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Reviews for The Outlaw and the Outcast

By : RyuuOokami
  • From DevilnBlue on May 18, 2011
    The ending was so bittersweet. I couldn't just leave this story without leaving a comment on it. I love the fact that Sasuke and Naruto have each other to lean on. That only one of them could pull the other from going to far over the edge and vice versa. The fact that Naruto went beserk in the first place over Sasuke was so reminscent of the first time the blonde acessed Kyuubi's powers that it was endearing that only Sasuke could make him lose control like that.

    I also found it interesting Sasuke and Naruto's different views of death. Even the texture of their skin with Naruto's skin being flawless from Kyuubi and Sasuke's being scarred. It's their differences and the way you make them accept each for all of that that made this a great story. Thanks so much for the experience =3
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  • From Carousel on May 09, 2011
    THis was just beyond sweet, especially that last few sentences.
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  • From moodysavage on May 07, 2011
    awww I loved this. It was so well written and bittersweet. It showed so much caring between Naruto and Sasuke. I think this was perfect.
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  • From bloodshound on May 07, 2011
    tough being them but aat least they have each other.
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  • From cynaga on May 06, 2011
    I adore this~! What a wonderful idea for a story. Please write a full length novel on this Naruto & Sasuke ultra dark ops pair!
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  • From blooshadowfox on November 06, 2010
    THAT was very sweet and compelling, thank you!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 02, 2010
    That was really beautiful, I enjoyed reading that! Loved the ending.
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  • From ANON - Jen on November 02, 2010
    That was unexpectedly sweet! I really liked the tenderness between them. I think if they'd gone any further than Naruto kissing Sasuke's face, it would've spoiled the quiet intimacy of the moment, so you stopped it at the right spot.

    This universe is pretty interesting and honestly, something I think has the potential to happen in the manga--just HOW strong does Kishimoto want to make them before Konoha starts getting nervous? Not that Kishimoto would actually have the heart to exile Naruto, but I could for sure see him giving Naruto enemies because he's gotten too strong. Anyway, I think it might be cool if you did some more oneshots in this universe with them traveling around and having adventures (good and bad) as a dangerous pair of ninjas! I really like this version of Naruto & Sasuke you've created. ^________^
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  • From meowkuu2 on November 01, 2010
    this was so sad and touching at the same time *sighs* I love it!
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  • From smint45 on November 01, 2010
    That was so sweet!!!! Too bad it ended so fast I really liked it!!!!
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  • From cynaga on November 01, 2010
    very nice
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