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Reviews for The Things That Don't Match

By : writeaddict
  • From Dorkchic on March 07, 2011
    I am voting for Kimi to be with Neji or Gaara. Gaara and he are of a like temperment and he would not freak out about Kimi's job. Plus I can just imagine the delicious sounds that Kimi could wring from him and the kinkiness those two could get up to. As for Neji... two glorious lush manes of long hair clinging to sweaty, lithe, and panting bodies... I am gonna stop now because my imagination could lead me to trouble. Cannot wait for the next chapter!
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  • From mistressofyaoi on March 07, 2011
    i like this story i do but the new chapter feels rushed and too short
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  • From AngelTalion on March 06, 2011
    Ahh Shikamaru that was a little underhanded... I love it! :)

    And that is exactly what I meant. Maybe the best way for Naruto to figure out just what Shika means to him is to have someone else take that attention away frm him. :) (the link is working I just copy and paste it into my address bar.)
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  • From Prism0467 on March 06, 2011
    All right Shikamaru! Way to enforce your boundaries!

    Naruto is about to get pushed out of his comfort zone again...
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 02, 2011
    Hey! Loved the last two chapters! Can't wait to see how the relationships unfold from here on out! Kepp up the good work!
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  • From moodysavage on February 28, 2011
    Good good good! I'm glad the new BF isn't there hanging out with all the friends. That would be really hard on Shika.
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  • From AngelTalion on February 28, 2011
    SERIOUSLY! I don't know who to smack harder right now. Naruto or Shikamaru. BOYS!!! hrmmm... now I want Shikamaru to start dating someone just to see how Naruto would like it. Or... appear to be seeing someone. Maybe just hanging out with a new friend... I don't know. Just something to knock some sense into Blondie Bear!
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  • From ANON - librarycat9 on February 24, 2011
    you know... Sasuke and Kimimaro could hook up...
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  • From tjrender on February 24, 2011
    Hello, I know it's been said, but Naruto and Shika absolutely MUST get together...
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  • From AngelTalion on February 24, 2011
    *holds up a glittery Shika/Naru banner* YAY! Poor Shikamaru though... ugh he's really hurting and Naruto is just... Naruto.
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  • From missbri88 on February 24, 2011
    Yay for Shika/Naru! I thought I was gonna have to bail on this fic for a moment. :whew: :D I took a chance on trying something new with this fic and I'm liking where it looks like you're taking us. I can't wait for more.
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  • From Prism0467 on February 24, 2011
    The link to your responses in the forum isn't working.

    Great chapter, though.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 20, 2011
    I like what you've done with Shika in this chapter, although i kinda wished that Kimmimaru was at their place to yell at him when he returned from his wanderings. Personally i would like to see Shika/Naru over Kimmi/Naru, but done well, it really wouldn't matter. Maybe a threesome? Teehee. Good work, hope to see another update when you get the chance!
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 17, 2011
    I like it goin' in the ShikaNaru direction. thsi story is so cuuuute and sad
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  • From ANON - kiayu on February 17, 2011
    shika/naru
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