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Reviews for The Submissive Dominant

By : Daydreamer79
  • From bridmatt on March 22, 2011
    "Sasuke’s eyes widened as large as was possible considering his Asian heritage."

    I was taken aback to read a line that referenced the "Asian squinty eye" stereotype in your story as though it is fact. It is certainly not fact that all Asian people (as this line implies) have small (squinty) eyes. The Asian squint eye stereotype is one that originated in/was perpetuated by racist Hollywood in order to negatively characterize all Asians as ignorant, docile, etc. For some general information on Asian stereotypes (including this one), please refer to wikipedia:

    http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Stereotypes_of_East_Asians_in_the_Western_world

    Also check out the negative user responses on yahoo questions when someone asked "Why do asians have small squinty eyes?":

    http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index?qid=20090411193947AAnQ0i8

    The difference between Asian and non-Asian eyes is in the upper eye fold, not in the size or shape of the eye (or the facial muscles around the eye which cause it to open and close). You may see for yourself an example of an attractive, large eyed Asian woman in this contact lens advertisement:

    http://community.livejournal.com/garagesalejapan/16907170.html

    I do not wish you to think that I have said all this because I believe you to be racist or even harboring racist thoughts. I do not. What I do think, however, is that all of us unconsciously, and unintentionally, absorb negative stereotypes (racist, classist, sexist, etc.) that society and the media puts out. Sometimes we need to have these stereotypes pointed out in order to realize how pervasive they are and to stop believing in them. (I myself had to be reminded to stop saying the word "retarded.") Therefore, I STRONGLY urge you to change the line. Do not be a party to perpetuating stereotypes.
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  • From LadyLaran on March 21, 2011
    The chapter is fantastic.

    I tried the Ygallery link you provided in your author's page but it doesn't work.


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  • From AngelTalion on March 21, 2011
    I you will be continuing this one... on here! I've got to be honest this is the first BDSM Narutoverse story I've read that held me this rapt. Most of very hot but yours is wow. I really REALLY really want to watch Sasuke learn his submission... and how to live his real life in his dynamic. He's going to become so controled and steady its going to be beautiful! I really hope this isn't the end!
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  • From AngelTalion on March 21, 2011
    I just finished chapter two and happened upon your author's note at the end and honestly... HEREHERE. Also, I not only read all the BDSM I can get but will very very quickly close one that is abusive. There are very few that touch close to the reality of a dynamic lifestyle and this one is VERY well done. Whether its RL learning or research that has given you the ability to write it I want to say it is VERY well done.
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  • From niceladysakura on March 21, 2011
    thanks for updating!

    i always like it when it is Naruto who is the dominate partner of the two, his really that powerful and you could feel his authority..

    oh the anticipation is building up.. i soo like this chapter =)
    Sasuke finally loosen up his control.

    i wonder what will happen next and what is Sasuke's punishment?

    please update soon!
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  • From cynaga on March 21, 2011
    delicious~!
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  • From ANON - Carousel on March 21, 2011
    I love this story. A lot. It is intense, well-written, and engrossing; did I forget to mention hot? Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - bethebeebee on March 21, 2011
    AWESOME!!!!I have waited for this update since like FOREVER!!! Thank you for feeding me ;0
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  • From POHness1 on March 21, 2011
    i do so love this story, and cant wait to read what happens when Sasuke's training really begins. I' sooooo glad that he finally accepted the offer made by naruto (i knew it would take a while, but dang!). cant wait til the next chapter. ^_^

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  • From goodchaos on March 20, 2011
    NOOOOO!!! How will I read you on my iTouch relaxing at StarBucks ;_; My iTouch hate Y!gallery... TT_TT
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  • From arianauchiha23451 on February 21, 2011
    this story had me completely into it from the beginning.... i cant wait to read more
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  • From ANON - SamuraiSaaya on February 17, 2011
    Wow, I absolutely love this story. There's nothing better than a dominant Naruto and a angsty Sasuke. The power play between them is very enthralling and so so hot. Please update soon, cause I definitely hooked!
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  • From ANON - silverfox on February 17, 2011
    I've never really liked a dominant Naruto, but I've read some really well-done stories with him completely owning Sasuke (yours being one of them) and I must say I'm falling in love with the idea. ^.^ I really hope you update soon, I can't wait to see what happens. BTW, how many chapters do you expect this to be? Just curious...
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  • From missbri88 on February 15, 2011
    Wow! Dom!Hina... Lol. I like this story a lot, even though it isn't updated that often. Can't wait for the NaruSasu interaction! Is there anyway to convince you to update this again...? I pledge my undying love and fangirl-ism? My first born child? Anything? Lol. But I can't wait to see you again. Until then...
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  • From ANON - richon on February 14, 2011
    don't worry it's normal to explain sasu's feeling. I love the idear of hinata on dom. I want to know what will happen at sasu place ... see you soon and good valantine's day too
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