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Reviews for Challenge! What It Means To Love And Be Loved!

By : AfroDirector
  • From SSShitstorm on December 30, 2010
    I'm not sure what to think.,

    I've got a rape, impregnation, AND Jiraiya fetish, so in theory I should find this incredibly hot, an d I kinda did, but your narration is just so incredibly confusing I had no idea what the hell was going on most of the time.
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  • From ANON - DBLACKSTAR on November 01, 2010
    with your latest not i can finally understand what you were going throught you gave me the point of view to truly enjaoy this story while not what i hoped for it is enough for me to give it 0.79 on the kenpach scale
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  • From AfroDirector on November 01, 2010
    ( I am the author of this text)

    I will have an Omake with the child involved, but the challenge has been finished.

    Part of writing is what not to put down. This becomes present in movie adaptations of books. What the reader creates and fills in with their mind will always be perfect. Nothing a person can write is better than what the reader has in their mind at a certain point.

    As I chose to write this to conform to 'Canon' And not 'AU', the rest of the happenings are filled in by the existing storyline of the Naruto Universe. The ploy being that all of this simply happened 'off camera'.

    I will do many more of these stories, keeping them 'Canon' is a challenge all in itself. In time, you will find your warm and fuzzy feeling at the end of one of these. But this one is meant to end much in the same way as a regular Naruto 'filler arc': abruptly and with no real impact upon the storyline.
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  • From ANON - DBLACKSTAR on November 01, 2010
    still dissapointed i really wanted jiraiya to get hi cumuppance and still same request as my previous review
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  • From ANON - DBLACKSTAR on November 01, 2010
    i'm starting to see a patern here you seem to have a spike in how good your story is with each chapter but then suddenly it plumits i know this may seen insulting but you should not be offended foe this simply proves how much of a devoted reader i am because if i wasn't i would have simply stopped reading but no i keep reviewing because you trully are a talented writer i hated this chapter but i will admit it is magnificent again really hoping the pairing will end with naruto with hinata but the suspense is killing me so could you please tell me what it will be please
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  • From ANON - DBLACKSTAR on November 01, 2010
    man this story is getting better not as good as some of your other chapters but mabey i'm just saying that because i am a huge naruto fan and i don't like seeing him get screwed over like this and i originally thought he would end up with hinata and marry her but with this chapter i'm not so sure anymore but i'm probably just being an idiot but none the less great chapter and can you tell my around how many chapters you plan on writing and cudos on how quickly your getting this chapters because even though your getting them out so quickly the all are truly high quality and i say careful with what your doing with both hinata and neji you are playing with fire my man and it can give you the flare you need or it can burn you to the ground
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  • From ANON - DBLACKSTAR on October 31, 2010
    again this chapter was above par as expected you are geting better the humor in this really helped even out your balance in this story i think that is what was throwing me off of your story the balance was uneven
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  • From ANON - a series of letters on October 31, 2010
    again well written a ever although the story seems to be on a downward slope but nonetheles you writing skills are as good as i have come to expect i shall continue reading out of morbid curiosity and the hopr jiraiya gets a beat down and to see naruto come into this. what you did with kiba very well done hateded it very niceley worked in
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  • From AfroDirector on October 27, 2010
    You have many things correct with your statement. Unfortunately, even though I let my mind run wild.. This is done in response to a challenge, so I have plot rules to abide by as named in the summary. If you would like to make a request for another fic that I haven't written, feel free to challenge me. But this one is going according to: http://www2.adultfanfiction.net/forum/index.php?showtopic=12831

    Words are unlimited, time is unlimited, imagination is limitless. If I can welcome you into my audience of writing by appeasing your needs, then simply challenge me through my e-mail. Thank you for your honest review, I especially like how you don't like the direction, but are still reading the story, this, makes me feel strongly that you enjoy my style at least, and you are both welcome, and once again, I'm sorreh. :P
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  • From ANON - DBLACKSTAR on October 27, 2010
    listen man i like this story but this latest chapter is kindof turning me of the story i mean you just had jiraiya rape hinata and whats going on is she gonna get pregnant because he basically told her nothing about what was going on and what you wrote at the end about jiraiya leaving and hinata keeping his seed inside herself kind of unneved me about this story and by what i read this might sound stupid but i'm getting a vibe your going to have hinata have jiraiya's baby then tsunade is going to take it as her own since she can't have a child i just hav a feeling your going to take this story in a bad direction but yet i want to see how it turns out even though i will probably be dissipointed and this is a completly unbiased opinion
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