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By : Daydreamer79

From randrinawilson on March 24, 2011
I absolutely adore this story!!! there are no words to describe it. I dont see Naruto as being abusive. This is a BDSM story and this is the scene that this plot plays into and you have oulined it very well. Whether people know it or not we all tend to fall into roles when we are in relationships. Sasuke Needed to have all of his concieved walls that he has built around himself broken down so that they can build them back up together. I was floored when he opened that box and found all of those goodies. Now thats a care package. Sometimes you just want the the decisions taken away from you so you can just enjoy the moment but it all bout trusting the partner that you have have. Sasuke trusts Naruto otherwise he never would have agreed to this.
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From LividusNight on March 24, 2011
omg, love where the story is going, thanks for updating so fast! Can't wait to see what happens next, i'm curious to know if naruto still takes him out or if the point of the whole thing was to get him to break down and open up to what hes really feeling.

Love naruto as a Dom/Top. Too many stories leave Sasuke in charge and i'm like, i want it the other way! lol!

Keep up the good work!
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From ANON - LadyAnocsona on March 24, 2011
Well i just send a review, but as i was reading the rest of your reviews i realised you wont be posting to Adultfanfiction anymore. While that really sucks that i wont be able to finish this story, I can understand the reason for not posting on this site. I dont know what YGal, or what ever its called, is or how to go about finding it, so i guess this chapter will be the last i get to read. I wish u the best of luck on your other site.
LadyAnocsona
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From ANON - LadyAnocsona on March 24, 2011
I really like this story. Naruto/Sasuke fanfiction is like my secret love that no one knows about.:) They are the only male/male couple i read about in fanfiction that i can actually envision together. I love them. While I, myself, do not practice or participate in a Dom/Sub relationship, I have read a quite a few stories using this lifestyle as the base. I have to say your story is probably one of the best to come out. Your story is more the just words on the page, it seems to really jump out at you and gives a whole nother story that goes on between the words. Sry if that doesnt make sense I cant really describe it. Just know that I love this story, and Im really looking forward to reading more and watching the story progress to the end. Keep up the great work. I cant wait to read more. Your New Fan, LadyAnocsona
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From AngelTalion on March 24, 2011
Oh was completely there with him! Poor Sasuke. Its one thing to ready yourself on your own steam to please a Top but to the extent of overload not knowing when they'd be there to catch your fall into that headspace... outch. I was moments away from crying with him! I really really hope Naruto is prepaired for that fall out and knows exactly how to handle this. First time down... ugh heart wrenching!!

*blushyness* Your welcome, my feedback is rarely thought about but just whatever the chapter inspired.
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From ANON - volaju66 on March 24, 2011
Amazingly hot! I believe you captured how hard it is to let go and have someone else take control of the situation very well. Yet, usually the outcome is mind-blowing. So in turn I can't wait for your next update.
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From ANON - Art on March 24, 2011
Please Ma'am, my I have some more? I love this story.
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From JaydenNara on March 24, 2011
Thank god I have found your story. At first I wasn't going to read it because of all the terrible stories out their by authors that don't have any understanding of the BDSM culture and don't bother to research, but I am so glad I risked it.

Sasuke is right, Naruto should have been there to administer the butt plug, cock ring and nipple clamps himself, or at least be there in person for support, so I'm curious to see the whole meaning behind the Dom's actions, because leaving a sub on his own for the first time when he's purposely trying to overload his sub is almost cruel. My guess is Naruto wanted to break Sasuke down just enough to prove to him that he would always be there to catch him. Don't take me wrong, I'm not critizing you, it's just my thoughts.

Again, I have to praise you, this story is phenomenal. I look forward to all future updates, though the rapidly increased heartbeat, and barely contained squeal of joy when I see an update is a bit disconcerting.

~Jay
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From tawanawelch on March 22, 2011
OMG!! This is sooo great!! Poor Sasuke has sealed his fate with Naruto. It seems so harsh to not at least let him masturbate for one more night but I guess you have to start somewhere. I love Naruto like this, I would be such a wonderful sub for him.^^
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From ANON - Akira on March 22, 2011
Its sad to read your are not going to post anymore in here, hope you still keep going with the story. sadly I had bad experiences with ygal so i will no follow you there, perhaps if you have i livejournal i could keep taps on you, but ygal nop. Really sad you ara a good writer. that is why i hope at least you finish this story in here.

and btb, this chappie was worth the wait. it was perfect, i wonder know what is gonna happen the next day, XD would sasu be able to hold his hand xDD.

XOXO

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From bloodshound on March 22, 2011
everybody needs someone thry don't have to be in control with i suppose but for a mostly dom type accepting that switch must be hhard.
Don't break 'break' him Naru
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From ANON - Jen on March 22, 2011
I'm still with arya on this: Naruto has it too easy. Everything is falling into place, exactly the way he wants it. By the time he's finished with him, Sasuke will be just another sub. Meanwhile Naruto gets to have all the fun + no struggle; it's a good deal for him. Sasuke ought to have shown the douchebag the door *the second* he said if Sasuke was his he'd know to have dinner ready and waiting for his arrival. The fact that Sasuke got a good punch in is the only thing that calmed me down. Naruto's over-confidence that Sasuke would eventually agree to his terms was infuriating as well. As was the fact that he thinks Sasuke's attitude needs adjusting. Sure, it's part of Sasuke's training, but Sasuke's attitude is what makes him Sasuke. What does Naruto want him for if he wants to "fix" that? (Every second of their lives together Sasuke should be docile, obedient, and attentive? Except for those rare moments Naruto allows to punch him, I suppose.)

I don't know, I think maybe the real problem I'm having here is that besides the mutual haze of lust, I honestly can't see what each guy sees in the other. They've *barely* spent any time together at this point. Prior to the dinner they just had, they met once in the club, had lunch together once, and then messed around in the men's bathroom, also once. Sasuke's agonizing over possibly switching roles makes it seem like it's been much longer, but it really hasn't. It's been a few days? A week? And now Sasuke is making such a massive lifestyle change, and all for someone he barely knows. So I guess I fail to see why Naruto, specifically, is worthy of all Sasuke's inner turmoil and not any other dom. (Choose Haku, Sasuke! He actually treats you with respect!)
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From ANON - silverfox on March 22, 2011
Oh. My. God. I can't wait to see what Naruto has in store for Sasuke. No, really, I can't wait. :-) I really hope you update soon. Just curious, how long do you expect this story to be? I hope it'll be long. ;-) Love it, love you, hope you update soon!
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From ANON - arya on March 22, 2011
love the story. it's quite easy to understand how sasuke's feeling. Your descriptions are very good :) the interactions between naruto and sasuke is pretty hot, and we haven't even gone to the good part. Though for some reason, i feel pretty bad for sasuke. He's the one going through all the trouble while naruto's having all the fun. I think it would be interesting to see naruto suffer a little. But i think i feel this way because i usually like sasuke to be the seme. Especially in this story where he starts out as one, then seeing him struggle like this.
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From AngelTalion on March 22, 2011
Iread this fic... and I hope you don't mind but I refed it on my page as a must read. I've also recomended it to a friend outside the Naru fandome as a good BDSM read :) THis really has become one of my favorites!! I had issues with the word uploade thing. So I just went to the text frame and copy/past out of m doc and find it much easier and less frustrating to deal with... don't know if that helps you any :)
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