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Reviews for The Submissive Dominant

By : Daydreamer79
  • From ANON - M O'Donnell on July 07, 2011
    This is hot. The premise in particular -- not just Dom!Naruto and sub!Sasuke, but that Sasuke is a dom with anyone but Naruto. It makes me want to be Naruto, really -- I may be a bit like your Neji in that I can be in vanilla relationships as easily as BDSM ones, but when I'm in a BDSM context my greatest pleasure as a dom is in giving my sub enough confidence that with anyone but me he's dominant. So congratulations -- you've hit my preferred kink arrangement in more detail than any other fanfic writer I've read, in one of my preferred pairings, in the direction that I prefer. (The only other way I can see Naruto and Sasuke in a relationship and in a BDSM context is as boyfriends who are both subs to the same dom. I just can't seem to read Sasuke as anything other than a sub.) If you ever want a beta who's a kink fiend with a literature degree -- just let me know.
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  • From bloodshound on July 07, 2011
    who did that?! *is incensed on your behalf...
    Seriously, if they don't freaking like it, don't freaking READ it. It's THAT simple.
    People like that make me want to maim them.
    At any rate, thanks for this and thanks for not making Sas a total sub or switch. If someone can be gay or possibly hetro for someone, there's no reason that a person can't be willing to sub for a single master... *shrugs.
    Sas still seems a little gun shy but it's good to see them making progress and trusting each other.
    Also, thank you for not removing your stories. who ever said those things had no right to so please don't take it to heart.
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  • From ANON - Thankyouforstaying on July 07, 2011
    They are complete idiots. Do't listen to them and stay strong. Your work is beauitful and breathtaking :) You and your stories are loved
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  • From ANON - mimi on July 07, 2011
    WHHHAAATT?? I loved this story and I love your writing. I hope you never let those douche bags get to you in any way they are just pissed because they have nothing better to do. I'm sorry you were treated so wrongly and I truly appreciate you putting up this last chapter. Good luck with your writing! This story will always be one of my faves!! :3 (P.s. you are in no way racist b/c you wrote this. I'm black and I totally get it)
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  • From ANON - nive 1234 on July 06, 2011
    I'm really sorry that people were saying that about you.I don't find your stories offense in anyway.I really like this story because I didn't know anything about this life-style.It was very intersting to see.Also, the link to the other website on your page doesn't work
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  • From LividusNight on July 06, 2011
    Love it! I normally don't read stories like this, but I love how you write and gave it a try, and I really enjoyed it! Hope you're back writing on AFF, I really enjoy your work.
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  • From blugirlami21 on July 06, 2011
    Wow, your flaming reviews were kind of crazy, I think. I did not even know how you could be called racist because of one line out of an eight chapter story about BDSM. Way to focus, huh? I can see how the line could be misconstrued but to go on a rant about it is a bit much. There is truth to all stereotypes, whether it's Asian's having small eyes or black people loving fried chicken, which is a fact oddly enough for my family. I think you are an very gifted and talented writer and I have enjoyed every story that you have written except for maybe the ItaNaru ones and I am sad that the comments here and the attitude of some of the reviewers here has made you feel unwelcome. You made a story about a subject that I don't necessarily understand or agree with both interesting and compelling. I don't agree with everything that Naruto did to Sasuke but I did love the internal struggle that Sasuke had to break down his walls and let someone else in and take control.

    To all the readers who didn't agree with Naruto or his demands, isn't that kind of the point? If you don't agree with BDSM, then you are not going to agree with everything that was done. She told you flat out what this was going to be and if you can't respect that then stop reading.
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  • From ANON - reader on July 06, 2011
    2 things:

    1) Great story. Truly. Your writing is really good and I'm glad that you were able to finish your story.

    2) I think you need to get over being butt-hurt about getting called out on the Asian eyes comment. Fact was (and yes I'm Asian, thanks) it was racist and perpetuated the stereotype that "Asian" eyes are small. I'm not calling you a racist - I'm calling your comment racist. There's a difference. Instead of automatically getting all angry and offended, you should think about the people that YOU offended with your remarks and think about how they felt. Put yourself in their shoes. Yes your INTENT wasn't racist or meant to hurt anyone but the fact of the matter is that the IMPACT of your words hurt some of your readers and you need to address that instead of brushing off their feelings by calling them idiots.
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  • From ANON - Carousel on July 06, 2011
    I really loved this story and I'm glad you posted the last chapter. It was such a brilliant story and I think it showed the true depths of submission. I enjoyed it very much and I hope you stay on this site since you are one of my favorite authors.
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  • From ANON - quelliekoi on July 06, 2011
    OMG for a moment I thought you were going to say you quit writing, my heart stopped for a moment{i was like nnnnooooo}I'm so happy I'm a member of y gallery. Please don't stop writing anytime soon. Good NaruSasu fics are hard to find.
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  • From mickey8701 on July 06, 2011
    1. *comment removed by admin*

    2. I love this story. In fact, I love all your stories. I'm glad that you didn't decide to stop them because of the comments of a select few.

    3. I'm not trying to play devil's advocate, but as a minority I can understand how others can get offended by the one Asian comment. The eye thing IS a stereotype by definition. I'm NOT saying that you're racist or that you support stereotypes. I totally understand where YOU are coming from, but I also understand where the others are coming from. I always find it best to avoid mentioning race in a story, unless it's relevant to the plot or meaningful in some way. We still live in a time where there is a lot of racial tension so just avoid it in the future.
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  • From TheMadKatter13 on June 21, 2011
    If i had startes reading this with any less chapters in its repitoire, I would have been left with a case of imaginary lady blue balls but this was the perfect stopping point and I'm so.excited to read more---half of the time I've been reading this has left me holding my breath for what was coming next.
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  • From ANON - SamuraiSaaya on April 26, 2011
    Finally! Woo what a hot scene this was, expertly done. I can`t wait for the next chap!
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  • From ANON - momo on April 26, 2011
    more, more and more!! (please) i can't wait to see how this ends!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 25, 2011
    wow, this fic is just intense, keep it up, you have great character development going on w/c is hard to find in fics...
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