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Reviews for Broken Interlude

By : Darkprism
  • From Prism0467 on May 05, 2012
    I note with keen interest the intuitive way your characterizations shift from dominant to submissive in a given story or scenario; it's fascinating. Additionally, I interpret Itachi's therapy for the pain he had endured (pardon the pun) as finding another similarly lost soul and being a source of something for him that he is desperately in need of himself. It's...Chironic, one of the most compelling demonstrations of it that I have read in any fanfic.

    D/s is about power exchange, but I didn't see an exchange of power here. Even though Itachi made the first move and called all the shots, both parties equally and willingly gave in to a need to submit to something greater; consequently, it put them both in charge in different ways.
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  • From ANON - Tarn Vedra 5 on February 24, 2011
    Wow, just wow I didn't expect this. Just one word: fabulous!
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  • From ANON - Crittr on November 03, 2010
    I adore the way you write, I really do. This was the first thing I read when I woke up and it was just perfect. Your stories and characters just suck me in completely.
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  • From ANON - Nivell on November 03, 2010
    Itachi and Gaara...oh man, my two broken (okay, this fits Gaara more) boys.
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  • From TheReapersMule on November 02, 2010
    You know, this was a great little one shot. I liked it a lot. It gives Gaara and Itachi more of a personality.

    And seriously, two weeks was killer. -luffs on-
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  • From ANON - v on November 01, 2010
    Waiting and waiting and waiting for your updates on the M universe and you hand us one that clutches at the heart..I never could of imagined that scene between I & G and all its done is intrigue me so much more when it comes to their storylines... I love how much jody means to gaara too, its so heartbreaking, their devotion to each other, one wholeheartedly and one unknowingly. :)
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  • From Prism0467 on November 01, 2010
    Okay...so that's Itachi with Kiba, with Kimimaro and now with Gaara. The pretty one gets around, doesn't he?

    This was beautifully emotional. I don't know how you do it.
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