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Reviews for How You Are Crowned

By : Lykomancer
  • From DevilnBlue on October 09, 2010
    The ending definetly through me for a loop. I wanted to shake the blonde idiot and demand he play with blood for just keeping Neji as his mistress. It's bad enough that Neji has to share Naruto-kun with Sasuke... I could actually live with that... nice possible threesomes and all... but the fact that Naru-chan would also be engaged with two lovers on the side. Tsk, tsk, Uzumaki. There should be hurt feelings around for sure.

    Slightly confused at what Naruto was going to say at the end because he didn't quite say it after he trailed off. I'm pretty sure the last sentence was Neji... sort of a resigned, 'I know, made arrangements already about Hinata'. Tis sad. But otherwise the story was hot and you do have a way with words that is mesmerizing.

    Can't wait for more from you ^^
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  • From ANON - Breseis25 on September 30, 2010
    I thought about my review, and dubbed it insufficient. I love Gaara and Sasuke's characters, and I would love to see how they relate to Naruto in all of this, I want them to interact because I think you'll be able to make wonderful emotions/scenes between them. Like, each having a unique relationships with Naruto, a unique way of being around him. Yes. The latter would be amazing. And Hinata as well as Neji, their reaction to their planned wedding. Neji's reaction mostly, how he'll treat Naruto afterwards, like a traitor, like a lover, like a stranger who's turned his world into something grayer. Naruto did seem bothered by it, but that could be because of what he thinks Neji's reaction would be, or because of what he's done, which could have been his way of helping Neji receive a place that should have been his. Enough of my speculations, I've ramble long enough. Thank you, and let me know if you update!!

    -Breseis
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  • From ANON - Breseis25 on September 30, 2010
    Oh wow, after all that Neji described, after the accumulation of all his emotions, love, need, admiration, loyalty... And then he's being married off. Yes, he'll be at the head of the clan, but at what price? I wish you'd continue this, I really do. And I'm not sure if I missed it or something, but is Sasuke sexually involved with Naruto too?

    I enjoyed that part too, where Sasuke and Gaara make their thoughts on Neji and Naruto's relationship known. I don't know, something about how it was written was very capturing.

    Thanks! I enjoyed it very much

    -Breseis

    P.s. That part where Neji fixes his hair and leans on his forearm was incredibly sexy. I don't know, I pictured it for a second and I think I thought, "Holy fuck." Yeah. Awesome. And Naruto, how a possessive passionate playful Naruto is always so fun.
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  • From ANON - Kat on August 23, 2010
    First of, any author who mentions Naji, Sasuke and Naruto in the same fic can fully expect cookies form me.
    On a more serious note I loved everything about the characters interaction. Loved that Neji was never described as shorter, or slender, or submissive just because he happen to enjoy receiving. Goodness, it is such a welcome change from the compltely incorrect assumption that every sexual encounter between men has to be effectively D/s and the receiving partner is a masochistic doormat of a woman with a dick. I also thought that the sex scee itself was graphic without being too graphic, which is also a rare treat. To be honest, I am dying for a sequel or another one-shot set in the same universe. what was it I spotted about Sasuke?
    Can you be bribed into explaining and expanding on the NaruSasu(Naru) angle of thigs? Or maybe Gaara? Alternatively, I am sure I am far from the only one dying to know how Neji is going to take the news of having to marry his cousin.
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  • From nivell on August 20, 2010
    I remember reading this fic!!! But man, this must have been a long time ago! Been wondering if this was a one-shot or if we could get a continuation out of this...would be exciting to see Neji's reaction!
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  • From ANON - Tasha on August 20, 2010
    OMG! As much as I love NejixHinata this was probably the wrong move to make on Naruto's part. I just hope that Neji doesnt kill him. I cant wait to see what is going to happen next.
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  • From bloodshound on August 19, 2010
    okay that was fun... will there be more?
    *peers at u hopefully.
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  • From ANON - tawanawelch on August 19, 2010
    Nice!! Smut in the very first chapter. It was HOT!! I liked the reference to Sasuke being a lover along with them too. I'm totally thrown as to what Naruto may be planning for his lover and can't wait to read the next chapter.
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