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Reviews for What lies beneath

By : asuka5271
  • From ANON - ohitsjordan on October 08, 2012
    That.. That caught me off guard... Poor Sasuke.
    It was fantastic! It made me cry a bit, but it was amazing none the less!
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  • From ANON - EnRagedLamb on August 20, 2012
    OH SHIZZLE MY NIZZLE HIZZLE, I honestly did NOT see that ending coming. I mean, I probably should have if I knew that this story was going to have a surprise twist ending... but no, I just thought it was another tastless fanfic plot that was overly used yet still enjoyable to read. I was WRONG. I don't normally give reviews like this, like everyone else who are lazy or don't really care to, but I had to write this so that I can tell you how wrong I was and how sorry I am. lol I don't know why. Do you know how hard it is to find decent fanfics? ('Course you do. lol) This story was pretty good, and I was like, "Meh, I'll read since I like supernatural stuff and SasuNaru." Then I finished and I was like, "Oh shit!!! NARUTO WAS THE GHOST!? S/he pulled a "The Others" twist!!!" (Have you seen that movie?! Intense and creepy as fuck!) The way you started your story, it didn't seem at all like Naruto was the ghost, just like the movie, so that's why I definitely gotta applaud you for that. Near the end though (I'm assuming you completed this story), I feel it was a bit rushed even at the scene where Naruto found out. Obviously it needs work like every other story out there but I'm not complaining since I read it out of entertainment and not to critique (Gotta put down your grammar Nazi liscense sometimes, ya know? I ain't professional anyway so who cares?). Again, great job. Good luck on your next project!!!
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  • From MagicalReality on February 26, 2011
    I have to be honest, I was suspicious about the plot from the very beginning, but I was still shocked! I don't want to say anything in case I ruin the ending for somebody just starting it, but I the last two chapters really made me sad. I got a little misty eyed and I feel so sorry for them both. I will definitely be reading Sasuke's story, just to get his viewpoint on all of this. Well done!
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  • From smint45 on February 15, 2011
    No thats not fair!!! Why can't they be together!!! I really don't like storys without happy ending *lying on the flor crieing her eyes out* That was even worse than Sirius and Dumbeldores death put together!!! But I loved the rest of the story!!! Only the ending was way too sad!!!
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  • From meowkuu2 on February 15, 2011
    *stares*... I hope u kick Minato's ass in the sequel...*sniff*.. I think I'm going to go cry now.....
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  • From ChiyokoChan on February 13, 2011
    aww poor Naru! I totally didn't see that coming when Naruto turned out to be the ghost and not Sasuke
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  • From smint45 on February 13, 2011
    Wow that was so great!!! So sorry I missed the last 3 chappies!!! But Naruto beeing the gost!!!! I really didn't expect that!!!! I really hope that they will be able to have a realtionship still!!! I don't want them to seperate!!! Naruto really deserves happienass after the crappy life he had!!! I really hope that you will update soon!!! See you!!!
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  • From angelsdelight on February 12, 2011
    Why in the name of all things holy would you stop there?!?!?!?!?!?! That is very evil my dear and big, black kitty is hissing at you. I need more!
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  • From smint45 on January 03, 2011
    This story is great!!!! I totally love the gost Sasuke!!!! And now Naruto confessed to him and dosen't even know that!!! I wonder how they will get together!!! I want to know more about Sasuke!!! Please update soon!!!
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  • From loveusender on December 16, 2010
    Naruto throwing up on Sasuke? seriously gross! haha! But I really liked this update and the part with naruto writing about shika and ino was funny..
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 14, 2010
    OMG how funny!!! Poor Sasuke....Naruto you little shit!!! I can't believe he did that, if Sasuke forgives him for puking all over him....you know it's love!!!
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  • From meowkuu2 on December 14, 2010
    OMG!!!! he threw up on him!! EEEEEEEEWWWWWWWWWWW!!!! LOL!! Ohhh I hope you update again real soon, I only just started this fic out of curiosity now I want to know what's in the attic, why sasuke can't leave and if he ad naruto are gonna get together mew!!!
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  • From AnimeAngelSisters on November 12, 2010
    Asside from some grammer errors, I love this fic! Can't wait for more!
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  • From on October 15, 2010
    Lol. No offense here. I really like this so far. Im curious about how Sasuke died and why. And if there's a specific reason that Naruto's able to see or touch him. :> Hope to see some more updates. Other than some typos and wierd (or missing) punctuation, it's purrrfect. ^^
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  • From Dragon7 on October 02, 2010
    Wow. This sounds very promising! I look forward to your next update!!
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