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By : shinigamislayer
  • From ANON - Rainwater on April 21, 2013
    Fucking deliciously hot, holy hell!
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  • From ANON - serenity on March 31, 2012
    Dude, the stories you write should come with the warning "slip and slide". first you slip into the story and get really horny, and then before you know it, you're fingers are sliding down to finger/jerk yourself. well, for me anyway, thanks for getting me hot and horny. ;-)
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  • From katokachan on September 21, 2011
    I love this one-shot so much! GOD.
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  • From Satski on December 09, 2010
    Uwah next chapter!! next chapter!! onegai-shimasu!
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  • From ObscurexShadow on December 08, 2010
    I love how dominant you made Naruto in this fic.
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  • From DevilnBlue on October 10, 2010
    *squees* Oh my god that was so fricking hot. I could so picture the two texting each other like that and oh if it wasn't for Sakura they could have hooked up sooner. I hope there is another chapter to this... maybe even a three-shot. Yeah, I know I'm hopeful but like the second be the bathroom scene and the third be aftermath or what not. This should so continue >
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  • From ivanamiller on October 10, 2010
    very hot, you did a very very good job!
    and definately it should get a sequel, it can't end like this!!
    :D
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  • From OddGadget on October 09, 2010
    Ahhh! I wanted more, after reading them I wanted more to happen and it so made it sound like there was going to be another chapter. T.T
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  • From Hotanimeguysfan on October 06, 2010
    EROTIC!! HOT!! STEAMY!! OH MY GOSH that was INTENSE!!! I can't wait to read the next chapter!! We have to find out what happens next!! :) Wicked Grin!! :) LOVE IT!!!
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  • From missbri88 on October 05, 2010
    HOT! Can there be more?
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  • From ANON - Jezabel-Swan on October 05, 2010
    Oh dear *fans self*
    That's so heavy Sexting!!!
    I was really waiting for Naruto to forget the others and take the Uchiha where he stands, but holy hell, that was NICE!!!!!!
    Definitely needs a sequel!
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  • From meowkuu2 on October 05, 2010
    NOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!! please don't let this continue as a one shot!! i need more!!!
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  • From ANON - Macy on October 04, 2010
    Another awesome work from you. That was a fun and hot read. I like it!!
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  • From suzannecmc on October 04, 2010
    slutty and fun and holy cow!!!

    this rings more true than we all want to admit ;)
    thank you and hope you decide it continues:)
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  • From HitomiKanzaki on October 04, 2010
    man that was hot. I kinda wish there was a lemon with it but at the same time i think that would ruin it; which is probably what you where thinkin' lol anywho great fiction.
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