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Reviews for The difference she made

By : fenris187
  • From Gemini-Spark on October 25, 2014
    this story is good please continue
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  • From nerfherder696 on December 06, 2013
    Pretty consistent value for your time in reading. Good work on the character development and thank you for getting rid of the loudmouth!
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  • From ANON - tim on April 08, 2012
    i have been loving this story ever since you posted it on fanfiction.net, and im woundering if you stoped writing on this story since you havent posted anything for awile. i hope you are still planning to continue this story.
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  • From benrevell on July 08, 2011
    very goot story so far hope u update soon
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  • From Nescafevh on February 05, 2011
    I've come to realize something lately, why Naruto can do the kage and not the simple one. Think about it, his chakra, thanks to the fox, is too damn strong no matter what he tries. So the simple one will always end up overloaded. However unlike the other one the kage isn't a simple illusion. The Kage does one thing the other doesn't. Because the kage isn't an illusion it actually splits the uses chakra amongst the clones and users, say he uses one clone it's split in half, three in thirds and so on. So by using multiple clones Naruto can more easily even out his chakra and not only control it but weaken the overpower. Huh, never considered it that way before.
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  • From Mandalore on February 04, 2011
    great story so far hope that you continue it
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  • From AkariTenshi on September 24, 2010
    Keep up the great work! Oh, and please update soon! I was so happy to see that Sasuke wasn't gonna be a power hungry bastard in this fic!
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  • From ANON - Guardian of Destruction on September 23, 2010
    This is a very good story. Another reviewer complained that you made Naruto and Sasuke be Danzo's perfect example of Ninja, which is true, except that you have shown that while they have this stone-cold work persona, they are still human outside of when on missions, so ignore the earlier review stating such. I think that this makes this story one of the better ones out there. You have taken the Naruto universe and actually made them be ninja and not flashy warriors and I have to say that you have done it very well. Keep up the excellent work and I can not wait for more.

    ~GoD
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  • From ANON - A fan on September 22, 2010
    Love the story hope you continue with it
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  • From ANON - Viraqua on September 19, 2010
    Your story went from pretty cool to totally appalling. You essentially made Naruto and Sasuke in Danzo's ideal of a ninja. So I'm stopping at chapter 9 and not coming back.
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  • From ANON - Fan on September 17, 2010
    Hey keep up the good work, I really enjoy the story so far!
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  • From bloodshound on September 15, 2010
    so far super good stuffs. looks forward to the next up date.
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  • From ANON - a true fan on September 14, 2010
    good story! keep it up! its got a great storyline developement, some sex but not so much as to overwhelm the reader. please add more and dont give up just because im the only review =)
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