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Reviews for Fine Lines

By : yolotengo
  • From ANON - cynaga on October 16, 2010
    Heading towards a threesome? Nasty way for Sasuke to inititate...
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  • From shirokitsune25 on October 16, 2010
    great chapter! pretty hot too! >8D hopefully you'll update soon! XD
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  • From bloodshound on October 16, 2010
    anything to get nii sans attention huh
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 22, 2010
    love this chapter and im really looking forward to the next one to come out. are you planing on making this mpreg by the way? it would make things alot more difficult for itachi & naruto. so until then ja ne.
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  • From ANON - saya_kye420 on September 13, 2010
    are you planing on putting this story on fanfic?
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  • From ANON - saya_kye420 on September 11, 2010
    this is a great story and im really looking forward the next chapter to come out. so until then ja ne.
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  • From ANON - Kirai on September 10, 2010
    I am so hot and turned on, even without the instant sex in the first chapters this story is such a turn-on. I love so much about this story it is hard to try and think of how to put my thoughts into words for you. I love so much it is hard to start with just one. Well I will start with Sasuke-kuns jelouscy, such alittle sibling thing to be when you see your older sibling more happy then yourself. And the line from after when Itachi-san told his lil bro, "and watch your language" Made me laugh. I loved how they respod to each other. I also really enjoyed how even if Itachi was irked with Naruto he still got to keep himself in-check till Naruto opened up to him. Thank you so much and I do look forward to many new and exciting chapters.
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  • From butterflies1974 on September 10, 2010
    i love this story and I can't wait to read more about those two...they are amoung my favorite yaoi couple in all of Naruto land.
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  • From ANON - xenawp532 on September 04, 2010
    I love this story. Is there any way you can email me, to let me know when the next chapter is ready. Thanks that would be great. Tammy
    P.S. email Tammy_herndon86@yahoo.com
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  • From ANON - Miko Vampire on September 01, 2010
    I ca't wait for Itachi to tell Sasuke to shut the fuck up and to leave Naru alone or else!!!!!
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  • From tawanawelch on August 31, 2010
    Wow, how intense. I really love how loving and tender Itachi is with his young student. I really like this pairing. I used to be sooo into Sasu/Naru, but I have definitely branched out and come to really love this couple.^^
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  • From butterflies1974 on August 27, 2010
    Wow! A great Story! Thank you for something so different and so engaging. Thank you again
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