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Reviews for Freshmen Chronicles

By : afficek7
  • From tawanawelch on March 01, 2011
    I really enjoyed reading this story. It had it's tragic moment but it wasn't totally focused on it, which was nice but it did tie up the loose end. Like you said several things were answered that was great too. I really felt happy for Ino and Sasuke's beginning toward a wonderful relationship. Other parts of the story were hilarious!! Like Thanksgiving and the road trip, especially with Kiba.XDD Good luck with your future endeavors and I hope to read another new story from you when you can.^^
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  • From ANON - KNARF on March 01, 2011
    actually i and a fan of narususu but you are right men tent to make strong with others men especially if the gone trough a life chaenging situation. a totally love this st from begining to end a love the plot so much i did not maind the no narusasuu part o well you are greate write i woul love to read you novel.
    p.s. G.L.
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  • From ANON - crayonbox on February 28, 2011
    Read it all and I'm impressed. Really, really impressed. The humor (I really like how you describe things) has been cracking me up more then I can count and yet there is still the underlying line covered with the slime of serious business (You describe the emotions well from and seen through Naruto's pov). Sasuke being denied a life all for the sake of his father's drive towards insanity makes me feel sad. No child should be raised that way.
    I like your Ino. She is not like the annoying nag from the first part of the manga (I like her more in Shippuuden). Although the Sas/Ino pairing is on my dislike-list, I am actually rooting for the two to get back together in your story and for Fugaku to get some serious counceling... I'll just wait and find out when the last chapter is posted.
    Also, I'm horribly in love with the visage of Itachi eating cake and looking all innocent while enjoying said cake.

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  • From ANON - kanazerosukenaru on February 27, 2011
    how much do i have to pay you to make this a narusasu fic????? seriously i love everything about the story, but the pairing.....sasuino....just doesn't do it for me...not even a little
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  • From ANON - crayonbox on February 27, 2011
    I'm at chapter 7 now and reading the last chapter (chap 6), the only thing I can say is; Do I smell a hint of bromance between Nar and Sas? *sparkly eyes*
    (I'm so sorry to bother you with my crappy reviews, but this story gives me some sort of sugarrush. The need to read more and trying to stiffle my laughter (I lurve Sasuke's Engrish) is addicting.)
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  • From ANON - crayonbox on February 27, 2011
    Okay, ready to read chapter 5. I'm actually surprised that this story has such few reviews. I like the way you write and your humor makes it lol-worthy. I'm in love with Naruto and I desperatly want to rob him of his ninjaturtle nightlight. After reading the part about Asian's trying to 'function as one' where Europe is a free...er...Europe, I feel bad for Sasuke. Will Itachi ever show up and sooth his baby brother? (blatant fangirl here.....)
    I'm going to read chap 5.
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  • From ANON - crayonbox on February 27, 2011
    Ever read a summary and go 'Meh, I'll keep this for later?' I'm actually glad I did.
    I just read the first chapter and I'm happy that I have eleven other chapters to read before having to breath down your neck and demand more. I'm not sure wether I will like the rest, but the first chapter made me laugh more then... I have done for the past week, I think. Laugh, that is. Hell, anyways, I'll continue reading... I think Sasuke just entered the room and Naru is going to enjoy every second of it.
    Tata. :D
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  • From ANON - kanazerosukenaru on February 15, 2011
    Hey I've been reading your story and your author's notes make it seem like you are not very interested in finishing this story. We are all very busy in our lives, and so hearing you say that you are not motivated and you hope this fiction helps you kick start your 'real' writing just kind of puts some of us off. We all have other writing projects going on, for example I have a Care Management paper that I have to write for a nursing class yet, here I am taking the time to leave you a review. Stop telling us how much you think this is not worth your time and maybe you will get more reviews.

    I like the plot for your story, you say it is in the friendship, general category so I guess that means you will not have any boy on boy love between naru and sasu, which may or may not keep me from reading, I guess it all depends on how good your plot continues to be. I will try to leave as many reviews as I can, as I continue to read, I'm not a fan of non Naru/Sasu/Naru pairings, but if the story is good I always give feed back, that is why I took the time to let you know my thought. You have to keep in mind that if your readers feel like the story may not be continued they may lose interest and not even bother to finish reading or leave a review. Hope I didn't offend you, just telling one busy writer what it's like for us readers out here. I took down all my work and placed my status on Hiatus on my sites because I knew I was not going to have time to write or answer questions about when the next update would be. I had 8 stories up and now they are gone, and may not be up again....but at least I was honest with my readers. Maybe one day I will return to writing for the fandom, but for now I'm still having fun reading other people's stuff when I can.

    Keep doing your thing and be honest with us, that is all we ask.
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  • From PnKnG on November 18, 2010
    Very nice development for the story so far.
    Loved the naughty bit at the start of chapter 6 *giggle* Any chance of seeing any of the other ladies in a more detailed lemon with Sasuke? (Maybe Hinata if you can/want to do that paring and are into it).
    Could you give us a bit of an overview for all the parings included in the story?
    Cheers and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From KatieKat on November 15, 2010
    Six chapters in and I'm already hooked! This sounds like it's going to turn out to be a fantastic story!
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  • From setoswifey on November 10, 2010
    Wow this is really good. I wonder what Sasuke's story is and why is he trying to stay in his father's good graces. Maybe we will see some Itachi? Great story and I cant wait to read more.
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  • From tjrender on November 08, 2010
    This is a great story, I can hardly wait to see where you take it---
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  • From SSShitstorm on October 13, 2010
    ...I...I love you.
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