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By : writeaddict
  • From misakixusagi on January 23, 2012
    very cool, storys great so far love the 18+stuff, good description :D
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  • From RandomFangirl16 on April 27, 2011
    The sex scene was just peachy in my opinion. While I love Kimi/Naru, I'm personally waiting for the Shika/Naru.
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  • From AngelTalion on April 21, 2011
    The sex was very hot last chapter... if I didn't say so last time. I got distracted by the resident genius and the evil Uchiha mastermind. :)

    I love love love... uhg LOVE the idea of sweaty sexy Shikamaru nad i'm not one of those girls who likes the whole sweaty guy thing. Naruto is a TEASE all hair strokey and sweet while getting Shika to bandage him up after rough sex with someone else. *sighs*
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  • From ANON - melivnssyn on April 19, 2011
    It's not that I didn't like the scene, I didn't like the players. Sorry, but just my opinion.
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  • From Santina82 on April 19, 2011
    I like the story so far. Keep it up! :) As far as the sex scene, I would rather you wrote the Shika Itachi one :) Naruto doing what he did seamed kinda wrong.. Actually I was very surprised when I read that Nearuto refused to have sex with Kimi for so long. It always seemed for me that sexual tension was all they had together. The way they got together was purely physical deal. So I was thinking that they f*cked like bunnies, but otherwise could not connect. So I was kinda surprised.


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  • From moodysavage on April 18, 2011
    About the lack of comments on the sex scene... I don't know about everyone else... but it's not that I didn't like it. It's just that I was hoping it wouldn't happen because I wanted him to come to his senses before then. Hearing all of Shika's thoughts and feelings made it hard to read in detail about Naruto being oblivious with someone else because I knew that would hurt Shika. It's actually easier to think of Shika with Itachi because they both know about his feelings and it won't turn into something else and might even comfort Shika who knows.
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  • From AngelTalion on April 13, 2011
    HOT!! Wow... very pretty... very smexy... very very nice! :) Heehee Naughty Itachi!
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  • From ANON - destiny_18 on April 11, 2011
    oh i new it!!! i new it! i new it! i new it! i had a feeling man! i had a feeling that SOMETHING just SOMETHING was gonna go down with itachi and shika! and i was right!!!!!! lol plz excuse my excitment, i just had a HUGE feelin tht somethign was gonna happen btween them. ok m=now u most def have 2 update cuz i SOOOOOO wanna read that hotness thats gonna come up in the next chappy........... there is gonna b some itachi/shikamaru in the next chapter right????? i hope soo!!!!!!
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  • From Dorkchic on April 11, 2011
    At first I was all "No, Naruto don't do it!", but the way you wrote it works well. Their relationship sort of progresses so there is more build up and angst (which I will never say no to) and he was up front about his reasons for sleeping with Kimi (hell, he basically flat out said that he was using him). This also puts him and Shika on closer to equal footing with both of them being physically involved with someone. It manages to give Naruto something to grind his teeth over (when he finds out) while having absolutly no excuse to do anything about it.

    Itachi (a.k.a. you) is a genius- it is a predicament almost entirely of Naruto's own making and he will be forced to do some self examination and make some hard choices concerning his life if he wants things to get better. With some steamy porn along the way! If I were Naruto and knew that my hot roommate was just in the next room being molested by the walking embodiment of sex I don't know if I would be able to not peek. The temptation to misuse that kind of access would be just terrible.

    In sort of related news- have you been reading Freeze Burn Tokyo by Leilita? Absolute Shika hotness - you two need to get together and see of you can give all of us readers one big massive yaoigasm! lol
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  • From moodysavage on April 10, 2011
    I actually didn't want Naruto to sleep with Kimi...but I guess that balances out the fact that Shika is going to be sleeping with Itachi. Now that does interest me and I think it is a good way to get Naruto to take notice.
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  • From Prism0467 on April 10, 2011
    Itachi x Shikamaru. I swear to god my panties exploded!
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  • From ANON - richon on April 10, 2011
    no naru don't !! you are making stupid thing it's not the good guy. love this story !!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 07, 2011
    Hi! Just thought you might want to know that Chapter 25 was posted twice.
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  • From AngelTalion on April 04, 2011
    ROTLFMAO --> Stalker!Sasuke.. you know he IS the sort of person who becomes completely obsessed... this works on an incredibly desturbing level.

    Yummy! Yummy! Yummy I've never considered ItachiShika, but seriously there are very FEW people they wouldn't be delicious with. *sighs*


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  • From Dorkchic on April 04, 2011
    Sasuke is a selfish little punk and his ego is so massive and overbearing that if you ironed it out flat and cut out shapes of dead dictators (think Napoleon...etc) they would actually get up and attempt to go conquer things- with still enough ego left behind in the scraps to make a Donald Trump, Russel Crowe, and a Mel Gibson. On a brighter note- I love how much joy Itachi is getting and is going to get out Sasuke's continued immature (very un-Uchiha) behavior.

    I wish I had thought of Itachi as a possible candidate for Kimi. I did not realize that he was going to be in this story. I don't know why I did not think of it considering this is AU and therefore there was no clan murdering. I have no idea why but everytime I try to picture Itachi the first thing that comes to mind is him walking out of some body of water. I am not particular about the water - pool, lake, river, ohhh or a steam filled onsen and you can just stand there and watch the water run in channels down the grooves in his torso and stream from that gorgeous hair (partially in his face). Once again there is nothing quite like long, lean, and defined. The only thing that makes it even better in Itachi's case is the level of self-possessed confidence he exudes. You just know when he looks at you that he is devious, playful, and in control - nothing is going to ruffle him. He also looks like he knows exactly what he is doing if you know what I mean and that it will probably involve some kinkiness and maybe some dominance (you hope... ok, I hope).

    There has got to come a point where Naruto starts taking some control and being proactive instead of just spinning off at an angle whenever something slams into him. He just keeps getting himself in deeper and if he sleeps with Kimi because of this he is going to feel so guilty about it later because he will feel that he led him on in some way.
    Once again... I love this story!


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