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Reviews for Hottan (The Beginning)

By : ChrisAbi
  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on May 17, 2011
    Oh Gods, it was such a bliss to be underage.
    When I read things like this one I miss it so much I want to cry.
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  • From nekluvshp on January 23, 2011
    That was wonderful!!!! I can't wait for the next story!!!! And it's not going to be Izumo/Naruto?!?! I was just starting to really like them. Who is it going to be then?!?!
    There is one thing I want to point out, however. Jiraiya said he could have Izumo prosecuted because of Naruto's age. Actually, he can't. In Japan the age of consent is 13. Meaning, Naruto is old enough to sleep with who ever he wants.
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  • From moodysavage on January 23, 2011
    I so did not see that coming. And when they got in the accident I just cried. I know why they couldn't be together but that doesn't stop me from wanting them to be together. And they were so in love and so hurt. Actually I hurt for Kotetsu too. This was beautiful. Crap... I'm still crying over this. Please start yosougai soon.
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  • From moodysavage on December 31, 2010
    oh... my... gosh...I cannot begin to tell you how blown away I am by your story. I have my favorites...everyone does. And this is the first story I have read by you...and oh my gosh. This story just immediately grabs you and pulls you in. I was expecting something cute. What I got was something that was probably one of the hottest stories with a real plot that I've ever read. Actually when people go for hot with out plot it just doesn't leave a lasting impression. And you have written them so REAL. Your writing style, character development and pacing are sooo perfect. I'm a diehard Naruto & Sasuke fan but after the first chapter I didn't even THINK of him. Now that's talent. SOOOO looking forward to more. I am worried though about what will happen when they find out Naruto is only 16. Angst.
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  • From Prism0467 on November 07, 2010
    Naruto and Izumo?! That's new.

    Interesting.
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  • From drivven on October 09, 2010
    Thank you for polishing it off and posting it up, Fairy. Luv ya!
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