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By : writeaddict
  • From ANON - moodysavage on April 03, 2011
    ahhhh...Naruto there will be no changing this... Shika will definitely be hurt
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  • From missbri88 on March 28, 2011
    Oh! 'Tachiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!!! (Swoons) More please?!
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  • From ANON - richon on March 27, 2011
    go go shika you can tell him how you feel. love this story!!!
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  • From Dorkchic on March 26, 2011
    Alright, Itachi enters! I was wondering if there was anything that could make this story sexier and now it is here. All the hotness of Sasuke (hotter actually) combined with maturity, experience, sensuality, and a value-sized helping of devious. Itachi makes everything sexier and I am glad that he is there for Naruto even against his own brother. Even more to the point I love that he is going to help Naruto indirectly by helping Shikamaru.... and by possibly helping himself to some Shikamaru! Its a win-win!
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 26, 2011
    I love(d) Itachi and how you protrayed him. I like it even more that he's going to help Shikamaru... I liked how you make Kimmimaru's behavoir change, and visibly to Naruto, after his dicussion with Shikamaru. Anywyas, great chapter as usual. Can't wait to see the next!
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  • From AngelTalion on March 25, 2011
    *SQUEE* Itachi... really Shika/Itachi.... oMg!! That is just made of YUM! I almost feel bad for Naruto now, its just hard to compete with an Uchiha. Heehee Though, Naruto is kind of thick. I did love that Shika not talking to him got under his skin right away. Itachi keeping Shikamaru busy might really screw with Naruto. Is it WRONG that this idea makes me really happy?!
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  • From moodysavage on March 25, 2011
    yeah... get a plan & go get him shika! and with Itachi helping? (though one wonders about his motives)...
    but still... go shika...go shika...go shika (doin' my little dance to cheer him on)
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  • From AngelTalion on March 21, 2011
    GAHHHH... Naruto is a bone head. Its Shika he's leaning on with his frakkin boyfriend there. *head thump* Just... GAHHH... Shika needs someone to be facinated with him... *pets poor Shika*
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  • From Dorkchic on March 21, 2011
    That holding and massaging Naruto was kind of spiteful of Shika wasn't it? I like it! He probably did it to illustrate his point to Kimi, but it still had a little bit of a 'nanner nanner nanner *sticks out tongue*' feel to it lol. I also love how he just calmly said that he had to do something about Naruto being with Kimi- it was almost as if he were ticking items off of a list. "Hmmm... finish the laundry, get the oil changed in my car, break up my best friend and his new boyfriend, pick up some milk, and pay the electric bill- all in a days work. It was not even like he was saying something that he wished to see happen. It was more like a statement of purpose. Shika is just efficient like that.

    I am kind of curious to see how the transition between Naru/Kimi goes to Naru/Shika and Neji/Kimi. Knowing Shika it will be subtle and clever. If we are at all lucky it will involve all of them naked in an enclosed space at the same time. Naruto with his gymnasts build (developed as hell on the upper torso and arms and narrowing down to slender hips with a great ass). Kimi and Neji with their long lean builds. Not much bulk, but with a lot of definition (the kind of guy with 2% body fat). I picture Neji as having a more defined midsection with obliques that cut in about an inch on each side at the hip with dancers legs and Kimi as having slightly larger arms and very strong defined forarms and hands (because of his chosen profession) and his upper back would be a work of art. In other words Kimi would have Brad Pitts bod in Fight Club- seriously look at him when he comes out of his bedroom from having sex with Marla Singer or a couple of the fight scenes). This is what Neji's body would look like...

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZPsYg4yqWmQ&feature=fvwrel

    Shika would be fit and trim, but I cannot see him as being overly developed due to his nature. He probably would have really great legs and ass because he seems the sort to get in the majority of his exercise by running so he could work on stuff in his head at the same time. Yes he would even multitask then lol. Like a soccer players build. That and he would have gorgeous slender, long-fingered, delicate artist hands all covered by that beautiful almond skin. All of them together sweaty, writhing, gasping, clenching. Either Naru or Shika would look amazing sandwiched between those two long-haired, alabaster-skinned....

    ...It's a good thing I suck at art because the level of eroticism and porn that goes on in my head should probably never be committed to canvas. You really should never have told me to give my imagination free reign. This is the kind of smut that issues forth.
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  • From moodysavage on March 20, 2011
    you go shika! go get him!
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  • From missbri88 on March 17, 2011
    I did like the Gaara/Hinata het pairing. It always interested me after I found it. I can't wait to see this coming conversation...
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  • From AngelTalion on March 16, 2011
    GAH!! It is a bit of a cliffy and I hurt SO much for Shikamaru. *sighs* SOO want to smack Naruto. *snuggles Shika*
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  • From Dorkchic on March 16, 2011
    Way to go Shika! I love that he pushed those two together for their own good. Also awesome is Gaara making sure that Hinata understands that he has her back and she has nothing to be ashamed of. It is uncommonly sweet of him. I hated that this chapter was as short as it was, but that was mostly because I wanted to read the conversation between Shika and Kimi. I guess I will have to wait for the verbal spar that will be forthcoming. No one can get in clever little jabs like Shika!
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  • From ANON - richon on March 15, 2011
    i would be pissed too if i was shikamaru. this story is awesome. I like it!! please update soon to know how they will react and when shika will tell naru
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 08, 2011
    Checked the other link, the reveiws are visible. My heart cries for Shika... Anyways, can't wait to see what you put out next, keep up the good work!
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