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Reviews for Angels Aren’t Born…They are Built

By : AmberDDawn
  • From ANON - Zeph on October 08, 2010
    I read the first 3 chapters so far and I'm impressed. The story is very interesting and has got a lot of potential. I'm so curious what Naruto's part in the story will be. Is he also a robot like Sakura or does he work for Orochimaru? Please continue!
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  • From ANON - ANON on October 06, 2010
    i really like this, the fic has a good topic that can become even more interesting. congrats¡
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  • From ANON - qwerty on October 06, 2010
    Interesting! I like the concept a lot! You should continue this!

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  • From ANON - Jen on October 06, 2010
    This is an interesting story so far. I like the fact that Sasuke met Sakura first before meeting Naruto, it's unexpected that the love interest isn't the first one to show up, and also shows what kind of guy Sasuke really is since he chooses to help Sakura not because he's attracted to her or wants anything from her, but because he has a few basic principles (just like pre-timeskip Sasuke used to have). From that standpoint, I'd disagree with the other reviewer that Sasuke is too nice. He's about as friendly to Sakura here as he used to be in the manga (which is to say, not very), so that's actually pretty in-character. There's no reason he absolutely HAS to be an amoral bastard/mini-Orochimaru, is there? I'm curious to see what you're going to do with Naruto: is he going to be a robot like Sakura, or maybe someone who works with the robots, like an engineer? Looking forward to the next chapter. :)
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  • From ANON - DBLACKSTAR on October 05, 2010
    so far this story seems intresting enough although i think your making sasuke a bit to empathetic or nice one of those two not sure wich but you should definetly continue this story it does have potential and i would love two see a sasu-naru especially with a submissive naruto
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  • From butterflies1974 on October 05, 2010
    Interesting...I can say that I am very interested in reading more. Very unusual and it has defineately caught my eye. Look forward to more.
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