories and the drama suspense sadness that comes with them and im not just talking about submissive dominant i mean all of them which include the healing, old lovers and new beginings,The Agoraphobic Incubus,The Flavor of Sin (this was so hot),My Master,Discovery (this was new for me but i loved every min of it),Spirits Within (very funny yet romantic at the same time),Returning Home (go naru love threesomes),The Weight of the Heart (love happy endings),Skin Deep (love model naruto)First Impressions(ooops somebody dip in the cookie jar),Give Me Your All(and then some take it like a man lolololol sorry had to add that),Caramel and Cream(who want vanilla and chocolate when u can have the cream de la cream),What Dreams May Come (this one was sad but original and i love how u blend the story line). so as u can see i've read alot of your lines and believe it or not this was in the span of 3 days yep no lie that why i say i had to give u a shout out and some props. now you might be wondering why out of all your stories i pick this one to write a review in well thats because (k hold your breath here it comes lmfao) ok the truth is because out of all the ones ive read so far this one has yet to have an update and does seem to be complete i hope u dind't give up on it please say it isn't so please have mercy.
    ok ive taking enough space and time hopefully you read this far (crosses fingers) and away your decision oh master dreamer till we meet again or in this case u write again.
    P,S please update
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  • From ANON - Curry on January 09, 2011
    I loved everything about your story. From the more 'technical' point of view, I would like to compliment you on your language, it's deliciously sophisticated and just how I like it to be. The pace is also well-chosen. As for the story, the thing that stands out the most in comparison to other fanfiction that can be found on this site is how you build your characters. It's cohesive, intriguing and convincing. The characters have some kind of magic in them.

    I truly cannot wait to read more from you.
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