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Reviews for Fox and Raven

By : Hiiroshoken
  • From hisoka on November 05, 2010
    wow,what a battle narutos got alot of power on his side thought it boarders on his sanity.its good to know that he listens to his mate,funny how aparently cold pizza taste just wrong lol.wow so naruto wanted to save gaara not so surprising but still how did they forget about the two peopl that naruto flung through the walls,unless they thought they were dead.poor sarutobi and tsunade,sarutobi's death and tsunade having to be there and see it happen.wonder if mating goes both ways,i mean does naruto have to bite sasuke too or did only sasuke have to do it?well glad to see so many chapters up cant wait to see what happens next
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  • From LorienDarenya on November 05, 2010
    Wonderful, terrific, mind-blowing, and captivating stuff. Keep up the good work!
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  • From minaaaaaaaa on November 05, 2010
    I KNEW IT!! so much win in chapter 5.
    sas and naru drain everyone of their chakra with they sexy activities
    naruto's wtf moment about his body submitting to sasuke's growl LMAO
    tsunade cursing sasuke for molesting naru so early, kakashi being PROUD of him bc of it lololol
    naruto being happy that sasuke's a pet too
    and of course that epic fight of theirs where naru showed that even tho he may be submissive don't fuck with him! whoop whoop! i loved that!
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  • From minaaaaaaaa on November 05, 2010
    smexy lil reunion that was!! and sasuke marked him!! and naruto can talk fluently now. i'm betting orochimaru's bite is giving sasuke pet like attributes?? thats my guess. but again, naru baring his neck in submission was NOICE!
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  • From minaaaaaaaa on November 05, 2010
    wow the setting for this so far is pretty interesting, the fangs and all. and again *squeeees uncontrollably at naruto*
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  • From minaaaaaaaa on November 04, 2010
    am at chapter 2 and 'dobe' is sooo freaking cute!!!! OMG has me fangirling like crazy lololol
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  • From roro237 on November 04, 2010
    Fantastic! I'm hooked!! Your story line is great. I love what you did with Neji Shik Lee and even Ms Pink. The hot was sweet to ^_^
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  • From meowkuu2 on November 04, 2010
    I am soo happy you but this back up and that you're going to update it yea!
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  • From blugirlami21 on November 04, 2010
    I absolutely love this story. I have it bookmarked as a favorite so I can find it and read it whenever I want I like it so much. When it completely disappeared I was near tears I was so upset. SO to have you come back and repost it with the promise of new chapters made my week.
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  • From hisoka on November 04, 2010
    adorble,thats actually the last thing i remember before never seeing this again...well i only remember them being on the roof but its all coming back now.cant wait to see what happens next especilly with gaara coming in soons
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  • From hisoka on November 04, 2010
    i remember this story i use to love it but then it just stopped...well glad its up again really cant wait to get back into it again.hope you can update soon
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  • From LadySesshoumaru on November 04, 2010
    i really like this i am so glad that you reposted it or i would have missed out on such a interesting story and to think i had given up hope on naruto fanfiction but not anymore..thankz....oh and a lil suggestion in your disclaimer you should put you make no money from this fanfiction. if you don't they my just remove it or hide it until its corrected but it is just a suggestion...can't wait to see what happens next.
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