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Reviews for The Things That Don't Match

By : writeaddict
  • From ANON - Anon on February 17, 2011
    shika/naru please. I love this pairing and it is the reason I began reading.
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  • From ANON - qwerty on February 17, 2011
    I still feel like Shika would be better because he knows Naruto better. Perhaps have Kimi and Naruto have their little fling, Kimi screws up somehow and Shika saves the day!
    Good (but short) chapter!
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  • From DeviousLilDevil on February 17, 2011
    ShikaNaru all the way! Not enough of those in this fandom.
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  • From Sunnyfox on February 16, 2011
    Plz, let Shikamaru be the one for Naruto!
    Shikanaru! :3
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  • From ExposedDesires on February 16, 2011
    If Shikamaru didn't end up with Naruto this story wouldn't make sense. The whole plot is centered around Shika's unrequited love for Naruto, and if the story ends with Kim/Nar it would suck balls. I thought having Naruto sex up everyone while he was away was off and drifting away from the original plot line, but chalked it up to plot/character development and kept reading, so if you change the final pairing this story is moot.
    Keep in mind that this is your story, you control where it goes, not the readers. We're just here for the ride, so if you plan to let one of your readers influence your writing or your original story plan then there is no point in writing at all because you would grow to hate what you have created or at the very least lose interest. Your writing thus far has been very insightful, I would hate to see you destroy such a well thought out story by changing the plot to suit one person. The story is more important than being popular or a people-pleaser, write something you'll be proud of or don't write at all.
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  • From DeceptivelyHonest on February 16, 2011
    Shika/Naru! Cos its so damn sweet! and I think I'd be really disappointed if it were to change from that now!
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  • From ANON - Ari on February 16, 2011
    I would love to see this turn out to be a Shika/Naru. Its a pairing that is not done to often, but I do enjoy
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  • From Ajablue on February 16, 2011
    I am voting for Shikamaru. Though I enjoy your Kimi and he needs more love. Maybe he gets his own story and love as a sequel?
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  • From missbri88 on February 16, 2011
    No Kimi/Naru!!! Shika/Naru for the win! Please. I'm reading I'm looking forward to more.
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  • From ANON - mari on February 16, 2011
    just voting for shika/naru and wanted to say I think it's a great story
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  • From ANON - Yuki on February 16, 2011
    Shika/Naru!! PLEASE!!! PLEASE!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - shadowkat on February 16, 2011
    Keep it shikamaru and naruto. There are not many good ones of them.
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  • From ANON - librarycat9 on February 16, 2011
    Shika... Definitely Shikamaru...
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  • From ANON - Tweedleedee on February 16, 2011
    Can I vote more than once. Like, a thousand times? I want Shika/Naru, PLEAAAAAAASE(Insert anguished scream here)!!!!!!!
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  • From Drumanel on February 15, 2011
    Shika/Naru please! For some reason I would feel extremly sad for shika if he didnt end up with him. Like his one shot at love was taken from him
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